Nov. 7, 2025
Have you ever skydived?
I've never skydived in my life. It must be an exhilarating experience. so I would like to try it one day. However I probably can't go through with bungee jump, even if I had a chance. It's amazing there are some people who aren't scared of any thrill.
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It must be an exhilarating experience.,
It must be an exhilarating experience,
However I probably caouldn't go through with a bungee jump, even if I had a chance.
However I probably couldn't go through with a bungee jump, even if I had a chance.
Nov. 8, 2025
Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
I tried to keep the sentences simple this time, so I think I was able to write it a little better.
It must be an exhilarating experience.,
It must be an exhilarating experience,
so I would like to try it one day. so I would like to try it one day.
You can contract "I would" to "I'd"
However, I probably can't go through with bungee jumping, even if I had a chance. However, I probably can't go through with bungee jumping, even if I had a chance.
It's amazing there areat some people who aren't scared of any thrills.
It's amazing that some people aren't scared of any thrills.
Nov. 8, 2025
Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
I tried to keep the sentences simple this time, so I think I was able to write it a little better.
Have you ever skydived?
I've never skydived in my life.
It must be an exhilarating experience, so I would like to try it one day. It must be an exhilarating experience, so I would like to try it one day.
Combine with the next sentence.
so I would like to try it one day.
Combine with the previous sentence.
However I probably caouldn't go through with a bungee jump, even if I had athe chance.
However I probably couldn't go through with a bungee jump, even if I had the chance.
"couldn't" would be more appropriate here to express inability. "couldn't" has more of a nuance of a hypothetical situation, while "can't" is generally used for situations that are currently occurring or will occur
It's amazing that there are some people who aren't scared of any thrill. It's amazing that there are some people who aren't scared of any thrill.
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I know how you feel, heights are scary. I've never skydived and I would probably be terrified.
Nov. 8, 2025
Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
I tried to keep the sentences simple this time, so I think I was able to write it a little better.
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It must be an exhilarating experience. It must be an exhilarating experience, so I would like to try it one day. It must be an exhilarating experience, so I would like to try it one day. Combine with the next sentence.
It must be an exhilarating experience
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so I would like to try it one day.
Combine with the previous sentence. so I would like to try it one day. so I would like to try it one day. You can contract "I would" to "I'd" |
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However I probably can't go through with bungee jump, even if I had a chance.
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It's amazing there are some people who aren't scared of any thrill. It's amazing that there are some people who aren't scared of any thrill. It's amazing that there are some people who aren't scared of any thrill.
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