May 4, 2025
Do you have someone you could call your best friend?
Unfortunately, I don't have anyone, if anything, I have no one who called as a friend. At the past, I had mental sick and couldn't contact with anyone. After becoming an adult, it is very hard to make new friends.
Do you have someone you could call your best friend?
Unfortunately, I don't have anyone, i. If anything, I have no one who called as a friend.
At the past, I had mental sickillness and couldn't contact with anyone.
After becoming an adult, it is very hard to make new friends.
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It is indeed very hard to make new friends as an adult. When I was sick, my family was ignoring me, but my friend from another city called me everyday to check on me. This person is now my best friend.
May 5, 2025
Thank you for the careful correction.
Unfortunately, I don't have anyone, if anything, I have no one who called as I’d call a friend.
The if anything is correct English and spelt correctly but it’s simpler and reads better to say you don’t have anyone to call a friend
At the past, I hadwas mental sickly unwell and couldn't contact with anyone.
You contact someone you don’t need a preposition. And you say I had xxxx disease or xxxx condition otherwise to be mentally unwell is better with to be rather than to have
After becomingOnce I became an adult, i found it is very hard to make new friends.
This is good but you are a child the. Adult. After adult is death so it’s changing from being a child to an adult so we say once I became rather than after being an adult
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I thought this was well written only a few corrections
May 5, 2025
Thank you so much for your careful corrections. It's very encouraging.
Do you have someone you couldan call your best friend?
"could" is the past tense of "can". Since you're talking about the present, "can" is expected.
Unfortunately, I don't have anyone, if anything, I have no one who called as whom I can call a friend.
The grammatical structure "if anything" isn't used in such a context.
AtIn the past, I had a mental sickillness and couldn't continteract with anyone.
After becoming an adult, it is very hard to make new friends.
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I hope that learning English will give you more opportunities to make new friends. I wish you all the best.
May 5, 2025
Thank you so much for your careful corrections. It's very encouraging.
Unfortunately, I don't have anyone, if anything, I have no one who I can called as a friend.
AtIn the past, I had a mental sickillness and couldn't contact with anyone.
After becoming an adult, it ishas become very hard to make new friends.
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Well done! I can relate to you. Please don't think that you are alone. Even I don't have any friends.
May 5, 2025
Thank you for the careful correction.
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Do you have someone you could call your best friend? Do you have someone you c "could" is the past tense of "can". Since you're talking about the present, "can" is expected. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Unfortunately, I don't have anyone, if anything, I have no one who called as a friend. Unfortunately, I don't have anyone, if anything, I have no one who I can call Unfortunately, I don't have anyone The grammatical structure "if anything" isn't used in such a context. Unfortunately, I don't have anyone The if anything is correct English and spelt correctly but it’s simpler and reads better to say you don’t have anyone to call a friend Unfortunately, I don't have anyone |
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At the past, I had mental sick and couldn't contact with anyone.
At the past, I You contact someone you don’t need a preposition. And you say I had xxxx disease or xxxx condition otherwise to be mentally unwell is better with to be rather than to have At the past, I had mental |
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After becoming an adult, it is very hard to make new friends. After becoming an adult, it This sentence has been marked as perfect!
This is good but you are a child the. Adult. After adult is death so it’s changing from being a child to an adult so we say once I became rather than after being an adult This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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