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SonDepTrai21st

June 29, 2025

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Do we live a wasted life?

If I have the money, I would go around the world, everywhere I want, that I can think of.

Since I'm broke as f, it seems like an impossible dream for me.

The dream of fly, of freedom, that I can do whatever I want.

But for now, just grinding. Everything's hard.

I read a quote in Vietnamese, it means

"An easy life is a boring life and a boring life is a wasted life"

It was a navigation to me. Somehow I just forgot it.

Stuck into a boring, easy life. Afraid of hard things, challenging decisions, failure etc.

To be honest, it was not easy. A lot of things suddenly happened, but all I can do is stare at it, no thought, no emotion. I tried to cry, but it's even harder.

Haha, today I had a disease called "writer's block", I didn't know what to write down here.

Then I remembered that quote, opened the book, translated it to English to bring it here.

I went back again, start small, consistency. Sometimes things hard, I hate it, but I keep going.

Because I don't want a wasted life, a life when I near death, I'd cry because of laziness, procrastination, don't try hard thing, or try my best.

I rather die because I do stupid things than dying because of being a b*tch who just cry and regret.

How about you guys? Is there anything you want to do, when you was a child, what is your dream, when life is too hard and you want to give up, do you think about it, what is the life that you would never regret when you get near the death?


Hmm, that's it, it's my small message when I had "writer's block". Hope you might get an insight, a perspective that might remind you, when life is hard, don't give up, I'm here with you.


The original quote: "một cuộc đời dễ dàng là một cuộc đời buồn tẻ và một cuộc đời buồn tẻ là một cuộc đời lãng phí"

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If I haved the money, I would go around the world, everywhere that I want, that I can think of.

The dream of flying, of freedom, that I can do whatever I want.

I read a quote in Vietnamese, it means ¶
says¶

"An easy life is a boring life and a boring life is a wasted life"



It was a
navigation toguide for me.

Haha, today I had a diseasecondition called "writer's block", I didn't know what to write down here.

Sometimes things are hard, I hate it, but I keep going.

Because I don't want a wasted life, a life when I am near death, I'd cry because of laziness, procrastination, don'not trying hard things, or trynot trying my best.

I rather die because I do stupid things than dyingie because of being a b*tch who just cryies and regrets.

Is there anything you want to do, when you wasere a child,? what is your dream,? when life is too hard and you want to give up, do you think about it,? what is the life that you would never regret when you get near the death?

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Very thought provoking writing, I am unsure if it is a stylistic choice but it is uncommon to write in English with many short phrases separated by commas it is not necessarily wrong however it just makes the writing sound very poetic and formal.

My dream is travel the world and live in foreign countries.

If I haved the money, I would go around the world, everanywhere I want, that I canould think of.

The dream of flying, of freedom, that I can do whatever I want.

Stuck into a boring, easy life.

Sometimes things are hard, I hate it, but I keep going.

Because I don't want ato wasted life, a life when I near death, I'd cry because of laziness, procrastination, don't try hard things, or try my best.

I'd rather die because I do stupid things, than dying because of being a b*tch who just crys and regrets.

Is there anything you want to do, when you wasere a child, what is your dream, when life is too hard and you want to give up, do you think about it, what is the life that you would never regret when you get near the death?

If I have thed money, I would go around the world, everywhere I want, that I can think of.

When you are making a wish, the construction is "if I had".

The dream of flying, of freedom, that I cano do whatever I want.

You would either say "of flying" or "to fly". You also don't need "that" in this construction.

I read a quote in Vietnamese, it means


"An easy life is a boring life and a boring life is a wasted life"



It was
a navigation topointing at me.

Not sure what you meant by "navigation to me", but if the idea is "it was describing me," you could say, "it was pointing at me"

Stuck into a boring, easy life.

"Stuck into" would imply that someone was forcing you into the boring life. The more common phrase is "stuck in" something.

Sometimes things are hard, I hate it, but I keep going.

You need to add are "things are hard". Without "are" there is not verb in the first part of the sentence.

Because I don't want a wasted life, a life when I am near death,. I'd cry because of laziness, procrastination, don't try hard things, or try my best.

You need a verb, "am" to go with "I". Also "things" is plural in this context, multiple hard things.

Is there anything you wanted to do, when you wasere a child, what is your dream, when life is too hard and you want to give up, do you think about it, what is the life that you would never regret when you get near the death?

