Dec. 6, 2020
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
"It is better to go on a trip by oneself than to take a group tour with a guide."
It is critically important that we know how to enjoy our time on trips. No one can deny that either going for a trip by oneself or take a group with a guide has both positive and negative effects. Personally, I agree with the argument that a trip on our own is better. There are two reasons why I feel this way, both of which I explore in the following essay.
To begin with, traveling or going on a trip on your own is more comfortable and enjoyable. My opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own experience. Last year, I traveled with my family to Istanbul. We arranged everything without anyone's help, we booked the hotels and rented a car to go to the places that we want. It was a very nice and comfortable trip for us, in contrast to our last trip. We went with a group with a guide and that's was a waste of time and we didn't enjoy anything. Because there were a lot of people and each of them needs something to do, therefore we were always in hurry and that's caused us to not enjoy anything.
Furthermore, when we travel or go for a trip by oneself, you can choose the company that you want to enjoy with, My personal experience is a compelling illustration of this. Last semester, there was a school trip for the whole class. I and my best friends didn't like the idea of going with 25 persons. Therefore we skipped their trip and we went the next day to the exact place. We managed our time carefully, and we went to many places that attractive to us. We really enjoyed our time and it was such a great experience.
In light of the above reasons, I strongly believe that it is far better to go on a trip on your own. This is because you can enjoy your time precisely and it is more comfortable in many ways.
No one can deny that either going for a trip by oneself or takeing a group with a guide has both positive and negative effects.
Personally, I agree with the argument that a trip on our owntaking a trip alone is better.
There are two reasons why I feel this way, both of which I explore in the following essayI believe this because I think it's more comfortable and enjoyable, and you can choose the company you want to be with.
Don't say "..which I explore in the following essay". Just tell the reader the two reasons up front.
Last year, I traveled with my family to Istanbul.
It was a very nice and comfortable trip for us, in contrast to our last trip.
We went with a group with a guide and that's was a waste of time and we didn't enjoy anythingit.
Because tThere were a lot of people and each of them needsed something to do, therefore we were always in a hurry and that's caused us to not enjoy anythingit as much.
Furthermore, when we travel or go for a trip by oneself, you can choose the company thatpeople you want to enjoygo with,. My personal experience is a compelling illustration of this.
Last semester, there was a school trip for the whole class.
I and mMy best friends and I didn't like the idea of going with 25 persons.
Therefore we skipped their trip and we went the next day to the exact same place.
We managed our time carefully, and we went to many places that were attractive to us.
We really enjoyed our time and it was such a great experience.
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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? |
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"It is better to go on a trip by oneself than to take a group tour with a guide. |
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It is critically important that we know how to enjoy our time on trips. |
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No one can deny that either going for a trip by oneself or take a group with a guide has both positive and negative effects. No one can deny that either going for a trip by oneself or tak |
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Personally, I agree with the argument that a trip on our own is better. Personally, I agree with the argument that |
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There are two reasons why I feel this way, both of which I explore in the following essay.
Don't say "..which I explore in the following essay". Just tell the reader the two reasons up front. |
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To begin with, traveling or going on a trip on your own is more comfortable and enjoyable. |
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My opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own experience. |
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Last year, I traveled with my family to Istanbul. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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We arranged everything without anyone's help, we booked the hotels and rented a car to go to the places that we want. |
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It was a very nice and comfortable trip for us, in contrast to our last trip. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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We went with a group with a guide and that's was a waste of time and we didn't enjoy anything. We went with a group with a guide and that |
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Because there were a lot of people and each of them needs something to do, therefore we were always in hurry and that's caused us to not enjoy anything.
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Furthermore, when we travel or go for a trip by oneself, you can choose the company that you want to enjoy with, My personal experience is a compelling illustration of this. Furthermore, when we travel or go for a trip by oneself, you can choose the |
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Last semester, there was a school trip for the whole class. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I and my best friends didn't like the idea of going with 25 persons.
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Therefore we skipped their trip and we went the next day to the exact place. Therefore we skipped their trip and we went the next day to the exact same place. |
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We managed our time carefully, and we went to many places that attractive to us. We managed our time carefully, and we went to many places that were attractive to us. |
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We really enjoyed our time and it was such a great experience. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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In light of the above reasons, I strongly believe that it is far better to go on a trip on your own. |
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This is because you can enjoy your time precisely and it is more comfortable in many ways. |
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