Oct. 12, 2024
Do you once visit a stranger's house?
I am a kind of person a bit introverted. So, most of my friends who knew me well could not believe that I could visit a stranger's house.
It's interesting that a few months ago. I met an old man from Indonesia who is really a social butterfly. He invited me to visit strangers' houses, and just talk with them. He is so energetic and write down many stranger's phone numbers, most of them met in church. First, he asks for their address and phone number politely. One or two times later, he would suggest visiting their house and asking for free talking, some of the strangers would agree with him. After that, he would ask me go with him if the stranger permits. Finally, we talked about everything freely at their house. Generally, we will bring some small gifts with us, and the host will prepare a small plate of cookies and tea on the table.
It's fantastic to group a quiet and outgoing individual.
DoHave you onceever visited a stranger's house?
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I met an old man from Indonesia who is reallyvery much a social butterfly.
Social butterfly is a real term, but it is rather slangy and somewhat unusual.
He invited me to visit strangers' houses, and just talk with them.
He is sovery energetic and tends to write down many stranger's phone numbers, most of them whom he met in church.
First, he asks for their address and phone number politely.
One or two times laterThen, he would suggest visiting their house and asking for free talking,chatting, and some of the strangers would agree with him.
“One or two times later” is not correct, but if you really wanted to say it happened after a couple more meetings, you could say “on the third meeting”. However, you did not mention that they were meeting in the previous sentence. You only said that he asked them for their address and phone number.
After that, he would ask me to go with him if the stranger permits it.
Finally, we talked about everything freeopenly at their house.
”To talk openly” is to talk without constricting oneself, but “to talk freely” is incorrect.
Generally, we will bring some small gifts with us, and the host will prepare a small plate of cookies and tea on the table.
It's a fantastic to groupidea to combine a quiet and outgoing individual.
Oct. 12, 2024
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Do you once visit a stranger's house?
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I am a kind of person a bit introverted. I am a kind of person who’s a bit introverted. |
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So, most of my friends who knew me well could not believe that I could visit a stranger's house. |
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It's interesting that a few months ago.
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I met an old man from Indonesia who is really a social butterfly. I Social butterfly is a real term, but it is rather slangy and somewhat unusual. |
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He invited me to visit strangers' houses, and just talk with them. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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He is so energetic and write down many stranger's phone numbers, most of them met in church. He is |
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First, he asks for their address and phone number politely. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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One or two times later, he would suggest visiting their house and asking for free talking, some of the strangers would agree with him.
“One or two times later” is not correct, but if you really wanted to say it happened after a couple more meetings, you could say “on the third meeting”. However, you did not mention that they were meeting in the previous sentence. You only said that he asked them for their address and phone number. |
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After that, he would ask me go with him if the stranger permits. After that, he would |
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Finally, we talked about everything freely at their house. Finally, we talked about everything ”To talk openly” is to talk without constricting oneself, but “to talk freely” is incorrect. |
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Generally, we will bring some small gifts with us, and the host will prepare a small plate of cookies and tea on the table. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It's fantastic to group a quiet and outgoing individual. It's a fantastic |
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