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I struggled to find a way to word this that sounds natural. I would check with other correctors to see what they come up with as well.

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Nothing grammatically wrong here, but "Don't get me wrong" should come from a concession. For example: "Don't get me wrong, I still love dogs, but cats just have so much character."

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The meaning is a little unclear here. Nothing grammatically wrong though

Inevitably, kids will learn indirectly a distorted thoughts about racism, sex, religion, etc.

I am not saying the entire system does not work, but I would say that if one could pay for private schooling I would say, it would likely be more beneficial.

You don't need to add "I would say" any more than once here.

Imagine learning about financinges from an early age, about taxes, entrepreneurship and even nutrition.

Not wrong, but I think you mean "finances". Financing is a term we use to refer to obtaining a loan. "Finances" is more broad.

The system does not provide or go deeper on these subjects, t. They know what they are doing.

There isare more factreasons why I do not agree with it than reasons I do.

Use "are" for plural nouns

Specially nowadays, it feels like the very education system is trying to impose on kids other values and principles.

These values and perspectives taught about society and its way to develop isare being presented the way they want it to be.

I know that parents are the ones in charge tof educateing about all matters in a household, but you are going to learn other topics and subjects in school.

Inevitably, kids learn indirectly a distorted thoughts about racism, sex, religion, etc.

"a" is not used for plural nouns
missing comma

I do believe the government serves an agenda every time they implement something "innovative" in the system that is has nothing to do with conservativenes values.

The system does not provide or go deeper on these subjects, they know what they are doing.

use "does" for singular nouns

There is more facts whythat I do not agree with it than I do.

"facts" would be the incorrect term here, as "facts" refers to data, things that can be proven. In this case, "opinion" is the better term.

SEspecially nowadays it feels like the very education system is trying to impose on to kids other values and principles.

These values and perspectives taught about society and its way to develop is being presented thein a way they want it to be.

Inevitably, kids learn indirectly alearn distorted thoughts about racism, sex, religion etc.

As "thoughts" is plural, you do not need the "a". "a" is only for singular (one item).

Information is offered partially offered.

I do believe the government serves an agenda everytime they implement something "innovative" in the system that is has nothing to do with conservativeness.

However, the positive part about the system is that people learn the basics about some topics and at least we learn to read, to count, to socialize and to discern.

When writing a list, to use the same format each time. For example: TO read, TO count, TO socialize and TO discern. Or readING, countING, socializING and discernING.

I am not saying the entire system does not work, but I would say that if one could pay for private schooling I would say it would likely be more beneficial.

As you have already indicated "I would say", you do not need to repeat it again within the same sentence.