Today I woke up at 9:30 am, I washed my face and, brushed my teeth, and then, I ate some fruits like mangoes, papayas and bananas. Today I woke up at 9:30 am, washed my face, brushed my teeth, and then ate some fruits like mangoes, papayas and bananas.

You only have to use I once in a series of actions linked in a single sentence.

Today, I woke up at 9:30 am, I washed my face, and brushed my teeth, t. Then, I ate some fruits like mango, papaya and banana. Today, I woke up at 9:30 am, washed my face, and brushed my teeth. Then, I ate some fruits like mango, papaya and banana.

Today I woke up at 9:30 am, I washed my face and, brushed my teeth, then, I ate some fruits like mango, papaya and banana. Today I woke up at 9:30 am, washed my face, brushed my teeth, then I ate some fruits like mango, papaya and banana.

Sounds more natural

After all of this, I watched an old movie called 'Taxi Driver',." it was interpretated by Robert De Niro, I loved this movie because I am going throuingh a similar situation with my ex girlfriend. After all of this, I watched an old movie called 'Taxi Driver." it was interpreted by Robert De Niro, I love this movie because I am going through a similar situation with my ex girlfriend.

After all of this, I watched an old movie called 'Taxi Driver', it was interpretated byfeatured Robert De Niro,. I loved this movie because I am going throuingh a similar situation with my ex-girlfriend. After all of this, I watched an old movie called 'Taxi Driver', it featured Robert De Niro. I loved this movie because I am going through a similar situation with my ex-girlfriend.

Small vocabulary corrections. Nice job :)

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After all ofwards / After I did thisat, I watched an old movie called 'Taxi Driver', it was interpretated by Robert De Niro, I loved this movie because I am've recently gone throuingh a similar situation with my ex-girlfriend. Afterwards / After I did that, I watched an old movie called 'Taxi Driver', it was interpreted by Robert De Niro, I loved this movie because I've recently gone through a similar situation with my ex-girlfriend.

If you just meant 'girlfriend', then you can say ''I'm going through"

I think ithis movie is a work of art and everyone must to see it almoshould watch it at least once time in their lifves. I think this movie is a work of art and everyone should watch it at least one time in their lives.

I think it is a work of art and everyone must to see it almost once time in their lifves. I think it is a work of art and everyone must to see it almost once time in their lives.

lifes is not a word in english, it should be lives

I think it is a work of art, and everyone must to see it almost once timonce in their lifves. I think it is a work of art, and everyone must see it once in their lives.

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It is --> it's - much more natural

Now, I want to seewatch the second season of 'The Last Oof Us'. Now, I want to watch the second season of 'The Last of Us'.

''Now, I want to see the second season of 'The Last Of Us'.'' This whole sentence is completely fine if, for example, you've just finished the first season of 'The Last of Us' and you're talking to somebody about your experience watching the first season. You might then say ''Now, I want to see the second season''. However if the person doesn't know that I've just finished the first season of The Last of Us, they might assume I mean 'go to the movies to watch the second season' or something similar - that's also a very common usage of the word 'see' (ex. I was planning to go see that new Spiderman movie with Richard, but he cancelled on me last minute). Also 'of' in titles generally isn't capitalized.