Taking My Family Pictures Taking Family Pictures

Nothing wrong with your title! :) Just a stylistic change.

Every February, my family takes pictures at a small shop near myour house. Every February, my family takes pictures at a small shop near our house.

That is because the school thattending our kids attend requires new pictures for their new classes. That is because the school that our kids attend requires new pictures for their new classes.

I can’t explain but it’s a little more natural to say “This is because (…)” in this sentence. But it doesn’t really matter, so no worries! 👍

Thatis is because the school attending our kids attend requires new pictures for their new classes. This is because the school our kids attend requires new pictures for their new classes.

That is because the school our kids are attending our kids requires new pictures for their new classes. That is because the school our kids are attending requires new pictures for their new classes.

Thatis is because the school thattending our kids attend requires new pictures for their new classes. This is because the school that our kids attend requires new pictures for their new classes.

I fixed the description of the subject here, it should be "the school that our kids attend." Your original statement makes it sound like the school is "going to" your children. :)

My first son has taken the picture since 2016, and my two other kids also have taken the picture for three years, now. My first son has taken the picture since 2016, and my two other kids also have taken the picture for three years, now.

Be careful of the word order. Your sentence suggests this interpretation, “My children have taken the photos” i.e. your children operated the cameras. Or “My first son has *had his pictures* taken since 2016, and my two other kids have also had their pictures taken for three years, now.”

My first son has taken the picture since 2016, and my two other kids also have taken the picture for three years, now. My first son has taken the picture since 2016, and my two other kids also have taken the picture for three years now.

The sentence doesn't sound natural, is it your kid taking the picture or are they having a picture taken of them?

My first son has taken thehad his picture taken since 2016, and my two other kids also have takenhad their pictures taken for three years, now. My first son has had his picture taken since 2016, and my two other kids also have had their pictures taken for three years now.

My first son has taken theschool pictures since 2016, and my two othyounger kids also have taken theschool pictures for the past three years, now. My first son has taken school pictures since 2016, and my two younger kids have taken school pictures for the past three years, now.

I added some words to provide more clarity to the sentence.

With these yearly pictures taken every year, I can see at a glance how much my kids are growing. With these yearly pictures, I can see at a glance how much my kids are growing.

I hope this routine will continue until my kids will become adults. I hope this routine will continue until my kids become adults.

I hope this routineitual will continue until my kids will become adults. I hope this ritual will continue until my kids will become adults.

"Ritual" is a more fitting/natural word in this context but routine is still correct :)

I hope this routinetradition will continue until my kids will become adults. I hope this tradition will continue until my kids will become adults.

Your sentence is correct but this is a better word choice. :)

I hope this routine will continue until my kids will become adults. I hope this routine will continue until my kids become adults.