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TOMO_o

Jan. 18, 2025

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Do you have any hobbies?

My hobby is drawing oil paint. I started drawing the art when I was 24, and it releases me from constrain. Some day, I would like to draw big one.

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Do you have any hobbies?

My hobby is drawing oil painting.

I started drawing the artpainting in oil when I was 24, and it releases me from any constraint.

Some day, I would like to drawpaint a big one.

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TOMO_o

Jan. 19, 2025

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Thank you for the correction.

My hobby is drawing oil painting.

"drawing" is mostly used for pens, pencils, markers, crayons, etc. "Painting" is used with paints.

I started drawing the artpainting when I was 24, and it releases me from constraints (?).

constraints is a kind of odd word to use here, I'm not fully sure what you mean

Some day, I would like to draw big onepaint a big/large/popular painting.

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TOMO_o

Jan. 18, 2025

8

Thank you for your kind correction.
I will continue to build up my knowledge one step at a time.

Do you have any hobbies?

My hobby is drawing oil painting.

I started drawing thecreating art when I was 24, and it releasmakes me from constraineel free.

Some day, I would like to draw big onepaint something big.

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Well done!

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TOMO_o

Jan. 18, 2025

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Thank you for your correction.

Do you have any hobbies?

My hobby is drawing with oil paint.s

Needs a 'with'

I started drawing the art when I was 24, and i. It rheleaseps me from constrainrelax.

Constrain isn't used as a noun in English

Some day, I would like to draw a big onpicture.

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Decent effort

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TOMO_o

Jan. 18, 2025

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Thank you for your kind correction.
I will continue to build up my knowledge one step at a time.

Do you have any hobbies?

My hobby is drawing oil painting.

I started drawing the artpainting when I was 24, and it releases me from constrainstress.

Some day, I would like to draw big onemake a big painting.

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I'm not an art expert by any means, so it's possible that there is specific vocabulary that I'm not aware of. However, since you seem to be painting with oil, I replaced "draw" with "paint" as that is how a neophyte like myself would explain it.

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TOMO_o

Jan. 18, 2025

8

Thank you for your kind correction.

Do you have any hobbies?

My hobby is drawing oil painting.

You could also say "drawing with oil paint," but "oil painting" is more natural.

I started drawing the artpainting when I was 24, and it releasieves me from constrainy stress.

Or "I started making art when I was 24," or "I started drawing when I was 24."

Some day, I would like to draw big onemake a big painting.

"One" is not correct here because you have not mentioned a countable noun. You have mentioned painting (verb), but not a painting (noun). Some examples where "one" would be correct:
- "I started painting when I was 24. Making paintings relieves my stress. Someday, I would like to paint a big one."
- "I started making paintings when I was 24, and it relieves my stress. Someday, I would like to paint a big one."

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TOMO_o

Jan. 18, 2025

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Thank you for your kind correction.
I will continue to build up my knowledge one step at a time.

Do you have any hobbies?


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My hobby is drawing oil paint.


My hobby is drawing oil painting.

You could also say "drawing with oil paint," but "oil painting" is more natural.

My hobby is drawing oil painting.

My hobby is drawing with oil paint.s

Needs a 'with'

My hobby is drawing oil painting.

My hobby is drawing oil painting.

"drawing" is mostly used for pens, pencils, markers, crayons, etc. "Painting" is used with paints.

My hobby is drawing oil painting.

I started drawing the art when I was 24, and it releases me from constrain.


I started drawing the artpainting when I was 24, and it releasieves me from constrainy stress.

Or "I started making art when I was 24," or "I started drawing when I was 24."

I started drawing the artpainting when I was 24, and it releases me from constrainstress.

I started drawing the art when I was 24, and i. It rheleaseps me from constrainrelax.

Constrain isn't used as a noun in English

I started drawing thecreating art when I was 24, and it releasmakes me from constraineel free.

I started drawing the artpainting when I was 24, and it releases me from constraints (?).

constraints is a kind of odd word to use here, I'm not fully sure what you mean

I started drawing the artpainting in oil when I was 24, and it releases me from any constraint.

Some day, I would like to draw big one.


Some day, I would like to draw big onemake a big painting.

"One" is not correct here because you have not mentioned a countable noun. You have mentioned painting (verb), but not a painting (noun). Some examples where "one" would be correct: - "I started painting when I was 24. Making paintings relieves my stress. Someday, I would like to paint a big one." - "I started making paintings when I was 24, and it relieves my stress. Someday, I would like to paint a big one."

Some day, I would like to draw big onemake a big painting.

Some day, I would like to draw a big onpicture.

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Some day, I would like to draw big onepaint something big.

Some day, I would like to draw big onepaint a big/large/popular painting.

Some day, I would like to drawpaint a big one.

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