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TOMO_o

Aug. 11, 2025

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Do you have favorite stationery product?

Erasable pens have been popular in Japan these days, and I've used them frequently at work and study. However I really like normal pens because they looks various and artistic. I've often used pencil as well for oil painting, but they look same and simple.

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Do you have a favorite stationery product?

Erasable pens have been popular in Japan these days, and I've used them frequently at work and study.

However, I really like normal pens because they looks various different and artistic.

I've often used pencils as well for oil painting, but they look the same and too simplistic for my taste.

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TOMO_o

Aug. 12, 2025

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Thank you very much for the careful correction.

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marblemenow

Aug. 12, 2025

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You're welcome.

Do you have favorite stationery product?

Erasable pens have been popular in Japan these days, and I've used them frequently at work and study.

However, I really like normal pens because they looks various diverse and artistic.

Careful using "various." Although it is an adjective, it's one of those words that isn't usually left on its own. Its more natural to have it used with a noun directly, for example:

"I read various books." (correct)✅

"I read books that are various." (unnatural)❌

In this context, I think "diverse" is a better word to use :)

I've often used pencil as well for oil painting, but they look sameplain and simple.

"Same" follows a similar sort of nuance I mentioned above.

I think "plain" is the word you're looking for :)

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Great writing!

As for me, I have a strange obsession in collecting notepads! From sticky notes to large notepads, I love having lots of paper at my disposal. Something about writing in physical pen and paper is very satisfying!

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TOMO_o

Aug. 12, 2025

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Thank you very much for the careful corrections.
I'm going to try watching movies and such to study natural expressions.
I'll keep up the good work.

Erasable pens have beenare popular in Japan these days, and I've used them frequently at work and during study.

Alternative: Erasable pens have become popular in Japan recently,

However, I (really like / prefer) normal pens because they lookshave various andstyles and are more artistic.

It sounds like you like normal pens more than erasable pens - if so, you should use "prefer"

I've often used pencils as well for oil painting, but they look same and simplare simple and look the same.

More natural

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Great job

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TOMO_o

Aug. 12, 2025

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Thank you very much for the careful corrections.
I'm going to try watching movies and such to study natural expressions.
I'll keep up the good work.

Erasable pens have been popular in Japan these days, and I've used them frequently at work and while studying.

However I really like normal pens because they looksre are various andtypes and they look artistic.

I've often used pencil as well for oil painting, but they look the same and simple.

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I like to use stickers and washi tape in my journal.

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TOMO_o

Aug. 12, 2025

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Thank you very much for the careful correction.

Do you have favorite stationery product?


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Do you have a favorite stationery product?

Erasable pens have been popular in Japan these days, and I've used them frequently at work and study.


Erasable pens have been popular in Japan these days, and I've used them frequently at work and while studying.

Erasable pens have beenare popular in Japan these days, and I've used them frequently at work and during study.

Alternative: Erasable pens have become popular in Japan recently,

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Erasable pens have been popular in Japan these days, and I've used them frequently at work and study.

However I really like normal pens because they looks various and artistic.


However I really like normal pens because they looksre are various andtypes and they look artistic.

However, I (really like / prefer) normal pens because they lookshave various andstyles and are more artistic.

It sounds like you like normal pens more than erasable pens - if so, you should use "prefer"

However, I really like normal pens because they looks various diverse and artistic.

Careful using "various." Although it is an adjective, it's one of those words that isn't usually left on its own. Its more natural to have it used with a noun directly, for example: "I read various books." (correct)✅ "I read books that are various." (unnatural)❌ In this context, I think "diverse" is a better word to use :)

However, I really like normal pens because they looks various different and artistic.

I've often used pencil as well for oil painting, but they look same and simple.


I've often used pencil as well for oil painting, but they look the same and simple.

I've often used pencils as well for oil painting, but they look same and simplare simple and look the same.

More natural

I've often used pencil as well for oil painting, but they look sameplain and simple.

"Same" follows a similar sort of nuance I mentioned above. I think "plain" is the word you're looking for :)

I've often used pencils as well for oil painting, but they look the same and too simplistic for my taste.

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