Dec. 13, 2021
Do that, I become better
Practice makes perfect.
In this quote “practice” means repeat, repeat and repeat.
I believe this statement and keep practice again and again.
But I still not perfect!
Not even close to good!
Yesterday, I think I find out why, even I put so much time to practice yet I still no way near good.
I didn’t take any note at all.
Same as reading.
I read so many books but I never take note.
So, I just keep forget.
Will I become perfect later?
I believe this statement and keep practiceing again and again.
But I'm still not perfect!
Yesterday, I think I fiound out why, even though I put so much time into practice yet Iing, I'm still no waywhere near good.
Because you used "even" earlier (which would've been better as "even though"), you don't use "yet" in the second connected sentence.
I didn’t takenever took any notes at all.
Since you're talking about something you didn't do at any point before, using "never" sounds more natural.
Same aswith reading.
Your choice wasn't wrong, but this matches the flow of your sentences more.
I read so many books but I never takeook notes.
So, I just keept forgetting.
Will I eventually become perfect later?
Since you're talking about a long-term result, it sounds more natural to say "eventually".
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I like the message you expressed :)
Your writing is also quite nice, though I admit, you made some mistakes with verb tenses (present vs. past).
Overall though, very nicely done.
Do that, Iand I will become better
Or maybe "Do that, be better" if you want something short and snappy.
Practice makes perfect.
In this quote “practice” means repeat, repeat and repeat.
I believe this statement and keep practiceing again and again.
But I'm still not perfect!
Not even close to good!
Yesterday, I think I fiound out why, even when I put so much time into practice yet Iing, I'm still no waywhere near good.
I didn’on't take any notes at all.
"Didn't" makes it sound like one time you didn't take notes. "Don't" makes it sound like you usually don't take notes.
Same as reading.
I read so many books but I never take notes.
So, I just keep forgeting.
Will I become perfect later?
Feedback
"Take note" means to notice something, while "take notes" means to write stuff down. I assumed you meant "take notes" because not noticing anything while practicing seems difficult, but I could have misunderstood.
I feel like perfection is out of reach for most things, but that doesn't mean practice is not worthwhile. I keep telling myself to be happy with the progress I've made, and to keep trying!
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Do that, I become better Do that, Or maybe "Do that, be better" if you want something short and snappy. |
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In this quote “practice” means repeat, repeat and repeat. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I didn’t take any note at all. I d "Didn't" makes it sound like one time you didn't take notes. "Don't" makes it sound like you usually don't take notes. I Since you're talking about something you didn't do at any point before, using "never" sounds more natural. |
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Same as reading. This sentence has been marked as perfect! Same Your choice wasn't wrong, but this matches the flow of your sentences more. |
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I read so many books but I never take note. I read so many books but I never take notes. I read so many books but I never t |
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So, I just keep forget. So, I just keep forgeting. So, I just ke |
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Will I become perfect later? This sentence has been marked as perfect! Will I eventually become perfect Since you're talking about a long-term result, it sounds more natural to say "eventually". |
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