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TOMO_o

Aug. 25, 2025

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Do you have a favotrite comedian?

Although he has already passed away, my favorite comedian is "Ken Shimura." His comedy show was very funny and everyone from children to adults can enjoy it. Even you can't understand Japanese, his funny movements make you laugh. Please try it.

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Do you have a favotrite comedian?

Although he has already passed away, my favorite comedian is "Ken Shimura."

We generally do not put quotation marks around the names of people.

His comedy show was very funny and can be enjoyed by everyone from children to adults can enjoy it.

Restructured the sentence so it sounds more fluent (in my opinion).

Even if you can't understand Japanese, his funny movements (will) make you laugh.

Please try it.

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TOMO_o

Aug. 26, 2025

20

Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
Having a native speaker teach me natural expressions really helps me understand English.

Do you have a favotrite comedian?


Do you have a favotrite comedian?

Although he has already passed away, my favorite comedian is "Ken Shimura."


Although he has already passed away, my favorite comedian is "Ken Shimura."

We generally do not put quotation marks around the names of people.

His comedy show was very funny and everyone from children to adults can enjoy it.


His comedy show was very funny and can be enjoyed by everyone from children to adults can enjoy it.

Restructured the sentence so it sounds more fluent (in my opinion).

Even you can't understand Japanese, his funny movements make you laugh.


Even if you can't understand Japanese, his funny movements (will) make you laugh.

Please try it.


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