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emi

Jan. 9, 2020

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Do you believe ghost exist?

All the doors and windows had been locked in my house.
There had been no one there.
But the door in my room was opened.
This kind of situation happens often in my house.
There is probably a ghost in my house.


私の家のすべてのドアと窓は施錠されていました。
それに誰もいなかった。
しかし、私の部屋のドアは開かれました。
このような状況は私の家でよく起こります。
おそらく私の家に幽霊がいるでしょう。

Corrections

But the door into my room was opened.

"However" is also ok. It sounds more formal than "but." I think "but" suits your journal fine. Both are correct though.

This kind of situationthing happens often in my house.

Your sentence is fine, but I think "thing" matches the tone if your journal better than "situation." This is just my personal opinion.

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emi

Jan. 9, 2020

1

Thank you for the corrections(*^_^*)

Do you believe that ghosts exist?
(Do you believe in ghosts?)

The sentence in parentheses, "Do you believe in ghosts?", is the most natural way to ask this question.

All the doors and windows had been locked in my housein my house were locked.

There had been no oneNobody else was there.

ButHowever, the door into my room was opened.

This kind of situation happens often in my house.

There is probably a ghost in my house.

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emi

Jan. 9, 2020

1

ButHowever, the door into my room was opened.

Howeverは理解しました。
the door in my room was opened はなぜ不正解ですか?

emi's avatar
emi

Jan. 9, 2020

1

Thank you for the corrections(*^_^*)

Do you believe ghost exist?


Do you believe that ghosts exist?
(Do you believe in ghosts?)

The sentence in parentheses, "Do you believe in ghosts?", is the most natural way to ask this question.

All the doors and windows had been locked in my house.


All the doors and windows had been locked in my housein my house were locked.

There had been no one there.


There had been no oneNobody else was there.

But the door in my room was opened.


ButHowever, the door into my room was opened.

But the door into my room was opened.

"However" is also ok. It sounds more formal than "but." I think "but" suits your journal fine. Both are correct though.

This kind of situation happens often in my house.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This kind of situationthing happens often in my house.

Your sentence is fine, but I think "thing" matches the tone if your journal better than "situation." This is just my personal opinion.

There is probably a ghost in my house.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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