June 22, 2026
I've been on my shool trip last week. On the last day of the trip, My friends said they were really exhausted and would have enought sleep and long shower. After I got back home, I did the bare minimum to go to bet, such as eating dinner and taking shower. That's it!
I was worried that everyone would bring their carry backs instead of the suitcases. But most people had suitcases. Some people had huge suitcases which looked for normal travels. I though they had a lot of snacks in their suitcases.
It took me about four hours to get there from my school by the school bus. I fell asleep on the bus on the way and way back.
On the first day, I did zipling which you can feel like you are flying in the sky because you can see the view from the top. It is my favourite activity.
I also did kayak after the dinner. I did water activities every day expect the last day and the hiking day. I did one that I rided on one boat and puddle by myself and one that puddle by group of people. I had muscle pains on my arms.
I'm going to continue to write about what I did on the trip tomorrow as well because I can't write everything in only this page.
About My School Trip!
I've beenLast week I was on mya school trip last week.
Last week I was on a school trip.
On the last day of the trip, Mmy friends said they were really exhausted and would have enought sleep andant to go home to take a long shower and sleep.
On the last day of the trip, my friends said they were really exhausted and want to go home to take a long shower and sleep.
After I got back home, I did the bare minimum to go to betd, such as eating dinner and taking a shower.
After I got back home, I did the bare minimum to go to bed, such as eating dinner and taking a shower.
That's it!
I was worried that everyone would bring their carry backsbackpack instead of thea suitcases.,
I was worried that everyone would bring their backpack instead of a suitcase,
Bbut most people had suitcases.
but most people had suitcases.
Some people had huge suitcases which looked for normal travelslike they were going on a long trip.
Some people had huge suitcases which looked like they were going on a long trip.
I though they had a lot of snacks in their suitcases.
It took me about four hours to get there from my school by the schoolAfter leaving the school, it took about four hours to get to our destination by bus.
After leaving the school, it took about four hours to get to our destination by bus.
I fell asleep on the bus on the way andthere and the way back.
I fell asleep on the bus on the way there and the way back.
On the first day, I didwent ziplining which you can fefelt like you are flying in the sky because you can see the vieweverything from the topair.
On the first day, I went ziplining which felt like flying in the sky because you can see everything from the air.
It is my favourite activity.
I also didwent kayaking after the dinner.
I also went kayaking after dinner.
I diparticipated in the offered water activities every day, expect for the last day and the day we went hiking day.
I participated in the offered water activities every day, expect for the last day and the day we went hiking.
I did one that Iwas also able to rided on onea boat anthat I could puaddle by myself and one that puddle bythen later I was on a boat were a group of people could paddle.
I was also able to ride on a boat that I could paddle by myself and then later I was on a boat were a group of people could paddle.
I had muscle pains oin my arms.
I had muscle pains in my arms.
I'm going to continue to write about what I did on the trip tomorrow as well because I can't write everything in only this pagethis one post.
I'm going to continue to write about what I did on the trip tomorrow as well because I can't write everything in this one post.
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Good job!
A lot of tough sentences, but you did really well! I could definitely understand what you were trying to say in each sentence, even if there were a few adjustments needed! Keep up the good work and glad you enjoyed your school trip!
About My School Trip!
I've been was on my school trip last week.
I was on my school trip last week.
On the last day of the trip, Mmy friends said they were really exhausted and (that they) would haveget enought sleep and take a long shower (when they get home).
On the last day of the trip, my friends said they were really exhausted and (that they) would get enough sleep and take a long shower (when they get home).
After I got back home, I did the bare minimum to go to betd, such as eating dinner and taking a shower.
After I got back home, I did the bare minimum to go to bed, such as eating dinner and taking a shower.
That's it!
I was worried that everyone would bring their carry bbackpacks instead of their suitcases.,
I was worried that everyone would bring their backpacks instead of their suitcases,
I'm not sure what "carry backs" are, but I'm assuming this is what you meant. Also I'm connecting this sentence with the next one.
