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cristinaaquafina101

Jan. 4, 2023

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Do you think things happen for a reason?

How many times the most silly thing has happened that hampered you to do something? and then you realize that you dodge a bullet.
I think that everybody has experienced that in their life.
I do not think the future is something written, your destinity change with your choices.

That is why sometimes my anxiety skyrockets, because I think "what if this turns up in a terrible ending". I cannot stop thinking that every step I take matters. A simple yes or no could change everything. As it has been seen throught history. That after an event everything got so different.

At the end, I am for the idea that, not everything happens for a reason, there are things that are coincidence, simply bad or good luck. Or at least that relieves a little bit more my anxiety... Sometimes.

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Do you think things happen for a reason?

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I think that everybody has experienced thatis in their lifeves.

I do not think the future is something written, y. Your destinity changes with your choices.

That is why sometimes my anxiety skyrockets, because I think, "wWhat if this turnends up in a terrible ending".y?"

I cannot stop thinking that every step I take matters.

A simple yes or no could change everything as seen throughout history.

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At the end, I am for the idea that, not everything happens for a reason, there are things that are coincidence, or simply bad or good luck.

Or aAt least that relieves a little bit moreof my anxiety ... sometimes.

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Do you think things happen for a reason?

How many times has the most silly thing has happened thato you that you become hampered you to do something?

and then you realize that you dodged a bullet.?

I think that everybody has experienced that in their life.

I do not think the future is something written,predetermined, that your destinity changes with your choices.

That is why sometimes my anxiety skyrockets, because I think "what if this turns up inout to have a terrible ending".

I cannot stop thinking that every step I take matters.

A simple yes or no could change everything.,

Aas it has been seen throughout history.,

Tthat after an event everything got so different.

At the end, I am for the idea that, not everything happens for a reason, t. There are things that arehappen by coincidence, simply bad or good luck.

Or at least that sometimes relieves a little bit more of my anxiety...

Sometimes.

¡Buen trabajo!

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cristinaaquafina101

Jan. 6, 2023

1

Muchas gracias

Do you think things happen for a reason?

How many times has the most silly thing has happened thatand hampered you to dofrom doing something?

and then you realize that you dodged a bullet.

I think that everybody has experienced that in their life.

I do not think the future is something writtendefined, your destinity changes with your choices.

That is why sometimes my anxiety skyrockets, because I think "what if this turns up inout to be a terrible ending".

I cannot stop thinking that every step I take matters.

A simple yes or no could change everything.

As it has been seen throughout history.

That after an event, everything gotbecame so different.

AtIn the end, I am ofor the idea that, not everything happens for a reason, there are things that are coincidencetal, simply bad or good luck.

Or aAt least that relieves my anxiety a little bit more my anxiety...

Ssometimes.

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cristinaaquafina101

Jan. 6, 2023

1

Thanks. I appreciate

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How many times has the most silly thing has happened thatand hampered you to dofrom doing something?

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I think that everybody has experienced that in their life.


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I think that everybody has experienced thatis in their lifeves.

I do not think the future is something written, your destinity change with your choices.


I do not think the future is something writtendefined, your destinity changes with your choices.

I do not think the future is something written,predetermined, that your destinity changes with your choices.

I do not think the future is something written, y. Your destinity changes with your choices.

That is why sometimes my anxiety skyrockets, because I think "what if this turns up in a terrible ending".


That is why sometimes my anxiety skyrockets, because I think "what if this turns up inout to be a terrible ending".

That is why sometimes my anxiety skyrockets, because I think "what if this turns up inout to have a terrible ending".

That is why sometimes my anxiety skyrockets, because I think, "wWhat if this turnends up in a terrible ending".y?"

I cannot stop thinking that every step I take matters.


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A simple yes or no could change everything.


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A simple yes or no could change everything.,

A simple yes or no could change everything as seen throughout history.

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That after an event everything got so different.


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At the end, I am for the idea that, not everything happens for a reason, there are things that are coincidence, simply bad or good luck.


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Sometimes.

¡Buen trabajo!

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