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TOMO_o

Sept. 4, 2025

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Do you have a bucket list?

There are few things on my bucket list. I'd like to see a world heritage like pyramid or colosseum. I want to go to Italy in order to eat past and drink an authentic espresso. Anyway, I'd like to see all over the world, but I don't have bravery and proactiveness.

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Do you have a bucket list?

There are few things oin my bucket list.

I want to go to Italy in order to eat pasta and drink an authentic espresso.

Anyway, I'd like to seetravel all over the world, but I don't have the bravery and proactivenesswill to do so.

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TOMO_o

Sept. 5, 2025

50

Thank you very much for your careful correction.
Natural expressions and the use of "the" are difficult.

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Toluwani

Sept. 5, 2025

58

You are welcome :)

"The" is used to refer to nouns that are specific, unique, already mentioned, or generally understood by the listener.

With practice you'll get better.

Anyway, I'd like to see all over the world, but I don't have the bravery and proactivenessnor the will.

Suggesting an alternative here for proactiveness.

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tengteng

Sept. 4, 2025

0

... to do this.

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TOMO_o

Sept. 5, 2025

50

Thank you very much for your careful correction.
Natural expressions and the use of "the" are difficult.

I'd like to see a world heritage landmarks like pyramid or colosseum.

Pyramids are plural - "the Pyramids" and its "The Colosseum"

I want to go to Italy in order to eat pasta and drink an authentic espresso.

AnywayIn conclusion, I'd like to seetravel all over the world, but I don't have the bravery and proactiveness to do this.

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TOMO_o

Sept. 5, 2025

50

Thank you very much for your careful correction.
Natural expressions and the use of "the" are difficult.

I want to go to Italy in order to eat past and drink an authentic espresso.


I want to go to Italy in order to eat pasta and drink an authentic espresso.

I want to go to Italy in order to eat pasta and drink an authentic espresso.

Anyway, I'd like to see all over the world, but I don't have bravery and proactiveness.


AnywayIn conclusion, I'd like to seetravel all over the world, but I don't have the bravery and proactiveness to do this.

Anyway, I'd like to see all over the world, but I don't have the bravery and proactivenessnor the will.

Suggesting an alternative here for proactiveness.

Anyway, I'd like to seetravel all over the world, but I don't have the bravery and proactivenesswill to do so.

Do you have a bucket list?


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There are few things on my bucket list.


There are few things oin my bucket list.

I'd like to see a world heritage like pyramid or colosseum.


I'd like to see a world heritage landmarks like pyramid or colosseum.

Pyramids are plural - "the Pyramids" and its "The Colosseum"

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