Bbut most people had suitcases.
but most people had suitcases.
Some people had huge suitcases which looked for normallike they were for regular travels.
Some people had huge suitcases which looked like they were for regular travel.
"normal" works too, but I think "regular" fits slightly better here.
I thought they had a lot of snacks in their suitcases. I thought they had a lot of snacks in their suitcases.
It took me about four hours to get there from my school by the school bus.
It took me about four hours to get there from my school by school bus.
I fell asleep on the bus on the way andthere and on the way back.
I fell asleep on the bus on the way there and on the way back.
On the first day, I did ziplining which you can feel like you are flying in the sky because you can see the view from the top. On the first day, I did ziplining which you can feel like you are flying in the sky because you can see the view from the top.
It is my favourite activity.
I also did kayaking after the dinner.
I also did kayaking after dinner.
I did water activities every day expect the last day and the hiking day.
I did one thatwhere I rioded on one boat and puaddled by myself and one that puwas paddled by a group of people.
I did one where I rode on one boat and paddled by myself and one that was paddled by a group of people.
I had muscle pains oin my arms.
I had muscle pains in my arms.
I'm going to continue to write about what I did on the trip tomorrow as well because I can't write everything ion only this page.
I'm going to continue to write about what I did on the trip tomorrow as well because I can't write everything on only this page.
I've be went on my school trip last week.
I went on my school trip last week.
I've been is used to say something like "I've been there before". Say I went if you are talking about a specific situation like going on a school trip. A school trip can also be called a field trip, which is more common to say in America than school trip.
On the last day of the trip, Mmy friends said they were really exhausted and would have enought sleep and long showerto take a long shower and get enough sleep.
On the last day of the trip, my friends said they were really exhausted and would have to take a long shower and get enough sleep.
I think this is what you are trying to say in this sentence.
After I got back home, I did the bare minimum to go to betd, such as eating dinner and taking a shower.
After I got back home, I did the bare minimum to go to bed, such as eating dinner and taking a shower.
That's it!
I was worried that everyone would bring their carry bbackpacks instead of the suitcases.
I was worried that everyone would bring their backpacks instead of suitcases.
A backpack is that bag that has two straps over your shoulders.
B, but most people had suitcases.
, but most people had suitcases.
This should be part of the previous sentence.
I was worried that everyone would bring their backpacks instead of suitcases, but most people had suitcases.
Some people had huge suitcases which looked for normal travels.
Some people had huge suitcases which looked normal.
I thought they had a lot of snacks in their suitcases. I thought they had a lot of snacks in their suitcases.
thought is past tense of think. Though is a completely different word.
I fell asleep on the bus on the way andthere and the way back.
I fell asleep on the bus on the way there and the way back.
On the first day, I didwent zipling which you caning. You feel like you are flying in the sky because you can see the view from the topup high.
On the first day, I went ziplining. You feel like you are flying in the sky because you can see the view from up high.
"On the first day, I went ziplining" is a full thought and can be it's own sentence. Connecting the two sentences feels like a lot all together.
"the view from the top" implies you are on top of something, like a building. "Up high" is more appropriate for this situation.
I also did kayaked after the dinner.
I also kayaked after dinner.
You can turn kayak into a verb and say kayaked. You could also say "I also went kayaking after dinner". Either one would sound natural to a native speaker.
I did water activities every day expeccept the last day and the hiking day.
I did water activities every day except the last day and the hiking day.
Expect means you anticipate something will happen. Except means something is excluded.
I did one activity that I rioded on onea boat and puaddled by myself and one that puwas paddled by a group of people.
I did one activity that I rode on a boat and paddled by myself and one that was paddled by a group of people.
Say activity again to clarify the subject of the sentence since you said "except the last day and the hiking day" in the previous sentence. If you just said "I did water activities every day.", you would not have to say activity again in this sentence.
Rode is the past tense of ride.
Puddle is a little bit of water on the ground. Paddle is the activity you are talking about.
I hadMy arm muscle pains on my armss hurt.
My arm muscles hurt.
