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LLLeslie

Aug. 23, 2025

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Do you prefer baths or showers?

There are so many different ways to get our body(s?) clean. The most common ones are to take a bath or have a shower. So, do you have a preference? Why is that?
For me, I prefer showers {for/ based on} three reasons.

First one, it's cleaner. Taking a shower uses running water, while baths use dead water. If I was in a really dirty situation, steeping myself into a tub of water just doesn't really seem helpful. By showering, I can flush the dirtiness away from my body without having to encounter them again. Has the thought ever occurred to you, that where you're wondering "Wait, did I just use foot-washing water to wash my face?". See where I'm going?

Second one, it's quicker. I don't actually have a bathtub in my bathroom, but I take it that it costs a while filling a tub full with water, and so does empty it. And I'm just not a lover of waiting on such trivial things.

Last one, it's more friendly to our environment. As a man (no offense to women), I just don't believe it will take more than a tub of water for me to do a shower. Although in where I live, the amount of water resources never seems to be a problem, it's always good to reduce the usage; if not for posterity, then for my water bills.

So, these are the reasons why I prefer showers rather than baths. But of course, enjoying yourself with a Jacuzzi while relaxing to sweep off today's tiredness is another thing. Either way, remember to wash yourself when necessary.

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Do you prefer baths or showers?

There are so many different ways to get our body(s?)ies

+ ies (suffix)

The most common oneways are to either take a bath or havtake a shower.

So, do you have a preferencewhich one do you guys do?

Why is that?

For me, I prefer showers {for/ babecaused on}f three reasons.

First one, it's cleaner.

Taking a shower uses running water, while baths use deadirty water.

脏水

If I was in a really dirty situation, steepmy body was dirty, putting myself into a tub of water just doesn't really seem helpful.dirty water wouldn't help my situation that much.

By showering, I can flush the dirtiness away from my body without having to encounter them againdeal with it constantly.

Has the thought ever occurred to you, that where you're wonderingve you ever thought, "Wait, did I just use foot-washing water to wash my face?".

See where I'm goingat I mean?

Second one, it's quicker.

like 第三, second
not second one

I don't actually have a bathtub in my bathroom, but I take it that it costs a whilelot filling a tub full with water, and so does/or emptying it.

and/or is not recommended in formal english, but it works

And I'm just not a loverfan of waiting on such trivial things. like bath water.

Last oneFinally, it's more friendly to our environment.

As a man (no offense to women), I just don't believe it will take more than a tub of water for me to do a shower.

AlEven though in wthere I live, the amount of water resources never seems to be a problemare no problems with the water supply where I live, it's always good to reduce the usage; if not for posteritythe environment, then for my water bills.

posterity?

So, these are the reasons why I prefer showers rather than taking a baths.

But of course, enjoying yourself within a Jacuzzi while relaxing to sweep off today's tiredness is another thing.

Either way, remember to wash yourself body when necessary.

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LLLeslie

Aug. 27, 2025

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Thank you. And yeah, we tend to think that protecting the environment is for our offspring.

There are so many different ways to get our body(s?)ies

The plural of body is bodies.

The most common ones are to take a bath or have a shower.

You could also say "methods" instead of "ones", but it makes sense either way.

For me, I prefer showers {for/ based on} three reasons.

"for" is more natural here, but "based on" will also be understandable.

First one, it's cleaner.

"First one, it's cleaner" could be "Firstly, it's cleaner." or "The first reason is that it's cleaner."

It is still understandable, though.

Taking a shower uses running water, while baths use deadstill water.

I understood what you meant by dead, but "still" would be a better word.

If I was in a really dirty situation, steeping myself into a tub of water just doesn't really seem like it would be helpful.

The original sentence makes sense too, this is only a small edit.

By showering, I can flush the dirtiness away from my body without having to encounter ithem again.

Also makes sense, just a minor change.

Has the thought ever occurred to you, that where you're wonderingve you ever had the thought, "Wait, did I just use foot-washing water to wash my face?".

The original sentence makes sense, it's just been edited to flow more smoothly.

Second one, it's quicker.

"Second one, it's quicker" could also be "Second, it's quicker." or "The second reason is that it's quicker."

I don't actually have a bathtub in my bathroom, but I take it that it costs a whilelot of time to filling a tub full with water, and so doesto empty it.

You could also say "I don't actually have a bathtub in my bathroom, but I know that it takes a long time to fill a tub with water and to empty it afterwards." Both versions work.

Although in where I live, the amount of water resources never seems to be a problem where I live, it's always good to reduce the usage; if not for posterity, then for my water bills.

