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atisen

Sept. 19, 2023

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A Trip

You will not think about many things when there is only one goal left in your world.
Last week, I went to Suzhou. In China, there is a word said: There is a heaven abow, and Suhang below. So you know how beautiful it is.
It's beauty not only about it's scenery, and it's climate, architecture, food and so on.
There were many people in the famous tourist attractions. So I decided to walk through the alleys where there are still pristine and those tourist rarely go.
I just go, walk on the green brick road, pass by people's doors. See them cooking, chatting and spending time. Then I left the house behind. I cross the bridge and the road, a park afront me. There are a rows of willow trees along the river. Willow branches hang low into the river, and dancing in the wind. A few people were walking or sitting. I saw a black dog on the other side. It smells here and there, paws here and scratches there. With a flow black in those greens has made a interseting visual impact.
During this time, my shoulders, waist and legs were sore because I was carrying a big bag. But I just let these feelings go. I just walk, walk and walk until the time doesn't make any sense anymore. I'm just a walker.

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You will not think about many things when there is only one goal left in your world.

So you know how beautiful it is.

I saw a black dog on the other side.

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atisen

Sept. 19, 2023

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Last week, I went to Suzhou, part of the "Suhang" region in China.

To give context to the following sentence.

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Tenji

Sept. 19, 2023

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yeah, I can write this: "I went to Suzhou, a city belonging to Jiangsu Province." Is this ok?

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atisen

Sept. 19, 2023

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It's beauty lies not only aboutin it's scenery, and but also in it's climate, architecture, food, and so on.

It's = it is, 它的 = its

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Tenji

Sept. 19, 2023

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"Its" is hopeful! What does "lies" mean?

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atisen

Sept. 19, 2023

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Then I left the houses behind.

You can also use the word "residential district"

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atisen

Sept. 19, 2023

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I crossed the bridge and the road, with a park ain front of me.

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atisen

Sept. 19, 2023

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I just walk, walked and walked until the time doesidn't make any sense anymore.

You can also say "until time lost all meaning"

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atisen

Sept. 19, 2023

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Tenji

Sept. 19, 2023

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how does the "afront" use?

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atisen

Sept. 20, 2023

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hopeful --> helpful "Lie" as a noun means 谎 but here it means 在于 其美在于其风景

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atisen

Sept. 20, 2023

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A Trip


You will not think about many things when there is only one goal left in your world.


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Last week, I went to Suzhou.


Last week, I went to Suzhou, part of the "Suhang" region in China. Last week, I went to Suzhou, part of the "Suhang" region in China.

To give context to the following sentence.

In China, there is a word said: There is a heaven abow, and Suhang below.


In China, there i's a word saidsaying: "There is a heaven abow,ve and Suhang below." In China, there's a saying: "There is heaven above and Suhang below."

谚语 = saying

So you know how beautiful it is.


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It's beauty not only about it's scenery, and it's climate, architecture, food and so on.


It's beauty lies not only aboutin it's scenery, and but also in it's climate, architecture, food, and so on. Its beauty lies not only in its scenery but also in its climate, architecture, food, and so on.

It's = it is, 它的 = its

There were many people in the famous tourist attractions.


So I decided to walk through the alleys where there are still pristine and those tourist rarely go.


So I decided to walk through the alleys where there are still pristine and those tourist rarely gothat remain pristine and where few tourists venture/pass. So I decided to walk through the alleys that remain pristine and where few tourists venture/pass.

Improved clarity and flow.

I just go, walk on the green brick road, pass by people's doors.


I just go, walked on the green brick road, passing by people's doors. I just walked on the green brick road, passing by people's doors.

Fixed tense consistency

See them cooking, chatting and spending time.


See, seeing them cooking, chatting, and spending time together. , seeing them cooking, chatting, and spending time together.

Connect with the previous sentence.

Then I left the house behind.


Then I left the houses behind. Then I left the houses behind.

You can also use the word "residential district"

I cross the bridge and the road, a park afront me.


I crossed the bridge and the road, with a park ain front of me. I crossed the bridge and the road, with a park in front of me.

There are a rows of willow trees along the river.


There are a rows of willow trees along the river. There are rows of willow trees along the river.

a/an is for singular nouns

Willow branches hang low into the river, and dancing in the wind.


Willow branches hang low into the river, and dancinge in the wind. Willow branches hang low into the river and dance in the wind.

Verb tense consistency

A few people were walking or sitting.


I saw a black dog on the other side.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It smells here and there, paws here and scratches there.


It smells here and there, paws hereniffed, pawed, and scratchesd here and there. It sniffed, pawed, and scratched here and there.

With a flow black in those greens has made a interseting visual impact.


With aThe flow of black inamidst those greens has madecreated an intersesting visual impact. The flow of black amidst the greens created an interesting visual impact.

During this time, my shoulders, waist and legs were sore because I was carrying a big bag.


But I just let these feelings go.


I just walk, walk and walk until the time doesn't make any sense anymore.


I just walk, walked and walked until the time doesidn't make any sense anymore. I just walked and walked until time didn't make any sense anymore.

You can also say "until time lost all meaning"

I'm just a walker.


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