Oct. 2, 2021
Diverse Geography of Korea
Korea has a diverse geography.
First, korea has surrounded by three seas, so many beautiful beaches are in Korea.
Many foreigners think , Korea is a peninsula but because of North Korea, we can’t use paths to the continent.
As you know, North and South Korea are still at war.
That’s why we usually say Korea is an island in the continent.
Next, Korea has a lot of mountains that more than 70 percent of land are mountains.
So many Korean have their habit, hicking.
Plus, there are many beautiful streams in the mountains.
I usually go there with my sons in summer and swimming there.
Diverse Geography of Korea
Korea has a diverse geography.
First, kKorea hais surrounded by three seas, so there are many beautiful beaches are in Korea.
Korea is a proper noun and proper nouns should always be capitalized.
Many foreigners think , Korea is a peninsula, but because of North Korea, we can’t use paths toaccess other areas of the continent.
As you know, North and South Korea are still at war.
That’s why we usually say Korea is an island ion the continent.
Use the preposition "on the continent," not "in the continent."
NextSecond, Korea has a lot of mountains that more than 70 percent of land are mountains.
You said "first" above, therefore here it is best to say "second."
So many Korean have their habit, hickings love to hike.
Use the plural - Koreans. If it's singular, it's "a Korean." "Have their habit" doesn't make sense. We have hobbies. Here is it best to say "love to hike." Alternatively, you could say, "Many Koreans enjoy hiking as a hobby."
Plus, there are many beautiful streams in the mountains.
I usually go there with my sons in summer and swimming there.
Oct. 3, 2021
Thank you so much.
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Diverse Geography of Korea This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Korea has a diverse geography. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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First, korea has surrounded by three seas, so many beautiful beaches are in Korea. First, Korea is a proper noun and proper nouns should always be capitalized. |
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Many foreigners think , Korea is a peninsula but because of North Korea, we can’t use paths to the continent. Many foreigners think |
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As you know, North and South Korea are still at war. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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That’s why we usually say Korea is an island in the continent. That’s why we usually say Korea is an island Use the preposition "on the continent," not "in the continent." |
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Next, Korea has a lot of mountains that more than 70 percent of land are mountains.
You said "first" above, therefore here it is best to say "second." |
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So many Korean have their habit, hicking. So many Korean Use the plural - Koreans. If it's singular, it's "a Korean." "Have their habit" doesn't make sense. We have hobbies. Here is it best to say "love to hike." Alternatively, you could say, "Many Koreans enjoy hiking as a hobby." |
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Plus, there are many beautiful streams in the mountains. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I usually go there with my sons in summer and swimming there. I usually go there with my sons in summer and swim |
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