You could say "I had muscle pains in my arms", but "my arm muscles hurt" or even just "my arms hurt" would be more easily understood.
Hurt is the past tense of hurt.
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You did really well for A1 level!
I've been on my school trip for the last week. I've been on my school trip for the last week.
When talking about traveling, 'for' makes the duration of the trip clearer.
On the last day of the trip, Mmy friends said they were really exhausted and would have enought sleep and take a long shower.
On the last day of the trip, my friends said they were really exhausted and would sleep and take a long shower.
-'To get enough sleep' means you got a good amount of sleep = "I slept so well last night. I got enough sleep." So you can say "and wanted to get enough sleep" or you can just say they were exhausted and would sleep (instead of going out).
-You always take a shower. That's just the phrase.
After I got back home, I did the bare minimum to go to betd, such as eating dinner and taking a shower.
After I got back home, I did the bare minimum to go to bed, such as eating dinner and taking a shower.
That's it!
I was worried that everyone would bring their carry bbackpacks instead of the suitcases.
I was worried that everyone would bring their backpacks instead of the suitcases.
'Carry backs' is not a word. It's backpacks.
But most people had suitcases.
Some people had huge suitcases which looked forI think is normal for travels.
Some people had huge suitcases which I think is normal for travels.
There are a couple of ways to say this. You can say "which a lot of people have" or "which is normal for a lot of travelers."
I though they had a lot of snacks in their suitcases.
It took me about four hours to get there from my school by the school bus.
I fell asleep on the bus on the way andthere and the way back.
I fell asleep on the bus on the way there and the way back.
You need to say what the way is, so the way there and the way back.
On the first day, I did ziplineing which you canmakes you feel like you are flying in the sky because you can see the view from the topup high.
On the first day, I did ziplineing which makes you feel like you are flying in the sky because you can see the view from up high.
-To say 'you,' you would need to start a new sentence = "I did ziplineing. You feel like you are flying." Otherwise the subject needs to stay the same = "Ziplineing makes you feel like you are flying."
-To see the view from the top, you need to be on something = "the view from the top of the building," "the view from the top of the hill"
It is my favourite activity.
I also did kayaked after the dinner.
I also kayaked after the dinner.
You can also say 'did kayaking,' but it sounds a little strange.
I did water activities every day expect the last day and the hiking day.
I did one thatactivity where I rioded on one boat and puaddled by myself and one thatwhere I puaddle byd with a group of people.
I did one activity where I rode on one boat and paddled by myself and one where I paddled with a group of people.
-You use where here to make it clear you were doing an activity in a location. I did it on a boat.
-The best of to ride is 'rode'
-'Puddle' is a small pool of water. 'To paddle' is the verb. You paddle with a group of people or you paddle with a paddle.
I had muscle pains on my armsMy arms were sore.
My arms were sore.
Usually you say X is sore. My arms were sore. My back was sore. You can also say 'my arms hurt' or 'my muscles were sore.'
I'm going to continue to write about what I did on the trip tomorrow as well because I can't write everything ion only this page.
I'm going to continue to write about what I did on the trip tomorrow as well because I can't write everything on only this page.
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I've been on my shool trip last week. I've been on my school trip for the last week. I've been on my school trip for the last week. When talking about traveling, 'for' makes the duration of the trip clearer.
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I I've been is used to say something like "I've been there before". Say I went if you are talking about a specific situation like going on a school trip. A school trip can also be called a field trip, which is more common to say in America than school trip.
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On the last day of the trip, My friends said they were really exhausted and would have enought sleep and long shower.
On the last day of the trip, -'To get enough sleep' means you got a good amount of sleep = "I slept so well last night. I got enough sleep." So you can say "and wanted to get enough sleep" or you can just say they were exhausted and would sleep (instead of going out). -You always take a shower. That's just the phrase.
On the last day of the trip,
On the last day of the trip, I think this is what you are trying to say in this sentence.
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After I got back home, I did the bare minimum to go to bet, such as eating dinner and taking shower.
