May 18, 2020
Do the Real Thing - Scott H. Young
Recently I read article "Do the real thing". It's really interesting and useful. From it Iearned 3 rules:
1) Nothing is often better than something
2) The hard way is the easy way
3) If you’re not sure what the real thing is, just ask
Before read this article, I rethought some things. I started look to situation differently. I got, that a lot of things, what I did, is fake.
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It' was really interesting and useful.
From it I Iearned 3 rules:
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Do the Real Thing - Scott H. Young
Recently, I read an article called "Do the rReal tThing".
"Recently" is used as a transition word in this sentence, so it needs a comma
"Article" needs an article in front of it, so I put "an". You can also put "the" - it doesn't matter :)
It' was really interesting and useful.
You were using past tense above, so I changed "It is" (present) to "It was" (past)
From it, I learned 3 rules:
Each verb needs a subject. You were the one who read the article, so I added "I" as the subject, thus making it "I learned..."
1) Nothing is often better than something
2) The hard way is the easy way
3) If you’re not sure what the real thing is, just ask
Before I read this article, I rethought some things over.
Each verb needs a subject. You were the one who read the article, so I added "I" as the subject, thus making it "I read..."
"Rethought" is technically correct, but it sounds really awkward, and I barely hear it. Instead, you can say "I thought it over," "I thought about it in depth", or "I thought about it more"
I started to look ato situations differently.
I got, that a lot of things, w that I did, is were fake.
"things" is plural -> "were" instead of "was"
You didn't need the commas at all in this sentence
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It's really interesting and useful. It You were using past tense above, so I changed "It is" (present) to "It was" (past) It |
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From it Iearned 3 rules: From it, I learned 3 rules: Each verb needs a subject. You were the one who read the article, so I added "I" as the subject, thus making it "I learned..." From it I Iearned 3 rules: |
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1) Nothing is often better than something This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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2) The hard way is the easy way This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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3) If you’re not sure what the real thing is, just ask This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Before read this article, I rethought some things. Before I read this article, I Each verb needs a subject. You were the one who read the article, so I added "I" as the subject, thus making it "I read..." "Rethought" is technically correct, but it sounds really awkward, and I barely hear it. Instead, you can say "I thought it over," "I thought about it in depth", or "I thought about it more" Before I read this article, I It would make more sense if it went: "After I read this article, I began to think more carefully about some things/ to think stuff over" |
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I started look to situation differently. I started to look at I started to look |
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I got, that a lot of things, what I did, is fake. I got "things" is plural -> "were" instead of "was" You didn't need the commas at all in this sentence I |
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Do the Real Thing - Scott H. Young This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Recently I read article "Do the real thing". Recently, I read an article called "Do the "Recently" is used as a transition word in this sentence, so it needs a comma "Article" needs an article in front of it, so I put "an". You can also put "the" - it doesn't matter :)
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