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Today, I listened to a short podcast about divorce.
In the 1990s, in America and Europe, divorce was very common. It was the decade Divorces were the more frequently. About 1 couple in 2 in America and Europe had divorced. However, after this period, the average decrease but it's now in other continents where the divorce is in rise.
A woman talked about her loving situation with her husband. She got married very younger with a man older than her. Therefore, she stayed at home when her husband worked. However, during her 20s, she wanted to back to school. The couple changed their mind and the situation evolved. She wasn't charge to manage lonely the household.
In China, in 2021, they created a month when people have to talk and know if they really want to divorce. Nevertheless, a specialist thought it's not working because the main cause in a divorce is a lack of communication.
Personally, I think it's a good idea anyway although it is not sufficient.
The only bad thing I see in this is that they enforce this month even if you don't want so it's a bit though.
To conclude, I also think the most important in a relation is communication. Communication is important when it goes high in a relation but also when it goes low.
And of course, you have to get married with someone you really love. Not for his/her money, not for his/her appearence, but for his/her personality.
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In the 1990s, in both America and Europe, divorce was very common.
It was the decadeWhat??
Divorces were the more frequently.
About 1 couple in 2 in America and Europe had divorced.Half of the couples divorced in Europe and America.
However, after this period, the average decrease but it's now in other continents where the divorce is in risedivorce is increasing in other countries.
She got married very younger with a man older than her.
Therefore, she stayed at home whilen her husband worked.
However, during her 20s, she wanted to go back to school.
She wasn't charge to manage lonely the household.What
In China, in 2021, they created a month whenre people have to talk and know if they really want totalk about divorce.
Personally, I think it's a good idea anyway although it is not sufficient.
Divorces: why does it they happen?
"Divorces" is the plural form, so the second part of the title should reflect that.
It was the decade where
Ddivorces were the more frequently.
About 1 in 2 couple in 2s in America and Europe had divorced.
However, after this period, the averagte decrease d but now it's now ion other continents where the divorce is in riserate is (on the rise / rising).
She got married very younger with a man older than her.
"younger" is when comparing to something, but although there's an implied comparison to the age that other women marry, since the comparison point isn't stated, it's more natural to use the plain adjective.
"older" on the other hand is fine here since it's comparing her husband to the woman.
Therefore, she stayed at home whilen her husband worked.
However, during her 20s, she wanted to go back to school.
She wasn't charge to manage lonely no longer (tasked/charged) with managing the household.
I don't quite get what the original is trying to say, so this is my best guess.
In China, in 2021, they created a month whenre people have to talk and know if they really want toa divorce.
More natural to talk about "a divorce" as a noun than "to divorce" as an action. Grammatically the original was fine, it's just the way that people normally talk about divorces.
Nevertheless, a specialist thought it's no wasn't working because the main cause inof a divorce is a lack of communication.
The only bad thing I see in this is that they enforce this month even if you don't want it so it's a bit though.
To conclude, I also think the most important thing in a relationship is communication.
Communication is important when it goes highis frequent in a relationship but also when it goes lowbecomes infrequent.
Sort of guessing at your intended meaning here
And of course, you have to get married withto someone you really love.
Divorces: why does it happen?
Today, I listened to a short podcast about divorce.
In the 1990s, in America and Europe, divorce was very common.
It was the decade
Ddivorces were the more frequently.
For the verb were (is), you use frequent instead of frequently. If you want to use frequently, then you could also say "divorces happened more frequently".
About 1 couple in 2 in America and Europe hadin 2 couples divorced.
Simpler way of phrasing this.
However, aAfter this period, the average decrease but it's now ind. However, other continents where the divorce is in risenow experience a rise in divorce rates.
"However" and "but" in the same sentence are repetitive. I also split this into two sentences for easier reading. When talking about an increase in divorce, use the term "divorce rate," as it is the statistical measure of divorce. You wouldn't say "the divorce" when generally talking about divorce.
A woman talked about her loving siturelationship with her husband.
She gotwas married very younger with to a man older than her.
"She got married to" is the expression instead of "with".
Therefore, she stayed at home when her husband worked.
However, during her 20s, she wanted to go back to school.
The couple changed their mind and the situation evolved.
She wasn't charge to manage lonely the household.
I'm not sure what you mean by this sentence. I feel like I'm missing the ending to this story as it ends quite abruptly. Did they divorce? Did they stay together and work through it?
In China, in 2021, they created a month when people have to talk and knowdecide if they really want to divorce.
"Decide" fits the purpose of this sentence better.
Nevertheless, a specialist thought it'said the experiment is not working because the main cause inof a divorce is a lack of communication.
It would be worth it to mention who the specialist is here. Also, it was unclear what "it" meant in the sentence, so I replaced it with "the experiment" since the month for communication between couples is new and therefore an experiment.
Personally, I think it's a good idea anyway although it ismay not be sufficient.
