Aug. 19, 2025
As a man in my 20s, I still watch animations from time to time. Not the animations for adults like Attack on Titan or South Park, but for kids, or do you call it cartoon? However, in here, old people tent to think all animations are for kids. I still remember there was this time I was caught by my granpa watching Jojo when he visited me at my house. He was surprised that I'm still watching cartoon at this age. Eh, better than dumb TikTok shorts, which they watch all day long. Anyway, my favorite cartoon is Avatar: The Last Airbend. Even though it's not popular here, I'm glad I found this one on Netflix. I watched it again and again. I even got improved my English by doing that. I think it helps that cartoon using simple, elementary words and sentences. But don't get me wrong, I watch dramas as well. Yes, ladies and gentlemen, I present you — Avatar: The Last Airbender the live-action version released in 2024 by Netflix! Kek, big fan.
Do you still watch animationed shows?
“Animations” is not natural in American English - you have to pair it with a noun like “cartoons” or “T.V. shows.”
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I don’t have much to add to the corrections already made. But I wanted to say that as a man in my 40s I still watch 小猪佩奇 to practice Chinese!
Do you still watch animations?
As a man in my 20s, I still watch animations from time to time.
Not the animaticartoons for adults like Attack on Titan or South Park, but for kids, or do you call it cartoon?.
yes cartoons (卡通)
However, in herwhere I live, old people tentd to think all animaticartoons are for kids.
idk where u live so u can put that if u dont want to reveal ur location
otherwise u can say "in china" "in taiwan" etc
I still remember there was this time I was caught by my granpamy grandpa caught me watching Jojo when he visited me at my house.
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HGiven my age, he was surprised by the fact that I'm still watching cartoon at this ages.
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Eh, better than scrolling on dumb TikTok shortvideos, which they watch all day long.
they = ur grandpa?
or they = other people?
Anyway, my favorite cartoon is "Avatar: The Last Airbend.er"
Even though it's not popular here, I'm glad I found this one on Netflix.
u live in taiwan? netflix is blocked in mainland china
I watched it again and again.
I even got improved my English by doing thacontinuously watching it.
I think it helps that the cartoon is using simple, elementary words and sentences.
u can watch native level content if u learn like 20-28 words a day, but obv this isnt for everyone
But don't get me wrong, I watch dramas as well.
Yes, ladies and gentlemen, I present you — Avatar: The Last Airbender, the live-action version released in 2024 by Netflix!
Kek, big fan.
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Do you still watch animations?
As a man in my 20s, I still watch animations from time to time.
Not the animations for adults like Attack on Titan or South Park, but for kids, or (do you call ithem cartoon?s?)
“Animations” is plural, so “them” instead of “it”.
To answer your question, I actually needed to do a little research, but cartoons and animations differ in their appearance and occasionally their message, more so than their audience. Before doing any research though, I thought of cartoons as being the ones that are more intended for kids (and I think that is still true to an extent, because they are typically simpler in style and more for entertainment than for a really deep and meaningful message)
However, in here, old people tentd to think all animations are for kids.
I still remember there was this time I was caught by my grandpa watching JojJo when he visited me at my house.
He was surprised that I'm still watching cartoons at this age.
Cartoons in general (rather than one specific cartoon), so it’s plural.
Eh, better than dumb TikTok shorts, which theypeople watch all day long.
Shorts is used more with YouTube, and reels with platforms like Instagram and Facebook
You need to specify who “they” is, because the last person you referred to who it could possibly refer to is your grandpa, but that’s only a singular person (so it would be “he”)
Anyway, my favorite cartoon is “Avatar: The Last Airbender”.
Even though it's not popular here, I'm glad I found this one on Netflix.
It might be better to specify what you mean by “here” - do you mean on LangCorrect, or in your country?
Talking about “Netflix” later in the sentence made me think of LangCorrect initially because they’re more similar in that they’re both kind of platforms. However that doesn’t really make the most sense because with that meaning, the two clauses don’t feel particularly connected, so I’m assuming you meant your country, for which you could say “even though it’s not popular where I live”.
I watched it again and again.
I even got improved my English by doing that.
“Got improved” would mean that the thing before it was improved (you in this case because of “I”)
Alternatively you could also say “My English was even improved by doing that”.
You could also change “by doing that” to “in doing so”, but this is optional.
I think it helps that cartoons usinge simple, elementary words and sentences.
