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University's life is very fun!
I became a university student this spring! I'm learning English, Chinese, and some subjects about society there. I'm enjoying studying because I can learn a lot of things which I didn't know! These days, I like studying prime economy studies very much. Its terms are difficult to understand but it's also fun for me to try to understand the meaning! The life as a university student is busy and hard, but I'll do my best!
今年の春に大学生になりました！大学では、英語や中国語、社会に関することについて勉強しています。知らなかったことを知ることができるので、勉強するのがすごく楽しいです！最近は初級経済学を勉強するのが特に好きです。専門用語は理解するのが難しいのですが、その意味を理解しようとすることも今の私には楽しく感じます！大学生生活は忙しいですし、大変ですが、頑張りたいです！
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University's life is very fun!
University life is very fun!
I became a university student this spring!
I'm learning English, Chinese, and some subjects about society there.
I'm learning English, Chinese, and some subjects about society here.
The original is not wrong, but the rest of your sentences make it seem that you are currently at university so 'here' fits a little better.
I'm enjoying studying because I can learn a lot of things which I didn't know!
These days, I like studying prime economy studies very mucheconomics the most.
These days, I like studying economics the most.
I believe you were trying to show that economics is your favorite subject?
ItsThe terms are difficult to understand but it's also fun for me to try to understand the meaning!
The terms are difficult to understand but it's also fun for me to try to understand the meaning!
Using "understand" twice in the sentence sounds a bit wrong but the grammar is correct. You could replace one occurrence with something like "grasp" or "comprehend".
The lLife as a university student is busy and hard, but I'll do my best!
Life as a university student is busy and hard, but I'll do my best!
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Great job, you write very well. Good luck with your studies!
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Thank you! (*´▽｀*)
同じ表現を一つの文の中で使わない方が良いのですね！これからは気を付けて日記を書きます！
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University's life is very fun!
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I became a university student this spring! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I'm learning English, Chinese, and some subjects about society there.
I'm learning English, Chinese, and some subjects about society The original is not wrong, but the rest of your sentences make it seem that you are currently at university so 'here' fits a little better. |
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I'm enjoying studying because I can learn a lot of things which I didn't know! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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These days, I like studying prime economy studies very much.
These days, I like studying I believe you were trying to show that economics is your favorite subject? |
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Its terms are difficult to understand but it's also fun for me to try to understand the meaning!
Using "understand" twice in the sentence sounds a bit wrong but the grammar is correct. You could replace one occurrence with something like "grasp" or "comprehend". |
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The life as a university student is busy and hard, but I'll do my best!
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