Oct. 18, 2021
Do we need music in our lives?
Music is one of the most important thins in our life.
When we born, we listen since first minutes, and music is one of the things that we listen.
Feelings listening music are very different, sometimes we feel happiness, other times we feel sad, other exited,...
I think few people can live without music. I mean that it's not necessary every day, but sometimes is a good therapy for our mind.
Do we need music in our lives?
Main titles usually contain words that have their first letter capitalised, although not all the words need to be so written. May I suggest an alternative way for your title:
Do We Need Music in Our Lives?
Words like "in", "or", "and" etc do not need capital letters.
Music is one of the most important things in our life.
When we born, we listen since first minutes, and music is one of the things that we listen.
From the minute we are born, we are able to hear sounds, including music
Feelings listening music are very different, sometimes we feel happiness, other times we feel sad, other exited,...
Music causes various emotions in us: sometimes happiness, other times sadness or excitement, for example.
I think few people can live without music.
I mean that it's not necessary every day, but sometimes is a good therapy for our mind.
Consider:
"Of course, it is not necessary to listen to music every day, but listening to it now and again is good therapy for the mind."
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Good start! Keep going!
Let me know if you would like further help with any of the above.
Sincerely,
mjm
PS - you probably know that even unborn babies can hear sounds and music!
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Do we need music in our lives? Do we need music in our lives? Main titles usually contain words that have their first letter capitalised, although not all the words need to be so written. May I suggest an alternative way for your title: Do We Need Music in Our Lives? Words like "in", "or", "and" etc do not need capital letters. |
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Music is one of the most important thins in our life. Music is one of the most important things in our life. |
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When we born, we listen since first minutes, and music is one of the things that we listen. When we born, we listen since first minutes, and music is one of the things that we listen. From the minute we are born, we are able to hear sounds, including music |
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Feelings listening music are very different, sometimes we feel happiness, other times we feel sad, other exited,... Feelings listening music are very different, sometimes we feel happiness, other times we feel sad, other exited,... Music causes various emotions in us: sometimes happiness, other times sadness or excitement, for example. |
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I think few people can live without music. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I mean that it's not necessary every day, but sometimes is a good therapy for our mind. I mean that it's not necessary every day, but sometimes is a good therapy for our mind. Consider: "Of course, it is not necessary to listen to music every day, but listening to it now and again is good therapy for the mind." |
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