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Day 7: My First Week of My English Challenge

Wow, definitely this is the longest time that I have been writing in English. I'm so thankful with all of you for correcting my posts. I really love this website and I'm going to recommend it to all my friends. So, what I do with the corrections that all of you gave me? Well, I make flashcards on anki using "type in the answer" type of cards. I write my mistakes on the front of the card, and then on the back I write your corrections. So, when I'm studying these flashcards, I saw my writing and I have to remember my mistakes and type the correct words. I think that I learn so much better by this way. By the way, I had studied Japanese for three days this week, that's a great advance, too. I realized that I can learn Japanese with my own pace, however. I'm not going to travel to Japan in the following 3 years, maybe in my third year of college if I have good grades and I have lucky. So, I will put effort into studying Japanese, however, if I have to do something more important some day, I will skip Japanese.
Thanks Mari for all you corrections and the advices that you have given me.

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I really love this website and I'm going to recommend it to all my friends.

I write my mistakes on the front of the card, and then on the back I write your corrections.

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Jan. 15, 2023

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Day 7: My First Week of My English Challenge

I really love this website and I'm going to recommend it to all my friends.

I write my mistakes on the front of the card, and then on the back I write your corrections.

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I really love this website and I'm going to recommend it to all my friends.

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Day 7: My First Week of My English Challenge

I really love this website and I'm going to recommend it to all my friends.

I write my mistakes on the front of the card, and then on the back I write your corrections.

So, I will put effort into studying Japanese, however, if I have to do something more important some day, I will skip Japanese.

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Day 7: My First Week of My English Challenge

I really love this website and I'm going to recommend it to all my friends.

I write my mistakes on the front of the card, and then on the back I write your corrections.

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So, what I do with the corrections that all of you gave me?


So, what do I do with the corrections that all of you give me? / So, what did I do with the corrections that all of you gave me? So, what do I do with the corrections that all of you give me? / So, what did I do with the corrections that all of you gave me?

So, what do I do with the corrections that all of you gave me? So, what do I do with the corrections that all of you gave me?

After a question word like "who | what | where | when | how," we put the verb right after it. The | means "or."

So, what did I do with the corrections that all of you gave me? So, what did I do with the corrections that all of you gave me?

So, what do I do with the corrections that all of you gave me? So, what do I do with the corrections that all of you gave me?

"What do I do" may be confusing to understand as a sentence structure but think of it this way: "I will do what I want to do" The first 'do' in "what do I do?" corresponds to " I am going to do "-- you are planning to perform / already performing the action The second 'do' in "what do I do?" corresponds to "what I want to do" --it is not the active verb

So, what have I done with all the corrections that all of you’ve gaiven me? So, what have I done with all the corrections that you’ve given me?

Day 7: My First Week of My English Challenge


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I just felt like this would sound better without the repetition of 'my.'

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Wow, definitely this is the longest time that I have been writing in English.


Wow, definitely this is the longest time that I have been writing in English. Wow, definitely this is the longest that I have been writing in English.

"Time" is optional in this sentence but we often omit it in the US.

Wow, this is definitely this is the longest time that I have been ever writingten in English. Wow, this is definitely the longest time that I have been ever written in English.

Wow, this is the definitely this is the longest time that I have been writingten in English daily. Wow, this is the definitely the longest time that I have written in English daily.

Wow, this is definitely this is the longest time that I have been writing in English. Wow, this is definitely the longest time that I have been writing in English.

"definitely" is an adverb, and adverb comes after the verb it is describing ("is")

Wow, this has definitely this isbeen the longest time that I have been writing in English. Wow, this has definitely been the longest time that I have been writing in English.

I'm so thankful with all of you for correcting my posts.


I'm so thankful withto all of you for correcting my posts. I'm so thankful to all of you for correcting my posts.

I'm so thankful withto all of you for correcting my posts. I'm so thankful to all of you for correcting my posts.

"I'm thankful to you for ..." is how we use it.

I'm so thankful withto all of you for correcting my posts. I'm so thankful to all of you for correcting my posts.

I'm so thankful withto all of you for correcting my posts. I'm so thankful to all of you for correcting my posts.

I'm so thankful withfor all of you for correcting my posts. I'm so thankful for all of you for correcting my posts.

I really love this website and I'm going to recommend it to all my friends.


