March 18, 2021
Do you have any pets?
A lot of people have pets at home. Me too. I have two cats. One of them is 14 years old, another is a little kitten. Nowadays I have a problem with older cat. She doesn't like the little one and does puddles in my bedroom. I think that it was already finished, but did that again at night. I bought a special basin for her and she was agreed to use it, but sometimes ...
I understand her, because the little kitten is very naughty and he bites her. He wants to play with her, but she doesn't. I don't know what to do.
Today I'm going to buy a steam generator for my carpet floor, because I hate the odour. I will go to the shop after work.
Nowadays(today, lately, yesterday) I have had a problem with the older cat.
Nowadays is more for big stretches of time, like ages, or generations. It can mean the present, but from the rest of your journal it seems the problem occurred in the past.
The 'the' before 'older cat' was missing.
She doesn't like the little one and domakes puddles in my bedroom.
I like 'does puddles', it sounds cute. But 'puddle' is an object, so the kitten is making it, not doing it.
I think that itought her pouting was already finished, but she did that again at night.
'think' is present tense. I am not sure what tense the journal as a whole is written in, but I corrected this part of the sentence to be past. 'it' is unclear, what is 'it'? The making of puddles? The last part of the sentence did not say who did it.
I bought a special basin for her and she was agreed to use it, but sometimes ...
'was' is not needed.
Today I'm going to buy a steam generatocleaner for my carpet floor, because I hate the odour.
You're using 'generator' here, but going from context you meant a steam cleaner. 'generator' is just a thing that makes stuff--steam, electricity, names.
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I like your style. If you like puns, may I suggest saying that the older cat was having a 'hissy fit'? 'Hiss' sounds like an angry cat. If you do not like puns I am sorry I mentioned it.
I also have cats, one of which is new and annoys my older cat. But she does not pout, only bites the kitten when he tries to play. I wish you good luck with the puddles.
March 19, 2021
Thank you for these interesting comments!
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She doesn't like the little one and does puddles in my bedroom. She doesn't like the little one and I like 'does puddles', it sounds cute. But 'puddle' is an object, so the kitten is making it, not doing it. |
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I think that it was already finished, but did that again at night. I th 'think' is present tense. I am not sure what tense the journal as a whole is written in, but I corrected this part of the sentence to be past. 'it' is unclear, what is 'it'? The making of puddles? The last part of the sentence did not say who did it. |
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I bought a special basin for her and she was agreed to use it, but sometimes ... I bought a special basin for her and she 'was' is not needed. |
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I understand her, because the little kitten is very naughty and he bites her. |
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He wants to play with her, but she doesn't. |
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Do you have any pets? |
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A lot of people have pets at home. |
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Me too. |
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I have two cats. |
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One of them is 14 years old, another is a little kitten. |
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Nowadays I have a problem with older cat.
Nowadays is more for big stretches of time, like ages, or generations. It can mean the present, but from the rest of your journal it seems the problem occurred in the past. The 'the' before 'older cat' was missing. |
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I don't know what to do. |
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Today I'm going to buy a steam generator for my carpet floor, because I hate the odour. Today I'm going to buy a steam You're using 'generator' here, but going from context you meant a steam cleaner. 'generator' is just a thing that makes stuff--steam, electricity, names. |
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I will go to the shop after work. |
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