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Do you like adventures?

I love adventures. I often go wandering around near my house and play video games to be excited in a brand new world. One day, I want to go to Italy to enjoy an authentic espresso, but I have a lot to do now in Japan. Maybe I’ll go there years later.

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Maybe I’ll go there years later[ ].

The phrase "years later" is usually used to refer to an event in the past.
For an event in the future, it is much more common to use "some day" or "in the future."
If you wanted to include the word "years," then "in the coming years" would work, but I don't like placing the opposite words "go" and "coming" so close together in your sentence because it feels like a change of direction.

Do you like adventures?

I love adventures.

I often go wandering around near my house and play video games to be excited in a brand new world.

One day, I want to go to Italy to enjoy an authentic espresso, but I have a lot to do now in Japan.

Maybe I’ll go there years later.

The sentence is correct. Another way to write this sentence: "Maybe I'll go there sometime a few years down the line."

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Excellent writing on this post! Hope you can enjoy an espresso in Italy one day!

Do you like adventures?


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I love adventures.


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I often go wandering around near my house and play video games to be excited in a brand new world.


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One day, I want to go to Italy to enjoy an authentic espresso, but I have a lot to do now in Japan.


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Maybe I’ll go there years later.


Maybe I’ll go there years later.

The sentence is correct. Another way to write this sentence: "Maybe I'll go there sometime a few years down the line."

Maybe I’ll go there years later[ ].

The phrase "years later" is usually used to refer to an event in the past. For an event in the future, it is much more common to use "some day" or "in the future." If you wanted to include the word "years," then "in the coming years" would work, but I don't like placing the opposite words "go" and "coming" so close together in your sentence because it feels like a change of direction.

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