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Well, I make flashcards on anki using "type in the answer" type of cards.


Well, I make flashcards on aAnki using "type in the answer" type of cards. Well, I make flashcards on Anki using "type in the answer" cards.

Well, I make flashcards oin aAnki using "type in the answer" type of cards. Well, I make flashcards in Anki using "type in the answer" type of cards.

"To make cards in Anki" is how we use it in the US. すごい!頭がいいよ!

Well, I makde flashcards oin aAnki using "type in the answer" type of cards. Well, I made flashcards in Anki using "type in the answer" type cards.

Well, I make flashcards on anki using the "type in the answer" type of cards. Well, I make flashcards on anki using the "type in the answer" type of cards.

I use anki for new terms I use in my Langcorrect journals, too! :D

Well, I make flashcards on anki using the "type in the answer" type of cards. Well, I make flashcards on anki using the "type in the answer" type of cards.

I do the exact same thing ! :D

I write my mistakes on the front of the card, and then on the back I write your corrections.


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I write my mistakes on the front of the card, and then, on the back, I write your corrections. I write my mistakes on the front of the card, and, on the back, I write your corrections.

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So, when I'm studying these flashcards, I saw my writing and I have to remember my mistakes and type the correct words.


So, when I'm studying these flashcards, I sawee my writing and I have to remember my mistakes and type the correct words. So, when I'm studying these flashcards, I see my writing and I have to remember my mistakes and type the correct words.

So, when I'm studying these flashcards, I sawee my writing and then I have to remember my mistakes and type the correct words. So, when I'm studying these flashcards, I see my writing and then I have to remember my mistakes and type the correct words.

This is something you do on a regular basis so present tense sounds better.

So, when I'm studying these flashcards, I sawee my (incorrect) writing and I have to remember my mistakes and type the correct words. So, when I'm studying these flashcards, I see my (incorrect) writing and have to remember my mistakes and type the correct words.

So, when I'm studying these flashcards, I sawee my writing and I would have to remember my mistakes and type the correct words. So, when I'm studying these flashcards, I see my writing and I would have to remember my mistakes and type the correct words.

"would" - conditional you have to remember your mistakes under a condition (seeing your writing/ studying these cards)

So, when I'm studying these flashcards, I sawee my writing and I have to remember my mistakes and type the correct wordsversion. So, when I'm studying these flashcards, I see my writing and I have to remember my mistakes and type the correct version.

I think that I learn so much better by this way.


I think that I learn so much better by this way. I think that I learn so much better this way.

I think that I learn so much better by this way. I think that I learn so much better this way.

We don't need the "by" in this sentence. Mistakes are so useful, aren't they? I love my mistakes, too!

I think that I learn so much better by this way. I think that I learn so much better this way.

I think that I learn so much better by this way. I think that I learn so much better this way.

"by" usually used for verbs or certain specific expressions "I exercise better by dancing" "Spread by word of mouth" "compose by ear" You can say "I learn better through this way" or "I learn better using this way"

I think that I learn so much better by this wayusing this method. I think that I learn so much better by using this method.

By the way, I had studied Japanese for three days this week, that's a great advance, too.


By the way, I had studied Japanese for three days this week, and that's a great advancmilestone, too. By the way, I studied Japanese for three days this week, and that's a great milestone, too.

By the way, I had studied Japanese for three days this week, t. That's a great advancebig improvement, too. By the way, I studied Japanese for three days this week. That's a big improvement, too.

You can say "great advance" but we often use "big improvement" in the US. or By the way, I studied Japanese for three days this week. That's quite an advancement, too. よかった!

By the way, I had studied Japanese for three days this week, that' which is a great advance,chievement too. By the way, I studied Japanese for three days this week which is a great achievement too.

By the way, I had studied Japanese for three days this week, t. That's a great advance, too. By the way, I studied Japanese for three days this week. That's a great advance, too.

Had studied = past perfect --> it comes before another past action You don't have a past action that comes after this, so you don't really need past perfect It's not too noticeable of an error so you should still use past perfect to be safe in many cases

By the way, I hadve studied Japanese for three days this week, that's a great advanceI believe that this is a great improvement, too. By the way, I have studied Japanese for three days this week, I believe that this is a great improvement, too.

I realized that I can learn Japanese with my own pace, however.