If you wanted to say “using”, you’d have to use “are” as well (so “cartoons are using”), but that doesn’t sound right in this case.
But don't get me wrong, I watch dramas as well.
Yes, ladies and gentlemen, I present to you — the live action “Avatar: The Last Airbender the live-action version” released in 2024 by Netflix!
You could also say “I present you with”
My other changes were more for clarity.
KekLol, big fan.
Personally, I see lol more often (but “kek” could still be ok - I think it depends more on who you’re talking to)
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Good job!
From a language learning perspective, I’d say that for a beginner it’s definitely good to watch cartoons, but as you get more proficient in the language, it’s good to consider that the language might differ from what you would hear in real life because it’s more simplified.
But even just in general, sometimes it’s nice to watch cartoons because they’re so much more lighthearted (and they can be fun to watch because of the nostalgia if it’s something you watched while growing up)
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Not the animations for adults like Attack on Titan or South Park, but for kids, or do you call it cartoon? Not the animations for adults like Attack on Titan or South Park, but for kids “Animations” is plural, so “them” instead of “it”. To answer your question, I actually needed to do a little research, but cartoons and animations differ in their appearance and occasionally their message, more so than their audience. Before doing any research though, I thought of cartoons as being the ones that are more intended for kids (and I think that is still true to an extent, because they are typically simpler in style and more for entertainment than for a really deep and meaningful message) Not the yes cartoons (卡通) |
However, in here, old people tent to think all animations are for kids. However, in here, old people ten However, idk where u live so u can put that if u dont want to reveal ur location otherwise u can say "in china" "in taiwan" etc |
I still remember there was this time I was caught by my granpa watching Jojo when he visited me at my house. I still remember there was this time I was caught by my grandpa watching Jo I still remember simplified |
He was surprised that I'm still watching cartoon at this age. He was surprised that I'm still watching cartoons at this age. Cartoons in general (rather than one specific cartoon), so it’s plural.
structural change |
Eh, better than dumb TikTok shorts, which they watch all day long. Eh, better than dumb TikTok Shorts is used more with YouTube, and reels with platforms like Instagram and Facebook You need to specify who “they” is, because the last person you referred to who it could possibly refer to is your grandpa, but that’s only a singular person (so it would be “he”) Eh, better than scrolling on dumb TikTok they = ur grandpa? or they = other people? |
Anyway, my favorite cartoon is Avatar: The Last Airbend. Anyway, my favorite cartoon is “Avatar: The Last Airbender”. Anyway, my favorite cartoon is "Avatar: The Last Airbend |
Even though it's not popular here, I'm glad I found this one on Netflix. Even though it's not popular here, I'm glad I found this one on Netflix. It might be better to specify what you mean by “here” - do you mean on LangCorrect, or in your country? Talking about “Netflix” later in the sentence made me think of LangCorrect initially because they’re more similar in that they’re both kind of platforms. However that doesn’t really make the most sense because with that meaning, the two clauses don’t feel particularly connected, so I’m assuming you meant your country, for which you could say “even though it’s not popular where I live”. Even though it's not popular here, I'm glad I found this u live in taiwan? netflix is blocked in mainland china |
Kek, big fan.
Personally, I see lol more often (but “kek” could still be ok - I think it depends more on who you’re talking to) This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I even got improved my English by doing that. I even “Got improved” would mean that the thing before it was improved (you in this case because of “I”) Alternatively you could also say “My English was even improved by doing that”. You could also change “by doing that” to “in doing so”, but this is optional. I even |
I think it helps that cartoon using simple, elementary words and sentences. I think it helps that cartoons us If you wanted to say “using”, you’d have to use “are” as well (so “cartoons are using”), but that doesn’t sound right in this case. I think it helps that the cartoon is using simple, elementary words and sentences. u can watch native level content if u learn like 20-28 words a day, but obv this isnt for everyone |
But don't get me wrong, I watch dramas as well. This sentence has been marked as perfect! But don't get me wrong, I watch dramas as well. |
Yes, ladies and gentlemen, I present you — Avatar: The Last Airbender the live-action version released in 2024 by Netflix! Yes, ladies and gentlemen, I present to you — the live action “Avatar: The Last Airbender You could also say “I present you with” My other changes were more for clarity. Yes, ladies and gentlemen, I present you — Avatar: The Last Airbender, the live-action version released in 2024 by Netflix! |
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