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This is how we'd usually write it in the US.

Besides, his well established and mutually beneficial alliance with DCI Peplow of the Metropolitan Police is another reason why Jupiter works exclusively in London and the villages* round aboutsurrounding villages*. Besides, his well established and mutually beneficial alliance with DCI Peplow of the Metropolitan Police is another reason why Jupiter works exclusively in London and the surrounding villages*.

Besides, his well established and mutually beneficial alliance with DCI Peplow of the Metropolitan Police is another reason why Jupiter works exclusively in London and the villages* round aboutits surrounding area. Besides, his well established and mutually beneficial alliance with DCI Peplow of the Metropolitan Police is another reason why Jupiter works exclusively in London and its surrounding area.

US alternative

It is certainly a cosy arrangement. It is certainly a cosy arrangement.

"It is" is often said/written as "it's".

Jupiter ensures that Peoplow, and his deputies, comes out of all investigations brilliantly, while Peplow makes sure Jupiter gets exclusive, full access to ongoing police inquiries. Jupiter ensures that Peplow and his deputies come out of all investigations brilliantly, while Peplow makes sure Jupiter gets exclusive, full access to ongoing police inquiries.

Jupiter ensures that Peoplow, and his deputies, comes out of all their investigations brilliantly, while Peplow makes sure Jupiter gets exclusive, full access to ongoing police inquiries. Jupiter ensures that Peoplow, and his deputies, come out of all their investigations brilliantly, while Peplow makes sure Jupiter gets exclusive, full access to ongoing police inquiries.

Jupiter ensures that Peoplow, and his deputies, comes out of all investigations brilliantlylooking fabulous, while Peplow makes sure Jupiter gets exclusive, full access to ongoing police inquiries. Jupiter ensures that Peoplow, and his deputies, come out of all investigations looking fabulous, while Peplow makes sure Jupiter gets exclusive, full access to ongoing police inquiries.

As a result of whichthis arrangement, they have both risen to prominaence and fame. As a result this arrangement, they have both risen to prominence and fame.

As a result of which, they have both risen to prominance and fame. As a result, they have both risen to prominance and fame.

"They have" is often said/written as "they've".

As a result of which, they have both risen to prominaence and fame. As a result of which, they have both risen to prominence and fame.

When it comes down to crime reporting, Jupiter regards details as key. When it comes to crime reporting, Jupiter regards details as key.

When it comes down to crime reporting, Jupiter regards details as key. When it comes to crime reporting, Jupiter regards details as key.

When it comes down to crime reporting, Jupiter regards details as key. When it comes to crime reporting, Jupiter regards details as key.

This sounds more natural in the US.

Jupiter first made his name covering a nasty and peculiar, nasty murder case. Jupiter first made his name covering a nasty and peculiar murder case.

Jupiter first made his name covering a peculiar, and nasty murder case. Jupiter first made his name covering a peculiar and nasty murder case.

or Jupiter first made his name covering a peculiarly nasty murder case.

The corpse, or its remains of it, was found in an acid bath. The corpse, or its remains of it, was found in an acid bath.

He made a brilliant use of the ghastly details. He made brilliant use of the ghastly details.

He made a brilliantly use of thed ghastly details in his report. He brilliantly used ghastly details in his report.

He made a brilliant use of the ghastly details. He made use of the ghastly details.

This is technically correct but it sounds strange.

It did not matter to Peplow that these details were made up. It did not matter to Peplow that these details were made up.

It did not matter to Peplow that these details were made up. It did not matter to Peplow that these details were made up.

It did not matter to Peplow that these details were made up. It did not matter to Peplow that these details were made up.

He evenhimself had provided himself these pieces of evidence for the trial. He himself had provided these pieces of evidence for the trial.

He even provided himselfin person these pieces ofas evidence forduring the trial. He even provided in person these pieces as evidence during the trial.

He himself even provided himself these pieces of "evidence" for the trial. He himself even provided these pieces of "evidence" for the trial.

*Can I omit “the villages”? *Can I omit “the villages”?

If you just remove it and put nothing in its place, the sentence feels weird and like something is missing.

*Can I omit “the villages”? *Can I omit “the villages”?

I'm not really sure (I'm not familiar with London) but I'm going to say no? It might depend.