I realized that I can learn Japanese withat my own pace, however. I realized that I can learn Japanese at my own pace, however.

I realized that I can learn Japanese withat my own pace, however. I realized that I can learn Japanese at my own pace, however.

"At my|her|his|their own pace ..." is how we use it. すごい!

I realized that I can learn Japanese withat my own pace, however. I realized that I can learn Japanese at my own pace, however.

However, I realized that I can learn Japanese withat my own pace, however. However, I realized that I can learn Japanese at my own pace.

No explanation because I think "at my own pace" is just a specific expression like that

I now realized that I can learn Japanese withat my own pace, however. I now realize that I can learn Japanese at my own pace, however.

I'm not going to travel to Japan in the following 3 years, maybe in my third year of college if I have good grades and I have lucky.


I'm not going to travel to Japan in the following 3 years, m. Maybe in my third year of college if I have good grades and I have(I) am lucky. I'm not going to travel to Japan in the following 3 years. Maybe in my third year of college if I have good grades and (I) am lucky.

The original sentence is fine enough for social media / casual texting because people don't always write grammatically separated sentences in that context. They tend to combine them with commas. Generally though, you should separate sentence fragments with some sort of punctuation.

I'm not going to travel to Japan in the following 3next three years, m. Maybe in my third year of college if I have good grades and I have been lucky. I'm not going to travel to Japan in the next three years. Maybe in my third year of college if I have good grades and have been lucky.

This sounds better in two sentences.

I'm not going to travel to Japan in the following 3 years, but maybe in my third year of college if I have good grades and I have luckyget lucky I will. I'm not going to travel to Japan in the following 3 years, but maybe in my third year of college if I have good grades and get lucky I will.

I'm not going to travel to Japan within the followingnext 3 years, maybe in my third year of college if I have good grades and I haveget lucky. I'm not going to travel to Japan within the next 3 years, maybe in my third year of college if I have good grades and I get lucky.

"within" or "in" in the next 3 years all work Following is a bit awkward for how formal it is Get lucky is a specific expression

I'm not going to travel to Japan in the following 3 years, maybe in my third year of college if I have good grades and I haveget lucky. I'm not going to travel to Japan in the following 3 years, maybe in my third year of college if I have good grades and I get lucky.

I understand the direct translation of “tengo suerte”, in English we always say ‘If I am lucky’ ‘I am feeling lucky today’ ‘He is pretty lucky’ etc. !

So, I will put effort into studying Japanese, however, if I have to do something more important some day, I will skip Japanese.


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So, I will put (some) effort into studying Japanese, however,but if I have to do something more important somone day, I will skip Japaneseit. So, I will put (some) effort into studying Japanese, but if I have to do something more important one day, I will skip it.

So, I will put effort into studying Japanese, thowever, if I have to do somethingugh, if there is a day where I have more important some daythings at hand, I will skip Japanese. So, I will put effort into studying Japanese, though, if there is a day where I have more important things at hand, I will skip Japanese.

So, I will put effort into studying Japanese, h. However, if I have to do something more important some days, I will skip Japanese. So, I will put effort into studying Japanese. However, if I have to do something more important some days, I will skip Japanese.

the "day" here is generic, you are not talking about one specific day so "some days"

So, I will put effort into studying Japanese, however, if I have to do something more important some day, I will skip Japanese. So, I will put effort into studying Japanese, however, if I have to do something more important some day, I will skip Japanese.

I require more context; will you stop learning Japanese entirely or take a break?

Thanks Mari for all you corrections and the advices that you have given me.


Thanks, Mari, for all youof the corrections and the advices that you have given me. Thanks, Mari, for all of the corrections and the advice that you have given me.

Thanks, Mari, for all of your corrections and the advices that you have given me. Thanks, Mari, for all of your corrections and the advice that you have given me.

🥹 どういたしまして! ”Advice" is an uncountable noun so the plural form is the same as the singular form.

TMari, thanks Mari for all youthe corrections and the advices that you have given me. Mari, thanks for all the corrections and advice that you have given me.

'Name' followed by comma then thanks makes the thanks more direct to the person you are addressing it to.

Thanks Mari for all your corrections and the advices that you have given me. Thanks Mari for all your corrections and the advice that you have given me.

Thanks Mari for all youthe corrections and the advices that you have given me. Thanks Mari for all the corrections and the advice that you have given me.

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