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Flan_girl

Dec. 21, 2020

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Schedules

It's so hard for me to make a schedule. I'm currently learning to draw, studying English, trying to work out at least thrice a week, walking at least half an hour a day and reading a chapter of my book a day. It's not much and, theoretically, I should have time to do everything. In reality, I don't.

From next week onwards, I'll be having driving lessons every day so I can get my driver's license soon. I'll also have to make time to study for the test.

I find it hard to figure out how much time each activity is going to take and when to do them. Besides, I don't have lunch or dinner at a specific hour of the day, so it's even harder to plan. Also, some unexpected situations come up. For example, today I wasn't expecting to play board games with my family and that resulted in not having the time to study English. I also struggle with following the schedule I made. I do things very slowly, so I end up taking more time than planned.

I think I should start tracking more carefully mi time, so that I can make better schedules.

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Dec. 22, 2020

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In reality, I don't.

I do things very slowly, so I end up taking more time than planned.

Schedules

It's so hard for me to make a schedule.

It's not much and, theoretically, I should have time to do everything.

In reality, I don't.

From next week onwards, I'll be having driving lessons every day so I can get my driver's license soon.

I'll also have to make time to study for the test.

I find it hard to figure out how much time each activity is going to take and when to do them.

Besides, I don't have lunch or dinner at a specific hour of the day, so it's even harder to plan.

Also, some unexpected situations come up.

For example, today I wasn't expecting to play board games with my family and that resulted in not having the time to study English.

I also struggle with following the schedule I made.

I do things very slowly, so I end up taking more time than planned.

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Flan_girl

Dec. 22, 2020

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Schedules


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It's so hard for me to make a schedule.


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I'm currently learning to draw, studying English, trying to work out at least thrice a week, walking at least half an hour a day and reading a chapter of my book a day.


I'm currently learning to draw, studying English, trying to work out at least thriceee times a week, walking at least half an hour a day, and reading a chapter of my book a day. I'm currently learning to draw, studying English, trying to work out at least three times a week, walking at least half an hour a day, and reading a chapter of my book a day.

"at least thrice a week" is technically correct, but "three times a week" sounds more natural.

I'm currently learning how to draw, studying English, trying to work out at least thriceee times a week, walking at least half an hour a day and reading aone chapter of my book a day. I'm currently learning how to draw, studying English, trying to work out at least three times a week, walking at least half an hour a day and reading one chapter of my book a day.

I'm currently learning to draw, studying English, trying to work out at least thriceTHREE TIMES a week, walking at least half an hour a day and reading a chapter of my book a day. I'm currently learning to draw, studying English, trying to work out at least THREE TIMES a week, walking at least half an hour a day and reading a chapter of my book a day.

It's not much and, theoretically, I should have time to do everything.


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It's not much and, sounds like a lot, but theoretically, I should have enough time to do everythingit all. It sounds like a lot, but theoretically, I should have enough time to do it all.

In reality, I don't.


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From next week onwards, I'll be having driving lessons every day so I can get my driver's license soon.


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FromStarting next week onwards, I'll be having driving lessons every day so I can get my driver's license soon. Starting next week, I'll be having driving lessons every day so I can get my driver's license soon.

From next week onwards, I'll be havingTAKING driving lessons every day so I can get my driver's license soon. From next week onwards, I'll be TAKING driving lessons every day so I can get my driver's license soon.

more natural to say "taking" driving lessons than "having" in this context :)

I'll also have to make time to study for the test.


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I'll also haveneed to make time to study for the driving test. I'll also need to make time to study for the driving test.

I find it hard to figure out how much time each activity is going to take and when to do them.


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I find it hard to figure outdetermine how much time each activity is going to takeI should allocate to each activity and when to do them. I find it hard to determine how much time I should allocate to each activity and when to do them.

Besides, I don't have lunch or dinner at a specific hour of the day, so it's even harder to plan.


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BesidesFurthermore, I don't usually have lunch or dinner at a specific hour of the daytime, so it's even harder to make plans. Furthermore, I don't usually have lunch or dinner at a specific time, so it's even harder to make plans.

Also, some unexpected situations come up.


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Also, soSometimes unexpected situations come up. Sometimes unexpected situations come up.

For example, today I wasn't expecting to play board games with my family and that resulted in not having the time to study English.


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For example, today I wasn'did not expecting to end up playing board games with my family and that resulted in not having the, which took away time tofrom studying English. For example, today I did not expect to end up playing board games with my family, which took away time from studying English.

I also struggle with following the schedule I made.


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I also struggle withto following the schedule I madke. I also struggle to follow the schedule I make.

I do things very slowly, so I end up taking more time than planned.


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I think I should start tracking more carefully mi time, so that I can make better schedules.


I think I should start tracking my time more carefully mi time, so that I can make better schedules. I think I should start tracking my time more carefully so that I can make better schedules.

"my time" would come before "more carefully".

I think I should start tracking my time more carefully mi time, so that I can make better schedulesbudget my time better. I think I should start tracking my time more carefully, so that I can budget my time better.

I think I should start tracking MY TIME more carefully mi time, so that I can make A better schedules FOR MYSELF. I think I should start tracking MY TIME more carefully so that I can make A better schedule FOR MYSELF.

direct object (my time) should go after the verb and more natural sentence structure this way :)

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