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TOMO_o

July 6, 2025

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Do you like tha shape of your hands?

Overall I think my hands are great. I was going to piano school for ten years when I was young, so my fingers got to be long, thin, and muscular. People often praise my fingers. It's my one of the few parts I'm proud of myself.

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Do you like thae shape of your hands?

Overall, I think my hands are great.

I was goingent to piano school for ten years when I was young, so my fingers got to be long, thin, and muscular.

It's my one of the few parts of my body that I'm proud of myself.

I hope you're proud of parts of yourself that aren't physical, too! Assuming this to be the case, I changed this sentence to refer to body parts, specifically.

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Good work! My hands are pretty big and masculine for a woman, because I'm just over 6 feet tall. I don't mind them, though. I like that they fulfill their purpose.

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TOMO_o

July 7, 2025

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Thank you very much for your careful correction.
You've written the reasons why this correction was better, which really helps me understand.

Do you like thae shape of your hands?

I was goingent to piano school for ten years when I was young, so my fingers got to be long, thin, and muscular.

"I was going" sort of implies you're going to be telling a story in the past, but since you're talking about the current state of your fingers, it's better to just talk about the event in simple past tense.

It's my one of the few parts of myself I'm proud of myself.

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TOMO_o

July 7, 2025

56

Thank you very much for your careful correction.
You've written the reasons why this correction was better, which really helps me understand.

Do you like thae shape of your hands?

Overall, I think my hands are great.

I was goingent to piano school for ten years when I was younger, so my fingers got to bbecame long, thin, and muscular.

People often praisadmire my fingers.

Both work, I just feel like "admire" sounds more natural

It's my one of the few parts of myself that I'm proud of myself.

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Amazing job - keep up the great English!

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TOMO_o

July 7, 2025

56

Thank you very much for your careful correction.
You've written the reasons why this correction was better, which really helps me understand.

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JustMarmite

July 7, 2025

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I'm glad you found it helpful

Do you like thae shape of your hands?

Overall I think my hands are great.

I was goingent to piano school for ten years when I was young, and so my fingers got to be long, thin, and muscular.

Mostly good here. I've just made some changes to make it sound more natural.

People often praise my fingers.

It's my one of the few partsthings about my body that I'm proud of myself.

"It's one of the few (body )parts I'm proud of" is TECHNICALLY correct but doesn't sound quite right in English. I think it's because it's unusual for people to talk emotively about their "parts"/"body parts" -- it's more of a scientific term.
E.g. "The body parts of males are different to those of females"

Also, "parts" is often used as shorthand for someone's "private parts" haha - so I would generally avoid using "parts" on its own.

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Good job!

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TOMO_o

July 7, 2025

56

Thank you very much for your careful correction.
You've written the reasons why this correction was better, which really helps me understand.

Do you like tha shape of your hands?

Overall I think my hands arelook great.

I was goinghad gone to piano school for ten years when I was young, so my fingers got to be long, thin, and muscular.

People often praise my fingers.

It's my one of the few parts of myself that I'm proud of myself.

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Well done!

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TOMO_o

July 7, 2025

56

Thank you very much for the careful correction.

It's my one of the few parts I'm proud of myself.


It's my one of the few parts of myself that I'm proud of myself.

It's my one of the few parts of myself that I'm proud of myself.

It's my one of the few partsthings about my body that I'm proud of myself.

"It's one of the few (body )parts I'm proud of" is TECHNICALLY correct but doesn't sound quite right in English. I think it's because it's unusual for people to talk emotively about their "parts"/"body parts" -- it's more of a scientific term. E.g. "The body parts of males are different to those of females" Also, "parts" is often used as shorthand for someone's "private parts" haha - so I would generally avoid using "parts" on its own.

It's my one of the few parts of myself I'm proud of myself.

It's my one of the few parts of my body that I'm proud of myself.

I hope you're proud of parts of yourself that aren't physical, too! Assuming this to be the case, I changed this sentence to refer to body parts, specifically.

Do you like tha shape of your hands?


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Do you like thae shape of your hands?

Do you like thae shape of your hands?

Do you like thae shape of your hands?

Do you like thae shape of your hands?

Overall I think my hands are great.


Overall I think my hands arelook great.

Overall, I think my hands are great.

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Overall, I think my hands are great.

I was going to piano school for ten years when I was young, so my fingers got to be long, thin, and muscular.


I was goinghad gone to piano school for ten years when I was young, so my fingers got to be long, thin, and muscular.

I was goingent to piano school for ten years when I was younger, so my fingers got to bbecame long, thin, and muscular.

I was goingent to piano school for ten years when I was young, and so my fingers got to be long, thin, and muscular.

Mostly good here. I've just made some changes to make it sound more natural.

I was goingent to piano school for ten years when I was young, so my fingers got to be long, thin, and muscular.

"I was going" sort of implies you're going to be telling a story in the past, but since you're talking about the current state of your fingers, it's better to just talk about the event in simple past tense.

I was goingent to piano school for ten years when I was young, so my fingers got to be long, thin, and muscular.

People often praise my fingers.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

People often praisadmire my fingers.

Both work, I just feel like "admire" sounds more natural

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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