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I love sweets. There are many various sweets in Japan, and everything is tasty and affordable. However, I often drink an espresso with sugar, so I refrain from taking more sugar these days because I’m afraid of diabetes. What sweets are there in your country?
Do you have a sweet tooth?
I love sweets.
However, I often drink an espresso with sugaradd sugar to my espresso, so I refrain from taking more sugar these days because I’m afraid of getting diabetes.
What sweets are there in your country?
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There are chocolate biscuits, chocolate drink, candies, and soda drinks. I don't really like taking candies, but I like taking soda drinks.
Do you have a sweet tooth?
I love sweets.
There are many various sweets in Japan, and everything is tasty and affordable.
However, I often drink an espresso with sugaradd sugar to my espressos, so I refrain from taking more sugar these days because I’m afraid of diabetes.
Here I'd say it's best to use no article with "espressos"
I reworded it slightly to make it a bit clearer what you meant - someone reading this could interpret it as "when I eat sweets, I have an espresso".
What sweets are there in your country?
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Good job, your writing was clear and easy to understand.
In Britain we call candy (あめ) "sweets", so a British person might think of lollipops and gummies. However, I believe you're using the word with a wider meaning (eg: cakes, and so on). I quite like carrot cake.
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