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TOMO_o

May 20, 2025

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Do you like your hair paermed or straight?

I prefer my hair straight and short. Perming my hair takes too much time and cost and might damage my hair. I've never done perming my hair, let alone coloring it. I love simple and natural!

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Do you like your hair paermed or straight?

I prefer my hair straight and short.

Perming my hair takes too much time and costmoney, and might damage my hair.

I've never done perminged my hair before, let alone coloringed it.

You can also say 'dyed' it or 'gotten it colored.' I think 'coloring' hair implies dying it another natural color, like brown or black.

I love simple and natural!

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My hair is naturally curly so I've never gotten a perm. I don't straighten it because I don't like to use heat on my hair.

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TOMO_o

May 20, 2025

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Thank you very much for the careful correction.

Do you like your hair paermed or straight?

I prefer to keep my hair straight and short.

Perming my hair takes too much time and, is costly, and mightay cause damage to my hair.

I've never done perminghad my hair permed, let alone coloringed it.

I love simple and natural!

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TOMO_o

May 20, 2025

6

Thank you for the careful correction.

Do you like your hair paermed or straight?

Perming my hair takes too much time and costmoney and might damage my hair.

You could also say "takes too much time and is too costly" which feels more polite. You could also say "Perming my hair would take too much time", since you mention later you have not permed your hair before.

I've never done perminged my hair, let alone coloringed it.

Could also say "I've never permed my hair before".

People often talk about "dyeing" their hair when colouring it, so you could also say "let alone dyed it".

I love it simple and natural!

If you are referring to the previous sentence, it feels more natural to include "it" here (the "it" being your hair), but otherwise you don't need to include it.

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I have not permed or coloured/dyed my hair either! My hair is long but I also prefer it simple and natural :)

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TOMO_o

May 20, 2025

6

Thank you very much for your careful corrections. Your detailed explanation really helps me understand.

Do you like your hair paermed or straight?

I prefer my hair straight and short.

Perming my hair takes too much time and, is too costly, and might damage my hair.

I've never donetried perming my hair, let alone coloring it.

I love simple and natural!

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TOMO_o

May 20, 2025

6

Thank you for the careful correction.

Do you like your hair paermed or straight?


Do you like your hair paermed or straight?

Do you like your hair paermed or straight?

Do you like your hair paermed or straight?

Do you like your hair paermed or straight?

I prefer my hair straight and short.


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I prefer to keep my hair straight and short.

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Perming my hair takes too much time and cost and might damage my hair.


Perming my hair takes too much time and, is too costly, and might damage my hair.

Perming my hair takes too much time and costmoney and might damage my hair.

You could also say "takes too much time and is too costly" which feels more polite. You could also say "Perming my hair would take too much time", since you mention later you have not permed your hair before.

Perming my hair takes too much time and, is costly, and mightay cause damage to my hair.

Perming my hair takes too much time and costmoney, and might damage my hair.

I've never done perming my hair, let alone coloring it.


I've never donetried perming my hair, let alone coloring it.

I've never done perminged my hair, let alone coloringed it.

Could also say "I've never permed my hair before". People often talk about "dyeing" their hair when colouring it, so you could also say "let alone dyed it".

I've never done perminghad my hair permed, let alone coloringed it.

I've never done perminged my hair before, let alone coloringed it.

You can also say 'dyed' it or 'gotten it colored.' I think 'coloring' hair implies dying it another natural color, like brown or black.

I love simple and natural!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I love it simple and natural!

If you are referring to the previous sentence, it feels more natural to include "it" here (the "it" being your hair), but otherwise you don't need to include it.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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