July 24, 2021
Last two weeks when I was working early shift, mid shift.
I decided in my own time I will doing exercise as much as I could.
So, I did and I was happy about that.
But this week is night shift.
Even that isn’t much works to do for the night shift.
I will feel tried in the next day.
So, my plan for the week will just stay home rest.
This is the second day.
The fact that my body did feels tire because stay up all night.
But stay home taking rest is boring.
I need to think of something to do rather just doing nothing.
Do something
LThe last two weeks when I was working early shift, mid shift.
Colloquially this is okay, but it isn't really a complete sentence. Better if you combine it with the next sentence, something like: "The last two weeks when I was working early and mid shift, I decided I would do as much exercise in my own time as I could."
I decided that in my own time I will doingould do as much exercise as much as I could.
"will doing" is very bad. "will be doing" is the correct form for that tense, future progressive. But using that tense here is a bit unnatural. This future-in-the-past construction is better, because the decision is in the past, but the action was in the future *when you made the decision*.
So, I did, and I was happy about that.
But this week is night shift.
Even that isn’t much works to do for the night shift.
It's really difficult to understand what you're trying to say here. Maybe "Even though there isn't much work to do in the night shift, I will feel tired the next day"?
I will feel tried inired the next day.
I can't explain why, but "in" feels very strange here. It does seem like it should fit, but it doesn't. Prepositions are so difficult.
So, my plan for the week willis just to stay home and rest.
Or "my plan is that I will just stay home and rest".
This is the second day of the week.
It doesn't feel obvious enough to omit this.
The fact that mMy body did feels tired because I stayed up all night.
Many problems with this sentence.
But staying home and taking rest is boring.
"resting" is more natural here, but this is okay.
I need to think of something to do rather than just doing nothing.
Do something This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
Last two weeks when I was working early shift, mid shift.
Colloquially this is okay, but it isn't really a complete sentence. Better if you combine it with the next sentence, something like: "The last two weeks when I was working early and mid shift, I decided I would do as much exercise in my own time as I could." |
I decided in my own time I will doing exercise as much as I could. I decided that in my own time I w "will doing" is very bad. "will be doing" is the correct form for that tense, future progressive. But using that tense here is a bit unnatural. This future-in-the-past construction is better, because the decision is in the past, but the action was in the future *when you made the decision*. |
So, I did and I was happy about that. So |
But this week is night shift. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
Even that isn’t much works to do for the night shift. Even that isn’t much works to do for the night shift. It's really difficult to understand what you're trying to say here. Maybe "Even though there isn't much work to do in the night shift, I will feel tired the next day"? |
I will feel tried in the next day. I will feel t I can't explain why, but "in" feels very strange here. It does seem like it should fit, but it doesn't. Prepositions are so difficult. |
So, my plan for the week will just stay home rest. So, my plan for the week Or "my plan is that I will just stay home and rest". |
This is the second day. This is the second day of the week. It doesn't feel obvious enough to omit this. |
The fact that my body did feels tire because stay up all night.
Many problems with this sentence. |
But stay home taking rest is boring. But staying home and taking rest is boring. "resting" is more natural here, but this is okay. |
I need to think of something to do rather just doing nothing. I need to think of something to do rather than just doing nothing. |
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