"may not be" introduces it as a possibility, a "maybe it isn't sufficient" instead of a definitive "is not sufficient".
The only bad thing I see indownside to this is that they enforce this month, even if you don't want to participate, so it's a bit though.
Use the phrase "downside to". I added some commas for readability.
To conclude, I also think thecommunication is most important in a relation is communicationship.
"Also" is unnecessary here. This sentence reads better if communication comes first. Another way of saying this is, "I think the most important aspect of a healthy relationship is communication."
Communication is important when it goes highwell in a relationship, but also when it goes lowpoorly.
"High" and "low" aren't usually used in this way when talking about relationships. "Highs and lows" is a saying, but separating them causes confusion. Instead, "well" and "poorly" could be used as adjectives to describe the highs and lows.
And of course, you have to get married withmarry someone you really love.
Not for his/her money, not for his/her appeareance, but for his/her personality.
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Divorces: why does it happen? This sentence has been marked as perfect! Divorces: why do "Divorces" is the plural form, so the second part of the title should reflect that. |
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Today, I listened to a short podcast about divorce. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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In the 1990s, in America and Europe, divorce was very common. This sentence has been marked as perfect! In the 1990s, in both America and Europe, divorce was very common. |
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Divorces were the more frequently.
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About 1 couple in 2 in America and Europe had divorced. About 1 Simpler way of phrasing this. About 1 in 2 couple
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However, after this period, the average decrease but it's now in other continents where the divorce is in rise.
"However" and "but" in the same sentence are repetitive. I also split this into two sentences for easier reading. When talking about an increase in divorce, use the term "divorce rate," as it is the statistical measure of divorce. You wouldn't say "the divorce" when generally talking about divorce. However, after this period, the However, |
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A woman talked about her loving situation with her husband. A woman talked about her loving |
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She got married very younger with a man older than her. She "She got married to" is the expression instead of "with". She got married very young "younger" is when comparing to something, but although there's an implied comparison to the age that other women marry, since the comparison point isn't stated, it's more natural to use the plain adjective. "older" on the other hand is fine here since it's comparing her husband to the woman. She got married very young |
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Therefore, she stayed at home when her husband worked. This sentence has been marked as perfect! Therefore, she stayed at home while Therefore, she stayed at home while |
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However, during her 20s, she wanted to back to school. However, during her 20s, she wanted to go back to school. However, during her 20s, she wanted to go back to school. However, during her 20s, she wanted to go back to school. |
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She wasn't charge to manage lonely the household. She wasn't charge to manage lonely the household. I'm not sure what you mean by this sentence. I feel like I'm missing the ending to this story as it ends quite abruptly. Did they divorce? Did they stay together and work through it? She was I don't quite get what the original is trying to say, so this is my best guess.
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In China, in 2021, they created a month when people have to talk and know if they really want to divorce. In China, in 2021, they created a month when people have to talk and "Decide" fits the purpose of this sentence better. In China, in 2021, they created a month whe More natural to talk about "a divorce" as a noun than "to divorce" as an action. Grammatically the original was fine, it's just the way that people normally talk about divorces. In China, in 2021, they created a month whe |
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Nevertheless, a specialist thought it's not working because the main cause in a divorce is a lack of communication. Nevertheless, a specialist It would be worth it to mention who the specialist is here. Also, it was unclear what "it" meant in the sentence, so I replaced it with "the experiment" since the month for communication between couples is new and therefore an experiment. Nevertheless, a specialist thought it |
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Personally, I think it's a good idea anyway although it is not sufficient. Personally, I think it's a good idea anyway although it "may not be" introduces it as a possibility, a "maybe it isn't sufficient" instead of a definitive "is not sufficient". Personally, I think it's a good idea |
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The only bad thing I see in this is that they enforce this month even if you don't want so it's a bit though. The only Use the phrase "downside to". I added some commas for readability. The only bad thing I see in this is that they enforce this month even if you don't want it so it's a bit t |
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To conclude, I also think the most important in a relation is communication. To conclude, I "Also" is unnecessary here. This sentence reads better if communication comes first. Another way of saying this is, "I think the most important aspect of a healthy relationship is communication." To conclude, I also think the most important thing in a relationship is communication. |
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Communication is important when it goes high in a relation but also when it goes low. Communication is important when it goes "High" and "low" aren't usually used in this way when talking about relationships. "Highs and lows" is a saying, but separating them causes confusion. Instead, "well" and "poorly" could be used as adjectives to describe the highs and lows. Communication is important when it Sort of guessing at your intended meaning here |
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And of course, you have to get married with someone you really love. And of course, you have to And of course, you have to get married |
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Not for his/her money, not for his/her appearence, but for his/her personality. Not for his/her money, not for his/her appear |
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I hope you enjoy reading my text! I hope you enjoyed reading my text! |
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Please tell me how you found my English! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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