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kiwy

Sept. 19, 2021

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I like Vacation

I live in the south China, where is so warm. The change of four seasons aren't obvious, most of the time, winter doesn't exist, especially the climate is becoming more and more extreme.
Today is the first day of the Mid-autumn Festival vacation. I went to my brother's home yeaterday. I stayed up late but woke up early. In the morning, the breeze was so soft, and it was cool. It was very comfortable and pleasant. I wanted to feel more about the world.
Unfortunately, it became so hot in the afternoon. It made me very upset. I wanted to nothing. I hated this.
The sun sets earlier and earlier, it does really be autumn. Before it became completely dark, the sky was so blue. The light went through the leaves, they looked yellower in the blue. The breeze showed up again and told you that: you can like the world a little more.
The summer swimming pool will close when September ends. It seems like time flies and we always don't notice. But there is a ruler of time, which is reminding us that: Time flies and never go back.

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I like Vacation

I went to my brother's home yeaterday.

I stayed up late but woke up early.

In the morning, the breeze was so soft, and it was cool.

It was very comfortable and pleasant.

Unfortunately, it became so hot in the afternoon.

It made me very upset.

Before it became completely dark, the sky was so blue.

The summer swimming pool will close when September ends.

Today is the first day of the Mid-autumn Festival vacation.

Unfortunately, it became so hot in the afternoon.

It made me very upset.

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kiwy

Sept. 20, 2021

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Before it became completely dark, the sky was so blue.


Before it became completely dark, the sky was so blue. Before it became completely dark, the sky was blue.

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I like Vacation


I like Vtaking vacations I like taking vacations

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I live in the south China, where is so warm.


I live in the sSouth China, where is sothe weather is typically warm. I live in South China where the weather is typically warm.

I live in the southern China, where is sot is very warm. I live in southern China, where it is very warm.

The change of four seasons aren't obvious, most of the time, winter doesn't exist, especially the climate is becoming more and more extreme.


The change ofshift between the four seasons areisn't obvious, most of the timebut in most cases, winter doesn't exist,; especially when the climate is becoming more and more extremincreasingly severe. The shift between the four seasons isn't obvious, but in most cases, winter doesn't exist; especially when the climate is becoming more increasingly severe.

The chapassinge of the four seasons areisn't obvious, m. Most of the time, winter doesn't exist, especially as the climate is becoming more and more extreme. The passing of the four seasons isn't obvious. Most of the time, winter doesn't exist, especially as the climate is becoming more and more extreme.

Today is the first day of the Mid-autumn Festival vacation.


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Today is the first day of the Mid-autumn Festival vacationbreak. Today is the first day of the Mid-autumn Festival break.

I went to my brother's home yeaterday.


I went to my brother's home yeasterday. I went to my brother's home yesterday.

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I stayed up late but woke up early.


I stayed up late but womanaged to wake up early. I stayed up late but managed to wake up early.

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In the morning, the breeze was so soft, and it was cool.


In the morning, the breeze was so soft, and it was cool. In the morning, the breeze was soft and cool.

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It was very comfortable and pleasant.


It was very comfortable and pleasant. It was comfortable and pleasant.

Keep it simple.

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I wanted to feel more about the world.


I wanted to feel more aboutof the world. I want to feel more of the world.

I feel like you're trying to be poetic here so I tried my best not to change too much of what you were trying to say here.

I wanted to feel more about the world. I wanted to feel more about the world.

Unsure of your meaning here.

Unfortunately, it became so hot in the afternoon.


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It made me very upset.


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I wanted to nothing.


It felt like I wanted to do nothing. It felt like I wanted to do nothing.

I wanted to just do nothing. I wanted to just do nothing.

I hated this.


I hated ithis. I hated it.

I hated ithis. I hated it.

The sun sets earlier and earlier, it does really be autumn.


The sun sets earlier and earlier, it does really be autumnis setting earlier which means autumn is approaching. The sun is setting earlier which means autumn is approaching.

The sun sets earlier and earlier, it does each day, it really beis autumn. The sun sets earlier and earlier each day, it really is autumn.

The light went through the leaves, they looked yellower in the blue.


The Sunlight wentpassed through the leaves, which made theym looked yellower in the bluecolor. Sunlight passed through the leaves which made them look yellow in color.

"light" is too general in this context. I would use "sunlight".

The light went throughilluminated the leaves, they looked yellower inagainst the blue sky. The light illuminated the leaves, they looked yellower against the blue sky.

The breeze showed up again and told you that: you can like the world a little more.


The breeze showed up again and told you that: yousaid: you can have another chan likece to enjoy the world a little more. The breeze showed up again and said: you can have another chance to enjoy the world a little more.

The breeze showtirred up again and told you that: you can like the world a little more again. The breeze stirred up again and told you: you can like the world a little more again.

The summer swimming pool will close when September ends.


The summer swimming pool will close its doors when September comes to an ends. The summer swimming pool will close its doors when September comes to an end.

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It seems like time flies and we always don't notice.


It seems like time flies and we always don't noticenever manage to appreciate it. It seems like time flies and we never manage to appreciate it.

It seems like time flies and we always don'tnever notice. It seems like time flies and we never notice.

But there is a ruler of time, which is reminding us that: Time flies and never go back.


But there is a ruler of in time, which is remindings us thate following: Time flies and never go backover us, but leaves its shadow behind. But there is a rule in time, which reminds us the following: Time flies over us, but leaves its shadow behind.

But there is a ruler of time, which ialways reminding us thats us: Ttime flies, and never goes back. But there is a rule of time, which always reminds us: time flies, and never goes back.

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