This is a question about the past. So it would be "wanted" when you "were a child".

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You use casual language and English slang very well in this writing. Just a few corrections to verb tenses mostly. The thoughts are clear and well conveyed.

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SonDepTrai21st

July 2, 2025

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Thank you so much!

I tried to use "navigation", meaning of a guide, give me direction.

Yeah maybe you thought it was weird, unnatural XD

Do we live a wasted life?


If I have the money, I would go around the world, everywhere I want, that I can think of.


If I have thed money, I would go around the world, everywhere I want, that I can think of.

When you are making a wish, the construction is "if I had".

If I haved the money, I would go around the world, everanywhere I want, that I canould think of.

If I haved the money, I would go around the world, everywhere that I want, that I can think of.

Since I'm broke as f, it seems like an impossible dream for me.


The dream of fly, of freedom, that I can do whatever I want.


The dream of flying, of freedom, that I cano do whatever I want.

You would either say "of flying" or "to fly". You also don't need "that" in this construction.

The dream of flying, of freedom, that I can do whatever I want.

The dream of flying, of freedom, that I can do whatever I want.

But for now, just grinding.


Everything's hard.


I read a quote in Vietnamese, it means "An easy life is a boring life and a boring life is a wasted life" It was a navigation to me.


I read a quote in Vietnamese, it means


"An easy life is a boring life and a boring life is a wasted life"



It was
a navigation topointing at me.

Not sure what you meant by "navigation to me", but if the idea is "it was describing me," you could say, "it was pointing at me"

I read a quote in Vietnamese, it means ¶
says¶

"An easy life is a boring life and a boring life is a wasted life"



It was a
navigation toguide for me.

Somehow I just forgot it.


Stuck into a boring, easy life.


Stuck into a boring, easy life.

"Stuck into" would imply that someone was forcing you into the boring life. The more common phrase is "stuck in" something.

Stuck into a boring, easy life.

Afraid of hard things, challenging decisions, failure etc.


To be honest, it was not easy.


A lot of things suddenly happened, but all I can do is stare at it, no thought, no emotion.


I tried to cry, but it's even harder.


Haha, today I had a disease called "writer's block", I didn't know what to write down here.


Haha, today I had a diseasecondition called "writer's block", I didn't know what to write down here.

Then I remembered that quote, opened the book, translated it to English to bring it here.


I went back again, start small, consistency.


Sometimes things hard, I hate it, but I keep going.


Sometimes things are hard, I hate it, but I keep going.

You need to add are "things are hard". Without "are" there is not verb in the first part of the sentence.

Sometimes things are hard, I hate it, but I keep going.

Sometimes things are hard, I hate it, but I keep going.

Because I don't want a wasted life, a life when I near death, I'd cry because of laziness, procrastination, don't try hard thing, or try my best.


Because I don't want a wasted life, a life when I am near death,. I'd cry because of laziness, procrastination, don't try hard things, or try my best.

You need a verb, "am" to go with "I". Also "things" is plural in this context, multiple hard things.

Because I don't want ato wasted life, a life when I near death, I'd cry because of laziness, procrastination, don't try hard things, or try my best.

Because I don't want a wasted life, a life when I am near death, I'd cry because of laziness, procrastination, don'not trying hard things, or trynot trying my best.

I rather die because I do stupid things than dying because of being a b*tch who just cry and regret.


I'd rather die because I do stupid things, than dying because of being a b*tch who just crys and regrets.

I rather die because I do stupid things than dyingie because of being a b*tch who just cryies and regrets.

How about you guys?


Is there anything you want to do, when you was a child, what is your dream, when life is too hard and you want to give up, do you think about it, what is the life that you would never regret when you get near the death?


Is there anything you wanted to do, when you wasere a child, what is your dream, when life is too hard and you want to give up, do you think about it, what is the life that you would never regret when you get near the death?

This is a question about the past. So it would be "wanted" when you "were a child".

Is there anything you want to do, when you wasere a child, what is your dream, when life is too hard and you want to give up, do you think about it, what is the life that you would never regret when you get near the death?

Is there anything you want to do, when you wasere a child,? what is your dream,? when life is too hard and you want to give up, do you think about it,? what is the life that you would never regret when you get near the death?

Hmm, that's it, it's my small message when I had "writer's block".


Hope you might get an insight, a perspective that might remind you, when life is hard, don't give up, I'm here with you.


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