After I got back home, I did the bare minimum to go to be
After I got back home, I did the bare minimum to go to be
After I got back home, I did the bare minimum to go to be
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I was worried that everyone would bring their carry backs instead of the suitcases.
I was worried that everyone would bring their 'Carry backs' is not a word. It's backpacks.
I was worried that everyone would bring their I'm not sure what "carry backs" are, but I'm assuming this is what you meant. Also I'm connecting this sentence with the next one.
I was worried that everyone would bring their A backpack is that bag that has two straps over your shoulders.
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But most people had suitcases. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
This should be part of the previous sentence. I was worried that everyone would bring their backpacks instead of suitcases, but most people had suitcases.
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Some people had huge suitcases which looked for normal travels.
Some people had huge suitcases which There are a couple of ways to say this. You can say "which a lot of people have" or "which is normal for a lot of travelers."
Some people had huge suitcases which looked "normal" works too, but I think "regular" fits slightly better here.
Some people had huge suitcases which looked
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I though they had a lot of snacks in their suitcases. This sentence has been marked as perfect! I thought they had a lot of snacks in their suitcases. I thought they had a lot of snacks in their suitcases. I thought they had a lot of snacks in their suitcases. I thought they had a lot of snacks in their suitcases. thought is past tense of think. Though is a completely different word. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It took me about four hours to get there from my school by the school bus. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
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I fell asleep on the bus on the way and way back.
I fell asleep on the bus on the way You need to say what the way is, so the way there and the way back.
I fell asleep on the bus on the way
I fell asleep on the bus on the way
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On the first day, I did zipling which you can feel like you are flying in the sky because you can see the view from the top.
On the first day, I did ziplineing which -To say 'you,' you would need to start a new sentence = "I did ziplineing. You feel like you are flying." Otherwise the subject needs to stay the same = "Ziplineing makes you feel like you are flying." -To see the view from the top, you need to be on something = "the view from the top of the building," "the view from the top of the hill" On the first day, I did ziplining which you can feel like you are flying in the sky because you can see the view from the top. On the first day, I did ziplining which you can feel like you are flying in the sky because you can see the view from the top.
On the first day, I "On the first day, I went ziplining" is a full thought and can be it's own sentence. Connecting the two sentences feels like a lot all together. "the view from the top" implies you are on top of something, like a building. "Up high" is more appropriate for this situation.
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I also did kayak after the dinner.
I also You can also say 'did kayaking,' but it sounds a little strange.
I also did kayaking after
I also You can turn kayak into a verb and say kayaked. You could also say "I also went kayaking after dinner". Either one would sound natural to a native speaker.
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I did water activities every day expect the last day and the hiking day. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect!
I did water activities every day ex Expect means you anticipate something will happen. Except means something is excluded.
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I did one that I rided on one boat and puddle by myself and one that puddle by group of people.
I did one -You use where here to make it clear you were doing an activity in a location. I did it on a boat. -The best of to ride is 'rode' -'Puddle' is a small pool of water. 'To paddle' is the verb. You paddle with a group of people or you paddle with a paddle.
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I did one activity that I r Say activity again to clarify the subject of the sentence since you said "except the last day and the hiking day" in the previous sentence. If you just said "I did water activities every day.", you would not have to say activity again in this sentence. Rode is the past tense of ride. Puddle is a little bit of water on the ground. Paddle is the activity you are talking about.
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I had muscle pains on my arms.
Usually you say X is sore. My arms were sore. My back was sore. You can also say 'my arms hurt' or 'my muscles were sore.'
I had muscle pains
You could say "I had muscle pains in my arms", but "my arm muscles hurt" or even just "my arms hurt" would be more easily understood. Hurt is the past tense of hurt.
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I'm going to continue to write about what I did on the trip tomorrow as well because I can't write everything in only this page.
I'm going to continue to write about what I did on the trip tomorrow as well because I can't write everything
I'm going to continue to write about what I did on the trip tomorrow as well because I can't write everything
I'm going to continue to write about what I did on the trip tomorrow as well because I can't write everything in |
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