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Mimi

June 1, 2020

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The things I want to start doing

Recently, I’m interested in yoga again.
It’s not normal yoga named yien yoga.
When I was doing volunteer work as Japanese class assistant in local high school, a teacher who is also yoga instructor had free yoga class for teachers tied from preparing online classes because of corona virus.
They’ve never experienced this situation but they tried to offer equal education as good as possible for all student, so I really respected them and it motivated me.
I prefer this yoga to normal one because it has more activities and exercise.
In Japan, I’ve taken yoga lesson for half year but as I’m not interested in that, I’ve been to their studio only couple of times in spite of expensive payments, so I quit it.
However, I was really enjoying that yoga, it’s totally different! I heard It’s good for tight shoulder and neck, hopefully, it helps mine better.

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Recently, I’m interested in yoga again.


Recently, I’m've become interested in yoga again. Recently, I've become interested in yoga again.

This just sounds more natural to me. Maybe other natives would disagree.

Recently, I’mve become interested in yoga again. Recently, I’ve become interested in yoga again.

It’s not normal yoga named yien yoga.


It's not normala different kind of yoga namcalled "yien yoga". It's a different kind of yoga called "yien yoga".

It’s a differenot nformal of yoga namcalled yien yoga. It’s a different form of yoga called yien yoga.

When I was doing volunteer work as Japanese class assistant in local high school, a teacher who is also yoga instructor had free yoga class for teachers tied from preparing online classes because of corona virus.


When I was doing volunteer work as Japanese class assistant in a local high school, a teacher who iwas also yoga instructor had free yoga class for teachers tired from preparing online classes because ofdue to the corona virus. When I was doing volunteer work as Japanese class assistant in a local high school, a teacher who was also yoga instructor had free yoga class for teachers tired from preparing online classes due to the corona virus.

When I was doing volunteer work as Japanese class assistant in a local high school, a teacher who is also a yoga instructor hadtaught free yoga class fores to the teachers tied fromwho were preparing online classes because of corona virus. When I was doing volunteer work as Japanese class assistant in a local high school, a teacher who is also a yoga instructor taught free yoga classes to the teachers who were preparing online classes because of corona virus.

hopefully that was the meaning you were going for in the last sentence

They’ve never experienced this situation but they tried to offer equal education as good as possible for all student, so I really respected them and it motivated me.


They’ve had never experienced thissuch a situation before, but they tried to offer equal education as goodequal as possible for all students, so I really respected them, and it motivated me. They had never experienced such a situation before, but they tried to offer education as equal as possible for all students, so I really respected them, and it motivated me.

They’ve never experienced this situation but they tried to offer equalthe best education as good as possible for all students (considering the situation we are going through), so I really respected them and it motivated me. They’ve never experienced this situation but they tried to offer the best education possible for all students (considering the situation we are going through), so I really respected them and it motivated me.

I prefer this yoga to normal one because it has more activities and exercise.


I prefer this yoga to normal oneyoga because it has more activities and exercises. I prefer this yoga to normal yoga because it has more activities and exercises.

I prefer this yoga to normal one because it has more activities and exercises. I prefer this yoga to normal one because it has more activities and exercises.

In Japan, I’ve taken yoga lesson for half year but as I’m not interested in that, I’ve been to their studio only couple of times in spite of expensive payments, so I quit it.


In Japan, I’ve taken took yoga lessons for half a year, but as I’m was not interested in thait, I’ve be went to their studio only couple of times in despite ofthe expensive payments, so I quit it. In Japan, I took yoga lessons for half a year, but as I was not interested in it, I went to their studio only couple of times despite the expensive payments, so I quit.

In Japan, I’ve taken yoga lessons for half a year but as I’m not interested in that, I’ve been to t aheir studio only couple of times in spite of expensive payments, so I quit it. In Japan, I’ve taken yoga lessons for half a year but as I’m not interested in that, I’ve been to t aheir studio only couple of times in spite of expensive payments, so I quit it.

I don't know what you were going for in that last sentence sorry. If you were trying to express cause then 'in spite of' should be remplaced by 'but because of'.

However, I was really enjoying that yoga, it’s totally different!


However, I was really enjoying thatyien yoga,; it’s totally different! However, I was really enjoying yien yoga; it’s totally different!

I heard It’s good for tight shoulder and neck, hopefully, it helps mine better.


I heard It’s good for tight shoulders and neck, h. Hopefully, it helps mine get better. I heard It’s good for tight shoulders and neck. Hopefully, it helps mine get better.

I heard It’s good for tight shoulders and neck, hopefully, it helpfixes mine betteraswell. I heard It’s good for tight shoulders and neck, hopefully, it fixes mine aswell.

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