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I love looking at the moon. I think noting in particular while I look, but that peaceful time in the moonlight make my mind calm. Then, I can go to sleep well. By the way, does NASA's project which the human being stands on the moon progress? I want to see that one day.
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I love looking at the moon.
I think about nothing in particular while I look (at it), but that peaceful time in the moonlight makes my mind calm.
Then, I can go to sleep welland sleep well/peacefully.
By the way, doeis NASA's project which theinvolves a human being standsing on the moon progressing?
I want to see that one day.
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I like looking at the moon, and walking or skiing under the moonlight, too.
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I love looking at the moon.
I think about nothing in particular while I look, but that peaceful time in the moonlight makes my mind calm.
Then, I can go toAfterwords, I sleep well.
"Then" isn't wrong per se, but "afterwords" would fit the context of your text much better
By the way, doeis NASA's project which the human being stands on the moon progressmoon landing project still ongoing?
"By the way" is used when speaking to someone, but the rest of your text feels like an internal dialogue and almost poetic. I'd rather use something like "I wonder if NASA's moon landing project is still ongoing" to continue with that feeling.
I want to see that one day.
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Great job! :)
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I think noting in particular while I look, but that peaceful time in the moonlight make my mind calm. I think about nothing in particular while I look, but that peaceful time in the moonlight makes my mind calm. I think about nothing in particular while I look (at it), but that peaceful time in the moonlight makes my mind calm. |
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Then, I can go to sleep well.
"Then" isn't wrong per se, but "afterwords" would fit the context of your text much better Then, I can go to sleep |
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By the way, does NASA's project which the human being stands on the moon progress? By the way, "By the way" is used when speaking to someone, but the rest of your text feels like an internal dialogue and almost poetic. I'd rather use something like "I wonder if NASA's moon landing project is still ongoing" to continue with that feeling. By the way, |
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