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TOMO_o

Feb. 1, 2025

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Do you have a personal motto?

My personal motto is the one my school teacher taught me:"If you are not the fire, at least be the furnace". I was shy and wasn't good at express myself. But I always need to keep my passion inside.

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Do yYou hHave a pPersonal mMotto?

My personal motto is the one my school teacher taught me: "If you are not the fire, at least be the furnace".

I was shy and wasn't good at expressing myself.

B, but I always needed to keep mstay passion insidate.

I found this sentence somewhat vague. You say you were shy and therefore it makes sense that you kept you passion inside (you don't share your passions with anyone because you were shy).

On the other hand, the motto says: "even if you aren't the fire, you should be a furnace". This makes me think that what you wanted to say is that even if you weren't sharing your passions with others, that you yourself should remain passionate for things.

You could also say: "I always needed to stay passionate on the inside"

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TOMO_o

Feb. 1, 2025

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Thank you for your careful correction.
It's a very easy-to-understand explanation.

Do yYou hHave a pPersonal mMotto?

I was shy and wasn't good at expressing myself.

But I always need to keep my passion inside.

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TOMO_o

Feb. 1, 2025

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Thank you for your careful correction.

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Toluwani

Feb. 2, 2025

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You are welcome :)

My personal motto is the one that my school teacher taught me:"If you are not the fire, at least be the furnace".

I was shy and wasn't good at expressing myself.

But I always need to keep my passion fire inside.

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TOMO_o

Feb. 1, 2025

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Thank you for your careful correction.

Do you have a personal motto?

My personal motto is the one my school teacher taught me:"If you are not thea fire, at least be thea furnace"."

I was shy and wasn't good at express myself well.

But I always neetend to keep my passion inside.

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TOMO_o

Feb. 1, 2025

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Thank you for your careful correction.

My personal motto is the one my school teacher taught me: "If you are not the fire, at least be the furnace"."

I was shy and wasn't good at expressing myself.

But I always need to keep my passion inside.

"But I always need to remain passionate" could also work.

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TOMO_o

Feb. 1, 2025

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Thank you for your careful correction.

Do you have a personal motto?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Do yYou hHave a pPersonal mMotto?

Do yYou hHave a pPersonal mMotto?

My personal motto is the one my school teacher taught me:"If you are not the fire, at least be the furnace".


My personal motto is the one my school teacher taught me: "If you are not the fire, at least be the furnace"."

My personal motto is the one my school teacher taught me:"If you are not thea fire, at least be thea furnace"."

My personal motto is the one that my school teacher taught me:"If you are not the fire, at least be the furnace".

My personal motto is the one my school teacher taught me: "If you are not the fire, at least be the furnace".

I was shy and wasn't good at express myself.


I was shy and wasn't good at expressing myself.

I was shy and wasn't good at express myself well.

I was shy and wasn't good at expressing myself.

I was shy and wasn't good at expressing myself.

I was shy and wasn't good at expressing myself.

But I always need to keep my passion inside.


But I always need to keep my passion inside.

"But I always need to remain passionate" could also work.

But I always neetend to keep my passion inside.

But I always need to keep my passion fire inside.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

B, but I always needed to keep mstay passion insidate.

I found this sentence somewhat vague. You say you were shy and therefore it makes sense that you kept you passion inside (you don't share your passions with anyone because you were shy). On the other hand, the motto says: "even if you aren't the fire, you should be a furnace". This makes me think that what you wanted to say is that even if you weren't sharing your passions with others, that you yourself should remain passionate for things. You could also say: "I always needed to stay passionate on the inside"

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