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TOMO_o

July 9, 2025

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Do you collect anything?

I don’t collect anything now, but when I was a child I collected Pokémon cards with my brother. Although they are used like marketable securities these days, they are just a cute and fun card game for me. By the way, my favorite is Charizard.

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Do you collect anything?

I don’t collect anything now, but when I was a child I collected Pokémon cards with my brother.

Although they are used like marketable securitieinvestments these days, they awere just a cute and fun card game for me.

By the way, my favorite one is Charizard.

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Great job!

I still collect Pokemon and Yu-Gi-Oh! cards. My favorite Pokemon is Sylveon.

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TOMO_o

July 11, 2025

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Thank you very much for the careful correction.

Do you collect anything?

BETTER: I don’t collect anything now, but when I was a child I collected Pokémon cards with my brother.

NOTE: The original sentence had the word "I" three times; it sounds smoother to use fewer "I" words.

Although they are used like marketable securities these days, they awere just a cute and fun card game for me.

By the way, my favorite character is Charizard.

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TOMO_o

July 10, 2025

12

Thank you very much for the careful correction.

Do you collect anything?

I don’t collect anything now, but when I was a child I collected Pokémon cards with my brother.

Although they are used like marketable securitieas investments these days, they awere just a cute and fun card game for me.

I changed it to 'were', since you don't collect them anymore.

By the way, my favorite Pokemon is Charizard.

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Great work. My username is from a Pokemon, actually. My favourite is probably Chandelure, though.

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TOMO_o

July 9, 2025

12

Thank you very much for the careful correction.

Do you collect anything?


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I don’t collect anything now, but when I was a child I collected Pokémon cards with my brother.


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BETTER: I don’t collect anything now, but when I was a child I collected Pokémon cards with my brother.

NOTE: The original sentence had the word "I" three times; it sounds smoother to use fewer "I" words.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Although they are used like marketable securities these days, they are just a cute and fun card game for me.


Although they are used like marketable securitieas investments these days, they awere just a cute and fun card game for me.

I changed it to 'were', since you don't collect them anymore.

Although they are used like marketable securities these days, they awere just a cute and fun card game for me.

Although they are used like marketable securitieinvestments these days, they awere just a cute and fun card game for me.

By the way, my favorite is Charizard.


By the way, my favorite Pokemon is Charizard.

By the way, my favorite character is Charizard.

By the way, my favorite one is Charizard.

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