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The reponspisibility of the social media platforms.

Nowadays, people are more and more on their phone. It's definitely due to the social media.
I think it's the reason people spend as time on their screen. But there is another problem with the social media: the content posted by some people.
Indeed, there are many children aged 10 to 17 years old who can watch certain posts which can be hard for them.
Therefore, we can wonder if the social media platforms are responsible about those publications or if it's only the person who posted it.
I think the person who posted it is wrong, because he knows that many people can see it and particularly children.
On the other hand, I think the main responsible is the social media platform which allow the person to post it.
It isn't acceptable that every boddy is allowed to publish what he wants even if it could shock certain people.
I think social media platforms have to renforce their control about what it's posted and to be more tough with the age rules.
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But there is another problem with the social media: the content posted by some people.

Indeed, there are many children aged 10 to 17 years old who can watch certain posts which can be hard for them.

Therefore, we can wonder if the social media platforms are responsible about those publications or if it's only the person who posted it.

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Nov. 5, 2025

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Nov. 5, 2025

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The reponspisibility of the social media platforms.


The responspisibilityies of the social media platforms. The responsibilities of the social media platforms

Nowadays, people are more and more on their phone.


Nowadays, people are on their phone more and more on their phoneften. Nowadays, people are on their phone more and more often.

Nowadays, people are more and more on their phonon their phones more and more. Nowadays, people are on their phones more and more.

your version works fine but this flows a little better sounds more natural.

I think it's the reason people spend as time on their screen.


I think it's the reason people spend as much time on their screen. I think it's the reason people spend as much time on their screen.

I think it's the reason people spend aso much time on their screen. I think it's the reason people spend so much time on their screen.

or you could say "spend as much time as they do on their screen"

It's definitely due to the social media.


It's definitely due to the social media. It's definitely due to social media.

It's definitely due to the social media. It's definitely due to social media.

again works with 'the' but more natural without

But there is another problem with the social media: the content posted by some people.


But there is another problem with the social media: the content posted by some people. But there is another problem with social media: the content posted by some people.

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Indeed, there are many children aged 10 to 17 years old who can watch certain posts which can be hard for them.


Indeed, there are many children aged 10 to 17 years old who can watch certain posts which can be hardposts that are difficult for them. Indeed, there are many children aged 10 to 17 who can watch posts that are difficult for them.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Therefore, we can wonder if the social media platforms are responsible about those publications or if it's only the person who posted it.


Therefore, we can wonder if the social media platforms are responsible aboutfor those publications or if it's only the person who posted it. Therefore, we can wonder if the social media platforms are responsible for those publications or if it's only the person who posted it.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I think the person who posted it is wrong, because he knows that many people can see it and particularly children.


I think the person who posted it is wrong, because they knows that many people canwill see it and particularly that children will. I think the person who posted it is wrong, because they know that many people will see it and particularly that children will.

I think the person who posted it is wrong, because they knows that many people can see it and, particularly children. I think the person who posted it is wrong, because they know that many people can see it, particularly children.

when you don't know gender, just general hypothetical person they is more natural.

On the other hand, I think the main responsible is the social media platform which allow the person to post it.


On the other hand, I think the main party responsible is the social media platform which allowed the person to post it. On the other hand, I think the main party responsible is the social media platform which allowed the person to post it.

On the other hand, I think the main responsibleility is the social media platform which allows the person to post it. On the other hand, I think the main responsibility is the social media platform which allows the person to post it.

It isn't acceptable that every boddy is allowed to publish what he wants even if it could shock certain people.


It isn't acceptable that every boddy is allowed to publish what they wants even if it could shock certain people. It isn't acceptable that everybody is allowed to publish what they want even if it could shock certain people.

It isn't acceptable that every boddy is allowed to publish what ever they wants even if it could shock certain people. It isn't acceptable that every body is allowed to publish whatever they want even if it could shock certain people.

I think social media platforms have to renforce their control about what it's posted and to be more tough with the age rules.


I think social media platforms have to reinforce their control aboutover what it's posted and to be more tough with the age rules. I think social media platforms have to reinforce their control over what is posted and to be more tough with the age rules.

Tell me how you found my english and what is your opinion about that subject!


Tell me how you found my eEnglish and what is your opinion aboutis on thate subject! Tell me how you found my English and what your opinion is on the subject!

It's definitely due to the social medias.


But there is another problem with the social medias: the content posted by some people.


Indeed, the are many children aged 10 to 17 years old who can watch certain posts which can be hard for them.


I think the person who posted it is wrong, because he know that many people can see it and particularly children.


It isn't acceptable that every boddy is allow to publish what he wants even if it could shock certain people.


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