May 15, 2025
I want to know people outside of the daily work
In software development industry work meetings, I always feel misplaced. I don't know if it's the job itself or that I feel dumb talking with that people in English. It feels like I couldn't go as fast as I go with my native language (Spanish) talking. So, for some part, I need to close that gap to more easily communicate my thinking and my ideas about how to improve the system and for other part I feel that I need to connect more with people in their language first...
En las juntas de la industria de software, siempre me siento desplazado. No sé si es el trabajo en sí o que me siento tonto hablando con la gente en Inglés. Se siente como si no pudiera ir tan rápido como voy hablando en mi lenguaje nativo (Español). Así que, por una parte, necesito cerrar la brecha para comunicar mi pensar e ideas sobre como mejorar el sistema más fácilmente; y, por otra parte, siento que necesito conectar más con la gente en su lenguaje primeramente...
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I don't know if it's the job itself or that I feel dumb talking with that people in English. I don't know if it's the job itself or that I feel dumb talking with that people in English.
It feels like I couldn't gotalk as fast as I gdo within my native language (Spanish) talking.
It feels like I couldn't talk as fast as I do in my native language (Spanish)
this sounds more mature
So, for some parton one hand, I need to close that gap to more easily communicatecommunicate more easily my thinking and my ideas about how to improve the system and foron the other parthand I feel that I need to connect more with people in their language first...
So, on one hand, I need to close that gap to communicate more easily my thinking and my ideas about how to improve the system and on the other hand I feel that I need to connect more with people in their language first...
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very understandable overall, I just made a few adjustments so it sounds more mature and it is more readable
May 27, 2025
Thank you!
I want to knowmeet people outside of the daily work
I want to meet people outside of work
"Meet" is the correct verb here
"The daily work" isn't said because "the" isn't said with work (ex: my work, at work), and "daily" is implied with work
In software development industry work meetings, I always feel misout of placed.
In software development industry meetings, I always feel out of place.
"Industry work" is redundant
I've only seen "misplaced" used in literal terms, so I'm assuming you mean you don't feel connected with the others
I don't know if it's the job itself, or that I feel dumb talking with thatose people in English.
I don't know if it's the job itself, or that I feel dumb talking with those people in English.
Comma before "or" if it's connecting two clauses
"That" is for singular, "those" is for plural
It feels like I couldan't go as fast as I go within my native language (Spanish) talking.
It feels like I can't go as fast as I go in my native language (Spanish).
"Can't" instead of "couldn't" because it's just regular present tense
Instead of saying "with my native language talking" it's more correct to say "in my native language," you don't have to specify speaking
So, for some partone thing, I need to close that gap to more easily communicate my thinking and my ideas about how to improve the system, and for the other part, I feel that I need to connect more with people in their language first...
So, for one thing, I need to close that gap to more easily communicate my thinking and my ideas about how to improve the system, and for the other, I feel that I need to connect more with people in their language first...
"For one thing" is the way to introduce one point
Comma before "and" because it's connecting two clauses
Needs "the" before "other," and since the reader already knows what thing you're talking about, you don't need to add the noun
Comma after "for the other"
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Your writing is good! I hope that you're able to get along better with your coworkers by learning English.
May 27, 2025
Nice, thanks for the hopes and the corrections
I want to get to know people outside of the daily work
I want to get to know people outside of work
In software development industry work meetings, I always feel misout of placed.
In software development industry meetings, I always feel out of place.
Misplaced is usually used for objects. "I misplaced my pen" for example. "Work" is redundant because we can tell from the rest of the sentence that it's for work.
I don't know if it's due to the job itself or thatif I feel dumb talking with thato people in English.
I don't know if it's due to the job itself or if I feel dumb talking to people in English.
It feels like I couldn't goan't speak as fast as I go withcan in my native language (Spanish) talking.
It feels like I can't speak as fast as I can in my native language (Spanish).
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So I need to find a way to close that gap and more easily communicate my thoughts and my ideas about how to improve the system, and to do so I feel that I need to build connections with people in their language first...
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Networking professionally is hard even when people speak the same language. You're very brave for doing so in a language that's not your native language. Keep up the good work.
May 27, 2025
Thanks Charlie, that warmed my heart
I'm a fan of Snoopy btw haha
I want to know people outside of the daily work
I want to know people outside of work
"outside of work" is already a natural expression
In software development industry work meetings, I always feel misplaced.
In software development work meetings, I always feel misplaced.
Industry is implied here, more natural to omit it I think
I don't know if it's the job itself or that I feel dumb talking with that people in English.
I don't know if it's the job itself or that I feel dumb talking with people in English.
It feels like I couldn't go as fast as I gotalk with my native language (Spanish) talking.
It feels like I couldn't go as fast as I talk with my native language (Spanish).
So, for someat least in part, I need to close that gap to more easily communicate my thinkingoughts and my ideas about how to improve the system and for another part I feel that I need to connect more with people in their language first...
So, at least in part, I need to close that gap to more easily communicate my thoughts and ideas about how to improve the system and for another part I feel that I need to connect more with people in their language first...
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I think software can be quite an understanding field in that regard, I know despite my team working in English, I'm the only native English speaker on the team.
May 27, 2025
Yeah, they were indeed.
Thank you for the corrections
I want to knowmeet people outside of the daily work
I want to meet people outside of work
I don't know if it's the job itself or that I feel dumb talking with thatose people in English.
I don't know if it's the job itself or that I feel dumb talking with those people in English.
It feels like I couldn't gospeak as fast as I gocould with my native language (Spanish) talking.
It feels like I couldn't speak as fast as I could with my native language (Spanish).
So, for some part, I need to close that gap in order to more easily communicate my thinking and my ideas about how to improve the system, and for other part I feel that I need to connect more withwith more people in their language first...
So, I need to close that gap in order to more easily communicate my thinking and my ideas about how to improve the system, and for that I need to connect with more people in their language first.
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That totally makes sense. I think it would be difficult to work with people who speak a language that you are still trying to learn, especially in the earlier stages. I think trying to make some more personal connections with people first would be a good way to accelerate you progress with learning English, especially since the stakes are lower in a personal conversation compared to a workplace conversation. Good luck!
May 27, 2025
I didn't think about that, I'm going to try to make friends in forums and so on...
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I want to know people outside of the daily work
I want to
I want to know people outside of "outside of work" is already a natural expression
I want to get to know people outside of
I want to "Meet" is the correct verb here "The daily work" isn't said because "the" isn't said with work (ex: my work, at work), and "daily" is implied with work |
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In software development industry work meetings, I always feel misplaced.
In software development Industry is implied here, more natural to omit it I think
In software development industry Misplaced is usually used for objects. "I misplaced my pen" for example. "Work" is redundant because we can tell from the rest of the sentence that it's for work.
In software development industry "Industry work" is redundant I've only seen "misplaced" used in literal terms, so I'm assuming you mean you don't feel connected with the others |
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It feels like I couldn't
It feels like I couldn't go as fast as I
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