Dec. 20, 2025
Do you have a favorite amusement park?
My favorite amusement park is definitely Disneyland, because it has great rides, great stuff, and great atmosphere. However, an entrance fee has been increasing in for years, and there is no annual pass anymore. One day. I’d like to go to there with my child.
My favorite amusement park is definitely Disneyland, because it has great rides, great stuff, and great atmosphere.
However, anthe entrance fee has been increasing in for years, and there is no annual passes anymore.
One day.
Dec. 21, 2025
Thank you very much for your careful correction.
I think I wrote it a little better.
Do you have a favorite amusement park?
My favorite amusement park is definitely Disneyland, because it has great rides, great stuff, and a great atmosphere.
However, anthe entrance fee has been increasing in forover the years, and there is no annual pass anymore.
One day.,
Dec. 21, 2025
Thank you very much for your careful correction.
In Japanese, "stuff" is often used to collectively refer to people who work in stores or facilities, so I wrote it as is.
Other than that, I think I wrote it a little better.
Do you have a favorite amusement park?
My favorite amusement park is definitely Disneyland, because it has great rides, great stuff, and great atmosphere.
I don't have an actual correction here because the sentence is correct, but "great stuff" is a bit ambiguous. "Stuff" is a very generic word in the English language. The reader will want more detail. What kind of stuff?
However, anthe entrance fee has been increasing in for years, and there is not an annual pass anymore.
You're referring specifically to the entrance fee at Disneyland, so "the" works better than "an".
One day.,
This should connect to the next sentence with a comma.
I’d like to go to there with my child.
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Great work! Just a few small corrections. Keep it up!
Dec. 21, 2025
Thank you very much for your careful correction.
In Japanese, "stuff" is often used to collectively refer to people who work in stores or facilities, so I wrote it as is.
Other than that, I think I wrote it a little better.
My favorite amusement park is definitely Disneyland, because it has great rides, great [stuff], and great atmosphere.
stuff = is too general for this context. We don't know if you mean souvenirs, food and drinks, or something else.
However, anthe entrance fee has been increasing in for years, and there is no annual pass anymore.
It's the fee for the park. It is specific to Disneyland.
One day.,
This is part of the next sentence.
(The sentence is so short, you might even omit the comma.)
Dec. 20, 2025
A correction I missed is "in for years" -- It should read "the fee has been increasing for years"
Dec. 20, 2025
or "the fee has been increasing in recent years"
Dec. 21, 2025
Thank you very much for your careful correction.
In Japanese, "stuff" is often used to collectively refer to people who work in stores or facilities, so I wrote it as is.
Other than that, I think I wrote it a little better.
Dec. 21, 2025
Thank you for the explanation. The English word I was going to suggest is "employees," but the internet tells me that the people who work at Disneyland are called "Cast Members." They certainly are a big part of the experience, so it makes sense to include them in your top three reasons.
Do you have a favorite amusement park?
My favorite amusement park is definitely Disneyland, because it has great rides, great stuff, and great atmosphere.
While there is nothing wrong, stuff is a very general word for anything. It is not common to list it alongside specific things like rides or atmosphere.
But you may use it like "etc." at the end. For example, "it has great rides, atmosphere, and stuff." This implies there are other things but you do not want to list them all.
However, anthe entrance fee has been increasing in forrecent years, and there is no annual pass anymore.
When you use "an" it feels like you have no particular entrance fee in mind, like some random entrance fee somewhere is being increased. "The" will link the entrance fee to the context you are currently talking about, so readers will know it is referring to Disneyland's.
One day.
I’d like to go to there with my child.
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My favorite was a park back in Toronto called Wonderland. I even worked there one summer, and had a staff entry pass that I could use to enter as many time as I wanted during my employment. It is more intended for adults as the rides are much scarier than Disneyland's. But now, I feel like I am getting too old for that. XD
Dec. 21, 2025
Thank you very much for your careful correction.
In Japanese, "stuff" is often used to collectively refer to people who work in stores or facilities, so I wrote it as is.
Other than that, I think I wrote it a little better.
Dec. 21, 2025
I see! I think you meant to say "staff" instead of "stuff", as staff actually does refer to people who work in stores or facilites.
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