It already makes sense. I only edited it to be a bit more smooth.

So, these are the reasons why I prefer showers rather thanover baths.

You could say "In conclusion" instead of "So" if you really wanted to, but it's not necessary.

"showers rather than baths" makes sense, "showers over baths" is just more natural.

But of course, enjoying yourself with a Jacuzzi while relaxing to sweep off tohe day's tiredness is another thing.

Either is fine.

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Your English is very good! Most of the edits I suggested are very minor changes to make sentences flow more easily.

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LLLeslie

Aug. 25, 2025

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Thank you so much. I really appreciate your patience with my random musings, despite my clumsiness.

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Kaleidozone

Aug. 25, 2025

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You're welcome. It's okay to be clumsy, you're still learning, as am I.

Do you prefer baths or showers?

There are so many different ways to get our body(s?)

bodies

clean.

The most common ones are to take a bath or have a shower.

It’s most common to use “take” for both bath and shower

So, do you have a preference?

Why is that?

For me, I prefer showers {for/ based on} three reasons.

“For” sounds more natural, but both are grammatical

First one, it's cleaner.

You can just say “First,” here.

Taking a shower uses running water, while baths use dead water.

This isn’t natural in English. You can say “still” water, but that’s not quite natural. Better to reword this to something like “…while baths make you soak in the same water.”

If I was in a really dirty situation, steeping myself into a tub of water just doesn't really seem helpful.

To steep is really only used for making tea. You can say “soaking in a tub of water”

By showering, I can flushrinse the dirtiness away from my body without havcoming into encounter them againact with the debris.

Has the thought ever occurred to you, that where you're wondering: "Wait, did I just use foot-washing water to wash my face?".

Haha, ewww

See where I'm going?

Second one, it's quicker.

I don't actually have a bathtub in my bathroom, but I take ibet that it costtakes a while to filling a tub full with water, and also doesto empty it.

And I'm just not a loverfan of waiting onfor such trivial things.

Last one, it's more friendly to our environment.

As a man (no offense to women), I just don't believe it will take more than a tub of water for me to dotake a shower.

Although in where I live, the amount of water resources never seems to be a problem, it's always good to reduce the usage; if not for posterity, then for my water bills.

So, these are the reasons why I prefer showers rather thanto baths.

But of course, enjoying yourself within a Jacuzzi while relaxing to sweep off today's tirednwash away the day's stress is another thing.

Either way, remember to wash yourself when necessary.

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It’s not easy to write a lengthy passage on a single topic with detailed examples - well done! I agree with you that showers are the way to go.

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LLLeslie

Aug. 23, 2025

1

Thank you for the encouragement and corrections!

There's are so many different ways to get our body(s?)


clean.


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The most common ones are take a bath or have a shower.


So, do you have a preference?


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So, do you have a preferencewhich one do you guys do?

Why is that?


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Why is that?

For me, I perefer showers {for/ based on} three reasons.


Firtst one, it's cleaner.


By showering, I can flush the dirtiness away from my body without having to encounter them again.


By showering, I can flushrinse the dirtiness away from my body without havcoming into encounter them againact with the debris.

By showering, I can flush the dirtiness away from my body without having to encounter ithem again.

Also makes sense, just a minor change.

By showering, I can flush the dirtiness away from my body without having to encounter them againdeal with it constantly.

Has the thought ever occurred to you, that where you're wondering "Wait, did I just use foot-washing water to wash my face?".


Has the thought ever occurred to you, that where you're wondering: "Wait, did I just use foot-washing water to wash my face?".

Haha, ewww

Has the thought ever occurred to you, that where you're wonderingve you ever had the thought, "Wait, did I just use foot-washing water to wash my face?".

The original sentence makes sense, it's just been edited to flow more smoothly.

Has the thought ever occurred to you, that where you're wonderingve you ever thought, "Wait, did I just use foot-washing water to wash my face?".

See where I'm going?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

See where I'm goingat I mean?

Second one, it's quicker.


Second one, it's quicker.

Second one, it's quicker.

"Second one, it's quicker" could also be "Second, it's quicker." or "The second reason is that it's quicker."

Second one, it's quicker.

like 第三, second not second one

I don't actually have a bathtub in my bathroom, but I take it that it costs a while filling a tub full with water, and so does empty it.


I don't actually have a bathtub in my bathroom, but I take ibet that it costtakes a while to filling a tub full with water, and also doesto empty it.

I don't actually have a bathtub in my bathroom, but I take it that it costs a whilelot of time to filling a tub full with water, and so doesto empty it.

