Dec. 15, 2021
About Music and School
Music is a compulsory subject in some schools. On the other hand, some schools do not prefer to include music classes in their academic curriculum. In this short essay, I am going to write about some aspects to consider in this matter.
First, there is a common belief about how music or learning to play an instrument could improve many cognitive aspects in individuals. A person with different skills or interdisciplinary qualities could be more competitive and able to think outside -the box and develop their creativity. Just to make an example, Einstein played the violin and claimed that this instrument helped him to think. There are even some academic papers and research that support theories of this kind. Not to mention that an early music discovery could be the trigger that a future musician needs to become a marvelous artist. Popular singers, like Beyonce, started their music career at a very young age.
However, there are some cons to including a compulsory music course. First, some children may not really be interested, to the point of feeling it like a waste of time, in comparison with some other more “important” subjects like mathematics, natural science, or sports. Music as a requirement could be a double-edged sword if they feel it as an academic burden.
In conclusion, there are advantages and disadvantages to including music compulsory classes. Maybe the wisest decision could be to let students explore music in their study plan. Of course, a successful music program needs good teachers and resources. A bad instructor or do not have enough instruments for all could increase the failure of any initiative.
Do you think all students should have to study music?
Music is a compulsory subject in some schools.
On the other handConversely, some schools do not prefer not to include music classes in their academic curriculum.
In this short essay, I am going to write about some aspects to consider in this matterof this matter to consider (when determining whether music should be included in a school's curriculum).
First, there is a common belief about howthat studying music or learning to play an instrument could improve many cognitive aspects in individuals.
A person with different skills or interdisciplinary qualities could be more competitive and, able to think outside -the box, and develop their creativity.
Just to makgive an example, Einstein played the violin and claimed that this instrument helped him to think.
There are even some academic papers and research that support theories of this kind.
Not to mention that an early music discovery of music(al talent) could be the trigger that a future musician needs to become a marvelous artist.
Popular singers, like Beyonce, started their music careers at a very young age.
However, there are some condisadvantages to including a compulsory music course in a school's curriculum.
It feels like you are going for a more formal presentation style here, so I would use disadvantage instead of con.
First, some children may not really be interested, to the point of feeling it like it is a waste of time,. Particularly in comparison with some other more “important” subjects like mathematics, natural science, or sports.
Music as a requirement could be a double-edged sword if they feel it ais an academic burden.
In conclusion, there are advantages and disadvantages to including music compulsory music classes in a school's curriculum.
Maybe the wisest decision cwould be to let students explore music in their study plan.
Of course, a successful music program needs good teachers and resources.
A bad instructor or do not have enoughinsufficient instruments for all cparticipants would increase the likelihood of failure of such any initiative.
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Dec. 16, 2021
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Do you think all students should have to study music? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Music is a compulsory subject in some schools. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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On the other hand, some schools do not prefer to include music classes in their academic curriculum.
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In this short essay, I am going to write about some aspects to consider in this matter. In this short essay, I am going to write about some aspects |
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First, there is a common belief about how music or learning to play an instrument could improve many cognitive aspects in individuals. First, there is a common belief |
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A person with different skills or interdisciplinary qualities could be more competitive and able to think outside -the box and develop their creativity. A person with different skills or interdisciplinary qualities could be more competitive |
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Just to make an example, Einstein played the violin and claimed that this instrument helped him to think. Just to |
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There are even some academic papers and research that support theories of this kind. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Not to mention that an early music discovery could be the trigger that a future musician needs to become a marvelous artist. Not to mention that an early |
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Popular singers, like Beyonce, started their music career at a very young age. Popular singers, like Beyonce, started their music careers at a very young age. |
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However, there are some cons to including a compulsory music course. However, there are some It feels like you are going for a more formal presentation style here, so I would use disadvantage instead of con. |
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First, some children may not really be interested, to the point of feeling it like a waste of time, in comparison with some other more “important” subjects like mathematics, natural science, or sports. First, some children may not really be interested, to the point of feeling |
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Music as a requirement could be a double-edged sword if they feel it as an academic burden. Music as a requirement could be a double-edged sword if they feel it |
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In conclusion, there are advantages and disadvantages to including music compulsory classes. In conclusion, there are advantages and disadvantages to including |
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Maybe the wisest decision could be to let students explore music in their study plan. Maybe the wisest decision |
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Of course, a successful music program needs good teachers and resources. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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A bad instructor or do not have enough instruments for all could increase the failure of any initiative. A bad instructor or |
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