Oct. 17, 2025
Do you have a life plan?
I had a my plan when I was still in university, but that didn't go well. I resigned my job seven years ago because of my sick, after I recovered I studied for qualifications and failed. I work now and have been studying English foe my future.
Do you have a life plan?
I had a my plan when I was still in university, but that didn't go well.
I resigned from my job seven years ago because of my sick, after I recovereddue to my sickness.
After I recovered, I studied for qualifications and failed.
I work now and have been studying English foer my future.
Oct. 17, 2025
Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
I still make mistakes about whether I should write in the present continuous tense, and how to use adjectives and nouns correctly.
I think that by making mistakes over and over again, the basics will gradually become ingrained in my mind.
Oct. 18, 2025
No worries. I would recommend reading sentences using these sentences in the context of a story so that you can get used to these patterns.
Do you have a life plan?
I had a my plan when I was still in university, but that didn't go well.
Because you wrote "I" it is already assumed that it's your plan
I resigned my job seven years ago because of myI was sick, afterbut I recovered.
Using "but" makes a more clear comparison between the before and after.
I studied for qualifications and failed.
I'm working now and have been studying English foer my future.
Using "working" makes it clear that it's a continuous action.
Oct. 17, 2025
Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
I still make mistakes about whether I should write in the present continuous tense, and how to use adjectives and nouns correctly.
I think that by making mistakes over and over again, the basics will gradually become ingrained in my mind.
I had a my plan when I was still in the university, but that didn't go well.
I resigned from my job seven years ago because of myI got sick, after I recovered
I now work now and have been studying English foeto better my future.
This is a bit more natural sounding.
Oct. 17, 2025
Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
I still make mistakes about whether I should write in the present continuous tense, and how to use adjectives and nouns correctly.
I think that by making mistakes over and over again, the basics will gradually become ingrained in my mind.
Do you have a life plan?
I had a my plan when I was still in university, but that didn't go well.
"my" should not be used here
I resigned from my job seven years ago because of my sickness, after which I recovered.
「病気になって仕事をやめた。そして治った。」という文章ですか？
I studied for qualifications and failed.
I am back in work now and have been studying English foer my future.
It would be good to specify that you have returned to work, since you mentioned that you resigned from your job earlier
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It sounds like you've had a hard time. I hope your English study pays off!
Oct. 17, 2025
Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
I still make mistakes about whether I should write in the present continuous tense, and how to use adjectives and nouns correctly.
I think that by making mistakes over and over again, the basics will gradually become ingrained in my mind.
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