July 26, 2021
Do We Need Emotional Support Animals?
A pig saved its owner when she fell down in the kitchen and lost consciousness. There was no one except the house pig in a house. Suddenly, the pig went to the street and lied down to be payed attention by cars. A car stopped and noticed that something happened inside of the house. They called an ambulance immediately and could save pig's owner's life. As I heard this story, I couldn't believed it. How could the pig act such a wise behavior to help her owner?
Recently, many people keep their pets as their emotional support animals. A person who own his small alligator take it to anywhere with him like his family. Another man said that he has been loving a goat in place of his precious son after his son died because of cancer. An animal give comfort to us and heal our psychological wounds. So that we need animals as our healers.
However, those owners take their pets on a street, train and even an air plain. Naturally, it cause of many troubles, such as their animals bit or scared other people. Nowadays, air plain companies prohibited that no one can take any emotional animal in an air plain.
Do We Need Emotional Support Animals?
A pig saved its owner when she fell down in the kitchen and lost consciousness.
There was no one except the house pig in athe house.
It's 'the house' not 'a house' as you are referring to a specific house.
Suddenly, the pig went to the street and lied down to be payed attention by cars.. Passing cars began to notice the pig.
It would have been 'paid', not 'payed'.
A car stopped and noticed that something happened inside of the house.
They called an ambulance immediately and could savsaved the pig's owner's life.
As I heard this story, I couldn't believed it.
How could the pig act such a wise behavior too wisely and help her owner?
Recently, many people have been keeping their pets as their emotional support animals.
A person who own hiss a small alligator take it to ans everywhere with him like hit was family.
An animals give us comfort to us and heal our psychological wounds.
So that wWe need animals as our healers.
However, those owners take their pets on a streets, trains and even an air plaineroplanes.
Naturally, it cause ofs many troublissues, such as their animals bit orecoming scared of other people.
Nowadays, air plain companies prohibited that no one can take any emotional animal in an air plainlines prohibit emotional support animals on their aeroplanes.
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July 26, 2021
Thank you so much for your correction. Yes, I will keep going. Have a great night!!
Do We Need Emotional Support Animals?
A pig saved its owner when she fell down in the kitchen and lost consciousness.
There was no one except the house pig in athe house.
Suddenly, the pig went to the street and lied down to be payed attention by the cars.
A car stopped and noticed that something has happened inside of the house.
They called an ambulance immediately and could save pig's owner's life.
As I heard this story, I couldn't believed it.
How could the pig act such a wise behavior to help her owner?
Recently, many people keep their pets as their emotional support animals.
A person who own hiss a small alligator takes it to aneverywhere with him like his family.
Another man said that he has been loving a goat in place of his precious son after his son died because of cancer.
An animal gives comfort to us and heal our psychological wounds.
So thatThat's why we need animals as our healers.
Naturally, it cause ofs many troubles, such as their animals bit or scared other people.
Nowadays, air plain companiesports have prohibited that no one can take any emotional animal in an air plain.eroplane.
July 26, 2021
Thank you so much for your correction. Have a lovely day!!
July 26, 2021
My pleasure :)
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A pig saved its owner when she fell down in the kitchen and lost consciousness. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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There was no one except the house pig in a house. There was no one except the There was no one except the It's 'the house' not 'a house' as you are referring to a specific house. |
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Suddenly, the pig went to the street and lied down to be payed attention by cars. Suddenly, the pig went to the street and lied down to be payed attention by the cars. Suddenly, the pig went to the street and lied down It would have been 'paid', not 'payed'. |
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They called an ambulance immediately and could save pig's owner's life. This sentence has been marked as perfect! They called an ambulance immediately and |
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As I heard this story, I couldn't believed it. This sentence has been marked as perfect! As I heard this story, I couldn't believe |
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How could the pig act such a wise behavior to help her owner? This sentence has been marked as perfect! How could the pig act s |
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Recently, many people keep their pets as their emotional support animals. This sentence has been marked as perfect! Recently, many people have been keeping their pets as |
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A person who own his small alligator take it to anywhere with him like his family. A person who own A person who own |
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Another man said that he has been loving a goat in place of his precious son after his son died because of cancer. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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An animal give comfort to us and heal our psychological wounds. An animal gives comfort to us and heal our psychological wounds. An |
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So that we need animals as our healers.
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However, those owners take their pets on a street, train and even an air plain. However, those owners take their pets on |
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Naturally, it cause of many troubles, such as their animals bit or scared other people. Naturally, it cause Naturally, it cause |
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Nowadays, air plain companies prohibited that no one can take any emotional animal in an air plain. Nowadays, air Nowadays, air |
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