Feb. 28, 2022
Do you remember the first novel you ever read?
I do remember the first novel I read.
It was called "Keritai Senaka". I think that was the first novel for adults that I read. I was 10 or 11 at that time.
That book is about a teenager who struggles with something.
I can't remember any other story about the book.
I even forget about the book I read a couple of weeks ago. So it's no wonder I forget about the book I read 10 years ago.
Do you remember the first novel you ever read?
Alt: Do you remember the first novel that you've ever read?
I do remember the first novel I read.
Alt: I do remember the first novel that I've read.
It was called "Keritai Senaka".
I think that was the first novel written for adults that I've read.
Clarified meaning.
I was 10 or 11 at that time.
That book is about a teenager who struggles with something.
Alt: That book is about a teenager who is struggling with something.
I can't remember any other storydetails about the book.
Alt: I can't remember any other details about the plot.
I even forgetThat said, I have already forgotten about the book I read a couple of weeks ago.
Alt: That said, I have already forgotten most of the details from the book I finished a couple of weeks ago.
Transition words like "that said" make the change in thought less abrupt.
So it's no wonder I forgeot about the book I read 10 years ago.
Alt: So it's no wonder I forgot about the book I read more than 10 years ago.
March 1, 2022
Thank you!
Do you remember the first novel you ever read?
I do remember the first novel I read.
It was called "Keritai Senaka".
I think that was the first novel for adults that I read.
I was 10 or 11 at that time.
Thate book is about a teenager who struggles with something.
"The" sounds more natural here in this sentence. No worries though.
I can't remember any other storydetails about the book.
"Other stories about the book" would be stories people tell about the book. Stories surrounding the book (not contained inside the book).
I even forgeot about the book I read a couple of weeks ago.
So it's no wonder I forgeot about the book I read 10 years ago.
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The first "adult" book I ever read was Asimov's Foundation, when I was about 12, twenty years ago.
The first book I actually read was a Brian Jacques Redwall novel, but I can't remember which one... probably when I was about 8.
March 1, 2022
Maybe the first "adult" book is memorable for most people.
Thank you for correcting my text.
Considering my English skill, I will read the Brian Jacques Redwall novel first.
March 1, 2022
If you're looking for a recommendation, I'd say you should try MOONFLEET.
You can download it for free from Project Gutenberg!
https://www.gutenberg.org/ebooks/10743
And it seems there's even a free audio book here:
https://librivox.org/search?title=Moonfleet&author=FALKNER&reader=&keywords=&genre_id=0&status=all&project_type=either&recorded_language=&sort_order=catalog_date&search_page=1&search_form=advanced
So you can listen and read at the same time maybe. I definitely recommend this novel - it's a classic children's story, which is way cooler than Treasure Island, but still has pirates/smugglers etc.
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It is called "Keritai Senaka". |
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That book is about a teenager who struggles with something. Th "The" sounds more natural here in this sentence. No worries though. That book is about a teenager who struggles with something. Alt: That book is about a teenager who is struggling with something. |
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I can't remember any other story about the book. I can't remember any other "Other stories about the book" would be stories people tell about the book. Stories surrounding the book (not contained inside the book). I can't remember any other Alt: I can't remember any other details about the plot. |
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I even forget about the book I read a couple of weeks ago. I even forg
Alt: That said, I have already forgotten most of the details from the book I finished a couple of weeks ago. Transition words like "that said" make the change in thought less abrupt. |
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So it's no wonder I forget about the book I read 10 years ago. So it's no wonder I forg So it's no wonder I forg Alt: So it's no wonder I forgot about the book I read more than 10 years ago. |
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