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johnnymnemonic

Aug. 11, 2025

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Do you like listening to music?

My father is a huge fan of music. He chose thoroughly music for his mood. Perhaps, the taste for music that he gave me create my vision of life. He is Electric Light Orchestra and Pink Floyd fan. The songs of those musical groups inspired me to learn about space and stars. I'm couldn't rid of the temptation to take a drive on a mountain pick at night, and looking on the sky full of stars and galaxies. Does anyone feel something similar while listening to music?

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Do you like listening to music?

My father is a huge fan of music.

He chose thoroughly music formusic according to his mood.

Perhaps, the taste for music that he gave me create my vision ofhis music taste has greatly influenced my life.

He is a fan of Electric Light Orchestra and Pink Floyd fan.

The songs of those musical groupartists inspired me to learn about space and stars.

I'm couldn't get rid of the temptation to take a drive on a mountain pick at night, and to looking on at the sky full of stars and galaxies.

Does anyone feel something similar while listening to music?

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johnnymnemonic

Aug. 11, 2025

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Thanks a lot! "His music taste has greatly influenced my life" - good phrase. I like it/

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learningismypassion

Aug. 11, 2025

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You're welcome.

Do you like listening to music?

My father is a huge fan of music.

He chose thoroughly music forchose music to match his mood.

Perhaps, the taste for music that he gave me created my vision of life.

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He is an Electric Light Orchestra and Pink Floyd fan.

/ He is a fan of ELO and Pink Floyd.

The songs of those musical groups inspired me to learn about space and stars.

I'm couldn't get rid of the temptation to take a drive on a mountain piceak at night, and looking onat the sky full of stars and galaxies.

to get rid of something

Does anyone feel something similar while listening to music?

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I agree, listening to music can feel really magical!
Good job

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johnnymnemonic

Aug. 11, 2025

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Thank you very much! Your comments really help me.

Do you like listening to music?


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My father is a huge fan of music.


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He chose thoroughly music for his mood.


He chose thoroughly music forchose music to match his mood.

He chose thoroughly music formusic according to his mood.

Perhaps, the taste for music that he gave me create my vision of life.


Perhaps, the taste for music that he gave me created my vision of life.

very few commas in English

Perhaps, the taste for music that he gave me create my vision ofhis music taste has greatly influenced my life.

He is Electric Light Orchestra and Pink Floyd fan.


He is an Electric Light Orchestra and Pink Floyd fan.

/ He is a fan of ELO and Pink Floyd.

He is a fan of Electric Light Orchestra and Pink Floyd fan.

The songs of those musical groups inspired me to learn about space and stars.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The songs of those musical groupartists inspired me to learn about space and stars.

I'm couldn't rid of the temptation to take a drive on a mountain pick at night, and looking on the sky full of stars and galaxies.


I'm couldn't get rid of the temptation to take a drive on a mountain piceak at night, and looking onat the sky full of stars and galaxies.

to get rid of something

I'm couldn't get rid of the temptation to take a drive on a mountain pick at night, and to looking on at the sky full of stars and galaxies.

Does anyone feel something similar while listening to music?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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