Jan. 3, 2025
Cleaning day
I cleaned my room today. Actually, I wanted to clean my room in last month. Because, cleaning house before new year is custom in Japan. We clean house to invite god of year. But I had plan that are meet my friends and go to my parent’s house the end of year so I can’t clean my house. Maybe God did not come to my house…But I want to start new year in clear room so I cleaned my room today. It was late.
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Actually, I wanted to clean my room in last month.
Actually, I wanted to clean my room last month.
Because, cleaning the house before the new year is a custom in Japan. Because, cleaning the house before the new year is a custom in Japan.
It would be better to connect this sentence with the previous one, and not start a new sentence with "because".
We clean the house to invite gGod ofto the year.
We clean the house to invite God to the year.
But I had plan that arened to meet my friends and go to my parent’s house at the end of year so I can’ouldn't clean my house.
But I had planned to meet my friends and go to my parent’s house at the end of year so I couldn't clean my house.
Maybe God did not come to my house…But I want to start the new year in a clear room so I cleaned my room today. Maybe God did not come to my house…But I want to start the new year in a clear room so I cleaned my room today.
Actually, I wanted to clean my room in last month.
Actually, I wanted to clean my room last month.
Because, cleaning house before nNew yYear's is a custom in Japan.
Because cleaning house before New Year's is a custom in Japan.
We clean the house to invite god of year. We clean the house to invite god of year.
We clean the house for the kami(Shinto Spirits).
But I had plans that areo meet my friends and go to my parent’s house the end of year, so I can’ouldn't clean my house.
But I had plans to meet my friends and go to my parent’s house, so I couldn't clean my house.
Maybe Godthe spirits did no'nt come to my house…But I wanted to start nthe New yYear in a clearn room, so I cleaned my room today.
Maybe the spirits did'nt come to my house…But I wanted to start the New Year in a clean room, so I cleaned my room today.
Actually, I wanted to clean my room in last month.
Actually, I wanted to clean my room last month.
You don't need in :)
Because, cCleaning the house before new year is custom in Japan.
Cleaning the house before new year is custom in Japan.
You don't need because, it's simply a statement
We clean the house to invite the good of new year. ? We clean the house to invite the good of new year. ?
I'm not sure what you were aiming for in this sentence
But I hadn't plan that arened to meet my friends and go to my parent’s house at the end of year so I can’t clean my house.
But I hadn't planned to meet my friends and go to my parent’s house at the end of year so I can’t clean my house.
Is this what you mean?
Maybe God did not come to my house…But I wanted to start new the year in clearn room so I cleaned my room today.
Maybe God did not come to my house…But I wanted to start new the year in clean room so I cleaned my room today.
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Overall, I understood what you were saying :)
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Actually, I wanted to clean my room in last month.
Actually, I wanted to clean my room You don't need in :)
Actually, I wanted to clean my room
Actually, I wanted to clean my room |
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Because, cleaning house before new year is custom in Japan.
You don't need because, it's simply a statement
Because Because, cleaning the house before the new year is a custom in Japan. Because, cleaning the house before the new year is a custom in Japan. It would be better to connect this sentence with the previous one, and not start a new sentence with "because". |
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We clean house to invite god of year. We clean the house to invite the good of new year. ? We clean the house to invite the good of new year. ? I'm not sure what you were aiming for in this sentence We clean the house to invite god of year. We clean the house to invite god of year. We clean the house for the kami(Shinto Spirits).
We clean the house to invite |
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It was late. |
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Cleaning day |
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I cleaned my room today. |
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But I had plan that are meet my friends and go to my parent’s house the end of year so I can’t clean my house.
But I hadn't plan Is this what you mean?
But I had plans t
But I had plan |
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Maybe God did not come to my house…But I want to start new year in clear room so I cleaned my room today.
Maybe God did not come to my house…But I wanted to start new the year in clea
Maybe Maybe God did not come to my house…But I want to start the new year in a clear room so I cleaned my room today. Maybe God did not come to my house…But I want to start the new year in a clear room so I cleaned my room today. |
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