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TOMO_o

March 12, 2025

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Do You Believe In Love At First Sight?

I believe that love at first sight is existed, but it is related with only good looking people. At least, it doesn't concern me at all. I hope it will happen to me someday.

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I believe that love at first sight is existeds, but it is related wthat ith only applies to good looking people.

I see your point but you wrote "exist" in past tense and and the second part didnt flow. could also say "but it relates only to good looking people."

At least, iIt doesn't concern me at all, at least.

I don't know why it sounds better like that to me.

I hopestill hope that it will happen to me someday.

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Rachello

March 12, 2025

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I would say you continue to hope to find love, even though you don't feel love at first sight applies to you. So it is ongoing and even though it doesn't apply to you, you continue to hope. This is why I added still. I hope that makes sense.

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Rachello

March 12, 2025

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Also! I don't believe in love at first sight! I believe that love comes from being together for some time, experiencing things together. I am sure you will find love.

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TOMO_o

March 13, 2025

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Thank you so much for your careful corrections. It's very encouraging.

Do You Believe In Love At First Sight?


I believe that love at first sight is existed, but it is related with only good looking people.


I believe that love at first sight is existeds, but it is related wthat ith only applies to good looking people.

I see your point but you wrote "exist" in past tense and and the second part didnt flow. could also say "but it relates only to good looking people."

At least, it doesn't concern me at all.


At least, iIt doesn't concern me at all, at least.

I don't know why it sounds better like that to me.

I hope it will happen to me someday.


I hopestill hope that it will happen to me someday.

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