You could also say "I don't actually have a bathtub in my bathroom, but I know that it takes a long time to fill a tub with water and to empty it afterwards." Both versions work.

I don't actually have a bathtub in my bathroom, but I take it that it costs a whilelot filling a tub full with water, and so does/or emptying it.

and/or is not recommended in formal english, but it works

And I'm just not a lover of waiting on such trivial things.


And I'm just not a loverfan of waiting onfor such trivial things.

And I'm just not a loverfan of waiting on such trivial things. like bath water.

Last one, it's more friendly to our environment.


Last one, it's more friendly to our environment.

Last oneFinally, it's more friendly to our environment.

As a man (no offense to women), I just don't believe it will take more than a tub of water for me to do a shower.


As a man (no offense to women), I just don't believe it will take more than a tub of water for me to dotake a shower.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Although in where I live, the amount of water resources never seems to be a problem, it's always good to reduce the usage; if not for posterity, then for my water bills.


Although in where I live, the amount of water resources never seems to be a problem, it's always good to reduce the usage; if not for posterity, then for my water bills.

Although in where I live, the amount of water resources never seems to be a problem where I live, it's always good to reduce the usage; if not for posterity, then for my water bills.

It already makes sense. I only edited it to be a bit more smooth.

AlEven though in wthere I live, the amount of water resources never seems to be a problemare no problems with the water supply where I live, it's always good to reduce the usage; if not for posteritythe environment, then for my water bills.

posterity?

So, these are the reasons why I prefer showers rather than baths.


So, these are the reasons why I prefer showers rather thanto baths.

So, these are the reasons why I prefer showers rather thanover baths.

You could say "In conclusion" instead of "So" if you really wanted to, but it's not necessary. "showers rather than baths" makes sense, "showers over baths" is just more natural.

So, these are the reasons why I prefer showers rather than taking a baths.

But of course, enjoying yourself with a Jacuzzi while relaxing to sweep off today's tiredness is another thing.


But of course, enjoying yourself within a Jacuzzi while relaxing to sweep off today's tirednwash away the day's stress is another thing.

But of course, enjoying yourself with a Jacuzzi while relaxing to sweep off tohe day's tiredness is another thing.

Either is fine.

But of course, enjoying yourself within a Jacuzzi while relaxing to sweep off today's tiredness is another thing.

Either way, remember to wash yourself when necessary.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Either way, remember to wash yourself body when necessary.

Do you prefer baths or showers?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Taking a shower uses running water, while baths use dead water.


Taking a shower uses running water, while baths use dead water.

This isn’t natural in English. You can say “still” water, but that’s not quite natural. Better to reword this to something like “…while baths make you soak in the same water.”

Taking a shower uses running water, while baths use deadstill water.

I understood what you meant by dead, but "still" would be a better word.

Taking a shower uses running water, while baths use deadirty water.

脏水

If I was in a really dirty situation, steeping myself into a tub of water just doesn't seem really helpful.


Do perefer baths or showers?


For me, I prefer showers {for/ based on} three reasons.


For me, I prefer showers {for/ based on} three reasons.

“For” sounds more natural, but both are grammatical

For me, I prefer showers {for/ based on} three reasons.

"for" is more natural here, but "based on" will also be understandable.

For me, I prefer showers {for/ babecaused on}f three reasons.

First one, it's cleaner.


First one, it's cleaner.

You can just say “First,” here.

First one, it's cleaner.

"First one, it's cleaner" could be "Firstly, it's cleaner." or "The first reason is that it's cleaner." It is still understandable, though.

First one, it's cleaner.

There are so many different ways to get our body(s?)


There are so many different ways to get our body(s?)

bodies

There are so many different ways to get our body(s?)ies

The plural of body is bodies.

There are so many different ways to get our body(s?)ies

+ ies (suffix)

The most common ones are to take a bath or have a shower.


The most common ones are to take a bath or have a shower.

It’s most common to use “take” for both bath and shower

The most common ones are to take a bath or have a shower.

You could also say "methods" instead of "ones", but it makes sense either way.

The most common oneways are to either take a bath or havtake a shower.

If I was in a really dirty situation, steeping myself into a tub of water just doesn't really seem helpful.


If I was in a really dirty situation, steeping myself into a tub of water just doesn't really seem helpful.

To steep is really only used for making tea. You can say “soaking in a tub of water”

If I was in a really dirty situation, steeping myself into a tub of water just doesn't really seem like it would be helpful.

The original sentence makes sense too, this is only a small edit.

If I was in a really dirty situation, steepmy body was dirty, putting myself into a tub of water just doesn't really seem helpful.dirty water wouldn't help my situation that much.

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