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Do you have any allergies?
I am allergic to red beans. It's a very famous food in Japan, and one of the ingredients to make a bean paste which is a Japanese traditional food. I also have a bad hey fever. This is why my favorite season is winter. There are less bugs, as well.
Do you have any allergies?
I am allergic to red beans.
It's a very famous food in Japan, and one of the ingredients used to make a bean paste, which is a Japanese traditional Japanese food.
Added 'used' for clarity and rearranged 'traditional Japanese' for more natural word order.
I also have a bad heay fever.
Removed 'a' (hay fever is uncountable) and corrected spelling from 'hey' to 'hay'.
This is why my favorite season is winter.
There are lessfewer bugs, as well.
Changed 'less' to 'fewer' because bugs are countable nouns.
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Your writing shows good vocabulary and clear expression of ideas! Most of your sentences are well-constructed, with just a few minor grammar adjustments needed.
Do you have any allergies?
It'sThey're a very famous food in Japan, and one of the ingredients to make a bean paste which is a Japanese traditional Japanese food.
Since "red beans" is plural you should use "they"
I also have a bad heay fever.
Hey = hello
Hay = dried grass
This is why my favorite season is winter.
There are less bugs, as well.
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I don't have any allergies, but with red bean paste I can only eat it if it's こしあん, I have a strong reaction to the texture of つぶあん.
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I am allergic to red beans. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It's a very famous food in Japan, and one of the ingredients to make a bean paste which is a Japanese traditional food.
Since "red beans" is plural you should use "they" It's a very famous food in Japan, and one of the ingredients used to make Added 'used' for clarity and rearranged 'traditional Japanese' for more natural word order. |
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I also have a bad hey fever. I also have a bad h Hey = hello Hay = dried grass I also have Removed 'a' (hay fever is uncountable) and corrected spelling from 'hey' to 'hay'. |
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This is why my favorite season is winter. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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There are less bugs, as well. This sentence has been marked as perfect! There are Changed 'less' to 'fewer' because bugs are countable nouns. |
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