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TOMO_o

Sept. 13, 2025

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Do you have any personality flaws?

I have a quite few personality flaws, but I can have embraced my flaws recently. Of course, I correct my true flaws that my family thankfully point out. I think I should love myself so that I can have a kindness for other people.

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Do you have any personality flaws?

I have a quite a few personality flaws, but I can have embraced my flaws recently.

Since personality flaws was mentioned in the first clause, they can be replaced with 'them' in the second clause.
Ex. "I have quite a few personality flaws, but I have embraced [them] recently."
Note, you can also go further by saying "some of them" or "a few of them" if you want to additionally convey that you haven't embraced every single one, but have embraced quite a couple.

Of course, I correct my truereal flaws that my family thankfully points out.

I think I should love myself so that I can have a kindness for other people.

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Great job!
Introspection and learning to love yourself is important, but a difficult thing to do.
I think my biggest personality flaw is that I can be a "doormat". It's extremely hard for me to say "no" and I always try to be a people pleaser. It makes it difficult for me to establish boundaries when I need to, but recently I've gotten better at being more firm and standing up for myself.

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TOMO_o

Sept. 13, 2025

6

Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
I will try to be conscious of using "them" more often rather than writing everything too carefully.
Conversely, I have the disadvantage of expressing my feelings too directly.

I have a quite few personality flaws, but I can have embraced my flaws recently.

You can also contract “I have” into “I’ve” to make it sound a little more natural.

Of course, I correct my true flaws that my family thankfully points out.

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TheRealRaichu

Sept. 13, 2025

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Good job!

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TOMO_o

Sept. 13, 2025

6

Thank you very much for your careful correction.
It's difficult to distinguish when it's better to omit something and when it's better to leave it as is.

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Parfait!!

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TOMO_o

Sept. 13, 2025

6

Thank you. I was able to write it well this time.

Do you have any personality flaws?


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I have a quite few personality flaws, but I can have embraced my flaws recently.


I have a quite few personality flaws, but I can have embraced my flaws recently.

You can also contract “I have” into “I’ve” to make it sound a little more natural.

I have a quite a few personality flaws, but I can have embraced my flaws recently.

Since personality flaws was mentioned in the first clause, they can be replaced with 'them' in the second clause. Ex. "I have quite a few personality flaws, but I have embraced [them] recently." Note, you can also go further by saying "some of them" or "a few of them" if you want to additionally convey that you haven't embraced every single one, but have embraced quite a couple.

Of course, I correct my true flaws that my family thankfully point out.


Of course, I correct my true flaws that my family thankfully points out.

Of course, I correct my truereal flaws that my family thankfully points out.

I think I should love myself so that I can have a kindness for other people.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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